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Tainted Love anonymous August 16 2010, 04:30:58 UTC
This is a placeholder for USUK - Provoking America 2nd fill.
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=40606940#t40606940
Prologue + Part 1: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=49590748#t49590748

reCaptcha: onfills romantica") I don't think so, Captcha.

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Tainted Love 2a/?? anonymous November 25 2010, 14:44:47 UTC
Sorry for the lateness. Writer!anon fails so hard. ;_;

America enjoyed spending time with England. Okay, that might not be the best way to put it, but what else could he say? It’s not like he could go England I happen to enjoy you sputtering. Though after all these times England probably had known already, still it’s not like America would, you know, actually tell him.

He would sometimes drop by, and England would be at home and then they would happen to spend the weekends together. Or for whatever reason England would come to the states, and America would insult those scones he brought, and they’d end up watching movies together with popcorn.

Either way, it might seem improvised, but it’s natural, and America kind of liked it that way. Because it’s not like England was going anywhere; when he did, most of the time it was America dragging him to some place for fun. So he enjoyed England’s company, and England didn’t complain. Well fine maybe he did but when was it that England didn’t ( ... )

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Tainted Love 2b/?? anonymous November 25 2010, 14:46:09 UTC
Canada came to his room near the end of the week, looking worried, “America, did something happen between you and England ( ... )

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Tainted Love 2c/?? anonymous November 25 2010, 14:47:37 UTC
Twenty minutes after Canada left the room, America had finally done changing channels without a remote, and was just about to pick up the phone. He didn’t like being told what to do, and that included things between him and England. Why couldn’t people just...stay out of it? He knew his brother worried about him. And England, probably. Because his bro was nice like that… But this time America had most certainly done nothing wrong. If anything, England was probably having some Splendid-Isolation autistic time, and why was everyone so damn concerned now?

Every time you did something stupid, I get blamed. Those complaints should be filed under your name America. I’m not your front desk of customer service. America smiled a little. Now who was the front deck, he mused. He didn’t remember what he had said to get back at England. It didn’t matter, because he knew he had outspoke England then ( ... )

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Re: Tainted Love 2c/?? anonymous November 25 2010, 15:27:20 UTC
yes an update! Why cut it off there? I can't wait for the confrontation:)

I hope Alfred gets possessive:P

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Re: Tainted Love 2c/?? anonymous November 25 2010, 23:09:27 UTC
Still lovely as always Anon! And don't feel bad about the late updating, we understand. :D

But gah! That cliffy is a killer!

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Re: Tainted Love 2c/?? anonymous November 26 2010, 04:16:24 UTC
This story is wonderful! I like how slow America is to realise things and, like another anon said, I hope he gets possessive.

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Re: Tainted Love 2c/?? anonymous November 26 2010, 10:39:04 UTC
It's okay, writer!anon, as long as you promise to come back. <3 Lovely update, eagerly waiting for more here.

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Tainted Love 3a/10-ish anonymous December 3 2010, 15:06:12 UTC
America wondered why he was here. Standing in the London suburban, he could already tell England wasn't home. The house stood in the darkening evening; no light from any window. He had thought about calling England on the taxi he took after landing. America wasn't sure what had stopped him. He guessed he wanted it to be a surprise ( ... )

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Tainted Love 3b/10-ish anonymous December 3 2010, 15:12:19 UTC
At first America was shocked. He could not believe himself, when he caught some part of him wishing for it to go away, for everything to fall back to normal again. It’s not a phase! He berated himself angrily. And how could you even think that way? He tried to picture England’s reaction when years passed and that someone left him. It made America sick.

Because he knew how bad England was at saying goodbye to the people he loved.

He knew that because he'd proven it. In his own case ( ... )

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Re: Tainted Love 3b/10-ish anonymous December 3 2010, 16:03:42 UTC
You updated! :D Is jumping up and down with glee when I see this updated too dumb? XD But seriously, I'm really enjoying reading this fill; it's so different in tone from the other I can almost forget they're from the same prompt, but I love your take on it! I'm especially liking seeing the introspective side of America, which is pretty rare; heh, and your France is very enigmatic so far. And your England has given up hope so quietly; his bitterness is really subdued from America's POV, and I think that's a really nice touch ( ... )

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Re: Tainted Love 3b/10-ish anonymous December 3 2010, 21:51:26 UTC
I really, REALLY like this story. Keep up the good work, anon.^^

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Re: Tainted Love 3b/10-ish anonymous December 4 2010, 01:47:33 UTC
author!anon~~~

You have no idea how long it has been since I read something that made my heart hurt soooo much~ *_* and I love it!

I like how they seem to act the way they usually do in front of each other. It feels like they want to escape awkwardness and all the strings attached, which gets them nowhere, really.

hoho! I hope America finds the guts to confront England!

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Re: Tainted Love 3b/10-ish anonymous December 4 2010, 15:23:17 UTC
OMGGG!!!

Author!anon, do you know that my heart races each and every time I read your fill????
YOU'RE AWESOME!!!

I love this update a lot~

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Tainted Love Interlude anonymous December 10 2010, 15:22:35 UTC
Thank you for all the lovely comments, anons. You guys asfhklsd;g ♥ ♥ ♥
There was really no use trying to stay angry with America. England had been down that road for so many times he'd lost count. He knew where it was going, but could not, in all his might, stop it from happening. Well, that was the very definition of America, wasn't it ( ... )

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Tainted Love 4a/10-ish anonymous December 10 2010, 15:26:12 UTC
It wasn't like that America didn't have much chance seeing England. In fact, America had, despite the pond between them, excellent chance. England always gave out this no nonsense aura, when he was there at meetings with America's boss, and of course America would be there as well, taking it upon himself to throw England off his serious business ( ... )

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