Before Russia was the big scary rape truck that hetalia says was the USSR, he was a teenager. A creepy, lonely, gawky, big-boned teenager. France comes along and teaches him to love his body.
Something There [pt 9/??]
anonymous
August 19 2010, 05:21:27 UTC
They wandered the palace grounds after they had eaten, France holding Russia’s hand tightly in his own and refusing to let go even when passing servants and courtiers gave them surreptitious glances. Still shy, but not uncomfortably so, Russia showed his visitor the gallery of the royal family portraits, a dainty sitting room painted sunny yellow, a little-used closet where he had found a mother cat and her three kittens the other day, the balconies overlooking the palace courtyard, blanketed in crystalline white snow, where he liked to go look at the flowers in the summer. France assured him he had never seen such a lovely sight outside of Versailles, and that made Russia crack a smile, for Versailles was the most beautiful place he could imagine, and nothing here could hope to compare
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Re: Something There [pt 9/??]
anonymous
August 19 2010, 05:35:50 UTC
Dude. I love these guys almost as much as I love this fic, anon. <3<3<3<3<3
Pfft, I know this is over-analyzing things horribly but: When France said that "he had never seen such a lovely sight outside of Versailles, does that mean that France thinks he's the most beautiful man in the world? ;D Okay, maybe not, but it made me laugh madly. While also going "d'awww" at Russia thinking "Versailles was the most beautiful place he could imagine." <3
Also, France holding Russia's hand as he's dragging him about to see all the sights that a young boy/adult would find interesting is so adorable. XD Especially the place where the cat and her kittens were. Russia, what the hell? <3 I imagine Russia probably has secret little places like that that he adores today, too. And a soft spot for animals and plants. Which are harder to scare away, sometimes. OTL
And dear god, that last line. <3
I kind of like that you're taking it slow. And even if you update at a snail's pace, that is one sexy snail! ... I think that makes your
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Re: Something There [pt 9/??]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 01:41:50 UTC
Well, of course! France thinks he's the most beautiful nation in the world + Russia trying to act like France = France thinking Russia is the second most beautiful nation in the world!
Ah hah hah, I don't know who you are, but I really appreciate your comments. They make my life. I always feel like I'm subconsciously projecting my own loneliness and uncertainty on Russia while writing this, though I try not to. At least Russia gets a happy ending, eventually...
Something There [pt 10/??]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 05:34:30 UTC
It had crossed his mind that perhaps he should not have suggested this activity, but France was determined to join him despite his inexperience, and Russia could not say no, not when the rest of him wanted desperately to say yes. So that was how they ended up on outside the palace, Russia standing at the edge of a frozen pond, France still far from shore
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Re: Something There [pt 10/??]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 14:48:11 UTC
Lovely as always. Like other anons have said, I'm glad you're building this slowly... the process is quite enjoyable, and much more realistic. And the characterization is wonderful; poor, insecure Russia, I just want to give him hundreds of hugs! But France will take care of that eventually, I'm sure :)
Re: Something There [pt 10/??]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 16:39:15 UTC
I did a little happy dance when I saw this update ;P
Of course he would, Russia thought, but he did not mind France sighing happily and burrowing into his arms. He loved this warm, cozy feeling, from being with someone who enjoyed his company, who wanted to touch and hug and kiss him all the time, who treated him like a friend and not like a monster or chattel or worse.
So cute~ And you remind me everytime why I love Frussia <3
Re: Something There [pt 10/??]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 17:14:51 UTC
Russia tried to convince his guest that he needed a warm room and some hot coffee more than he needed a possibly fatal romp in the snow. France: disregarding safety for the sake of sex since the Ancien Régime.
Before Russia was the big scary rape truck that hetalia says was the USSR, he was a teenager. A creepy, lonely, gawky, big-boned teenager. France comes along and teaches him to love his body.
parts 1 - 4 here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11813.html?thread=34306853#t34306853
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You are doing great, authoranon! ♥
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Pfft, I know this is over-analyzing things horribly but: When France said that "he had never seen such a lovely sight outside of Versailles, does that mean that France thinks he's the most beautiful man in the world? ;D Okay, maybe not, but it made me laugh madly. While also going "d'awww" at Russia thinking "Versailles was the most beautiful place he could imagine." <3
Also, France holding Russia's hand as he's dragging him about to see all the sights that a young boy/adult would find interesting is so adorable. XD Especially the place where the cat and her kittens were. Russia, what the hell? <3 I imagine Russia probably has secret little places like that that he adores today, too. And a soft spot for animals and plants. Which are harder to scare away, sometimes. OTL
And dear god, that last line. <3
I kind of like that you're taking it slow. And even if you update at a snail's pace, that is one sexy snail! ... I think that makes your ( ... )
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Ah hah hah, I don't know who you are, but I really appreciate your comments. They make my life. I always feel like I'm subconsciously projecting my own loneliness and uncertainty on Russia while writing this, though I try not to. At least Russia gets a happy ending, eventually...
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Of course he would, Russia thought, but he did not mind France sighing happily and burrowing into his arms. He loved this warm, cozy feeling, from being with someone who enjoyed his company, who wanted to touch and hug and kiss him all the time, who treated him like a friend and not like a monster or chattel or worse.
So cute~ And you remind me everytime why I love Frussia <3
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France: disregarding safety for the sake of sex since the Ancien Régime.
This is so lovely, anon ♥
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This is an epic story since we see all these things that we usually dont@
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Well, it was not that important, whatever it was. /runs away in embarrassment
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