fem!Greece/fem!Japan - cute flirting
anonymous
July 19 2010, 02:53:47 UTC
Because their genderbent selves are just so damn cute (proof at http://i25.tinypic.com/2qcmbdt.jpg), and my headcanon dictates fem!Greece as somewhat more openly catlike and flirtatious and fem!Japan as somewhat more openly shy.
More specifically, fem!Greece flirting with her good but shy best friend fem!Japan and the latter not quite knowing how to react.
Bonus: Japan eventually gets over her shyness and flirts right back to Greece. And does it very effectively. Bonus 2: It leads to hot girl-on-girl action.
Try not to think about it - 1/3
anonymous
August 17 2010, 04:39:49 UTC
Alternate title: "It just kept raining while I wrote this."
She was doing it again. Japan was acutely aware of the fact that her friend, Greece, was leaning on her shoulder, eyes closed tiredly. Again.Swallowing nervously the small nations rolled her shoulders in an attempt to remove Greece, to no avail. “Um, Greece-san... Must you lean on my shoulder that way
( ... )
Try not to think about it - 2/3
anonymous
August 17 2010, 04:42:28 UTC
“Is it good?” the nation asked as Japan chewed and swallowed. When the Asian nodded politely however, Greece grinned and ruffled Japan’s hair. “I’m glad you like it,” she said before wrapping her arm around Japan’s small shoulders, apparently oblivious to the way the Asian nation stiffened.
Okay, that had to be on purpose.
Then, to make matters worse, Greece glanced over at her, then reached over and brushed her fingers against Japan’s face.
“You have some tzatziki on your face,” she explained before licking the sauce of her fingers, only to put the know Japan bit her lip, but tried not to react other than that, and tried not to think about how warm the nations fingers felt across her cheek.
It doesn’t mean anything, she thought nervously. She’s just more tactile than I’m used to. Nothing more than that.But Greece’s fingers stayed on her face, and green eyes locked on her. “Your skin’s very soft,” purred the brunette nation. “And your face is really pretty also
( ... )
Re: Try not to think about it - 3/3
anonymous
August 17 2010, 04:44:59 UTC
Japan didn't know what provoked her to do what she did next. Maybe the pressure made her delirious as well as tired. Maybe she had just spent to much time around flirty Greece. Maybe she agreed that she was too shy
( ... )
Re: Try not to think about it - 3/3
anonymous
August 17 2010, 06:52:34 UTC
OH HELL yes that was adorable. No. Seriously. Exactly what I needed. You managed to keep the same Giripan relationship dynamics, the thing that made me fall in love with this pairing in the first place - but at the same time, these fem charas have slightly different personalities, different moods. I LIKE it.
OP doesn't see any fail here!
anonymous
August 17 2010, 16:43:44 UTC
The above anon has already said everything I wanted to say about this fill. These are the kind of characterizations I look for in good genderbent fics - the characters are recognizably themselves at the core, but with subtle differences to them linked to their gender. Greece is more openly flirtatious and Japan more openly shy, but they're still Greece and Japan, and they're still utterly adorable together.
There's just one thing I'm confused about, though:
she explained before licking the sauce of her fingers, only to put the know Japan bit her lip
It seems like something was deleted after "know." Other than that, I really liked this fill, anon. :)
Re: OP doesn't see any fail here!
anonymous
August 19 2010, 00:48:10 UTC
Author!Anon here.
I'm sooooo glad you like it. Especially the characterizations, I was really hoping to do well on that.
As for that typo... Maybe it's cause I'm overtired today, but I honestly have no idea what I was trying to say there. Weird. Maybe random words just got added in... Thanks for pointing that out.
More specifically, fem!Greece flirting with her good but shy best friend fem!Japan and the latter not quite knowing how to react.
Bonus: Japan eventually gets over her shyness and flirts right back to Greece. And does it very effectively.
Bonus 2: It leads to hot girl-on-girl action.
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She was doing it again. Japan was acutely aware of the fact that her friend, Greece, was leaning on her shoulder, eyes closed tiredly. Again.Swallowing nervously the small nations rolled her shoulders in an attempt to remove Greece, to no avail. “Um, Greece-san... Must you lean on my shoulder that way ( ... )
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Okay, that had to be on purpose.
Then, to make matters worse, Greece glanced over at her, then reached over and brushed her fingers against Japan’s face.
“You have some tzatziki on your face,” she explained before licking the sauce of her fingers, only to put the know Japan bit her lip, but tried not to react other than that, and tried not to think about how warm the nations fingers felt across her cheek.
It doesn’t mean anything, she thought nervously. She’s just more tactile than I’m used to. Nothing more than that.But Greece’s fingers stayed on her face, and green eyes locked on her. “Your skin’s very soft,” purred the brunette nation. “And your face is really pretty also ( ... )
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There's just one thing I'm confused about, though:
she explained before licking the sauce of her fingers, only to put the know Japan bit her lip
It seems like something was deleted after "know." Other than that, I really liked this fill, anon. :)
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I'm sooooo glad you like it. Especially the characterizations, I was really hoping to do well on that.
As for that typo... Maybe it's cause I'm overtired today, but I honestly have no idea what I was trying to say there. Weird. Maybe random words just got added in... Thanks for pointing that out.
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