A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [1/?]
anonymous
July 25 2010, 19:48:43 UTC
I kind of took the 'who's getting a lot (someone unexpected?)' and 'who sleeps around' and ran with it. I have been writing a few good solid hours straight. Writer!Anon is just hoping her smut isn't too terrible or anything. I do have the rest of the days planned out but figured I'd post them up as I write. XD Esmaspäev is Estonian for Monday, Teisipäev is Tuesday, etcetc. Pairings so far: Estonia/Ukraine, Estonia/America
Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [3/?]
anonymous
July 25 2010, 19:51:24 UTC
“I'll never back down to filthy commie scum like you.” Alfred spits, fire in his hardened blue gaze. Eduard knows that this is his cue, and he removes the leather crop to strike it down against the American's shoulder, hitting him hard
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Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [3/?]
anonymous
July 25 2010, 19:53:02 UTC
“Are you liking this?” Eduard asks, even though he fully knows the answer. He can feel that the other man's flesh is starting to get hard, and he gives the American a confident grin. Alfred's face turns ablaze with red, too ashamed to properly answer. The cool feeling of the fabric against him was enough to bring him to full hardness, especially with the way Eduard lightly danced it around his length
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Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [5/?](oops ;; )
anonymous
July 25 2010, 19:54:48 UTC
After all, he knows the place that makes the all-American boy start writhing and gasping so well. The Estonian starts stroking and stimulating him, sliding another finger in to join the other as he presses and does his job so well that Alfred lets out a strangled mewl as he pushes his hips back against the fingers
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Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [6/?]
anonymous
July 25 2010, 19:55:34 UTC
But the ages stamped on their passports by their bosses means nothing to him. The only relevant thing to Eduard is the fact that now as he wraps a hand firmly around the American's dick, changing his thrusts to a slower pace, that the other won't so easily outlast him. Alfred gives a loud moan in pleasure at the feeling, thrusting his own hips madly back against Eduard's hand that insists in a way that he needs it
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Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [6/?]
anonymous
July 27 2010, 01:05:20 UTC
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Wow anon, you don't know how incredibly awesome this is. I could see the Estonia/Ukraine thing happening, but the second one. Wow. I would have never thought of Estonia being used as a replacement that way. Though it's my headcanon that America does like to sub.
I feel so bad for Eduard. D: He's just a replacement for people who can't get what they want. Second-best.
Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [6/?]
anonymous
July 27 2010, 02:14:34 UTC
Author!Anon here.
Thank you very much for thinking it's awesome! Well, what actually happened was someone suggested Alfred to me when I asked a random character. And for the fic, I kind of wanted to have the topping/bottoming even so Al just got stuck that way.
..I didn't even realize it was that dark really. xD; It gets a bit better, promise.
Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [6/?]
anonymous
July 27 2010, 02:38:23 UTC
Awww... he is a replacement, isn't he? Oh well, I'm pretty sure Greece wasn't using him to replace anyone, because if Greece wants that person he can just get THAT person.
Re: A Week In the Sexual Life of Estonia [6/?]
anonymous
July 27 2010, 03:35:27 UTC
Oh damn, I love both of these; this is my favorite thing ever: a really, really good character-based piece. With bonus smut. The substitution thing is a little bit dark, a little bit depressing, but you make it work, my dear. And oh god, submissive!America. My head-canon and kink all at once. <3
Did I mention I love your characterization? Because I'm going to come back and wax poetic, seriously. But god, must sleep. If I can after having my kinks (literal and figurative) indulged like that.
Oh wow. Firstly, love the Estonian words for the days, and Ukraine was sexy. The Estonia/America section was fantastic. The replacement situation... and what Estonia is getting out of it, and what America is getting out of it, and why America would pick Estonia. It makes so much sense!
You have a great way with Estonia, your characterisation is fantastic. You're giving him a full character, rather than what we usually get which is just 'nice computer geek'. Also liked the way you compared them as teenagers.
Loved this bit: "It's now that the teenager begins to ramble off in Russian, words that his companion doesn't even know but still gets off on. Unknowingly to him, Eduard's telling him how stupid he is, how ashamed he should be that he'd get off on something like this, how much of a slut he has to be to have a dedicated relationship while doing this and how low he must think of Eduard to have had the gall to suggest paying him..." Oh, Estonia. Oh, America.
Thank you so much for filling. Looking forward to more! :D
I have been writing a few good solid hours straight. Writer!Anon is just hoping her smut isn't too terrible or anything. I do have the rest of the days planned out but figured I'd post them up as I write. XD
Esmaspäev is Estonian for Monday, Teisipäev is Tuesday, etcetc.
Pairings so far: Estonia/Ukraine, Estonia/America
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Wow anon, you don't know how incredibly awesome this is. I could see the Estonia/Ukraine thing happening, but the second one. Wow. I would have never thought of Estonia being used as a replacement that way. Though it's my headcanon that America does like to sub.
I feel so bad for Eduard. D: He's just a replacement for people who can't get what they want. Second-best.
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Thank you very much for thinking it's awesome! Well, what actually happened was someone suggested Alfred to me when I asked a random character. And for the fic, I kind of wanted to have the topping/bottoming even so Al just got stuck that way.
..I didn't even realize it was that dark really. xD; It gets a bit better, promise.
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Did I mention I love your characterization? Because I'm going to come back and wax poetic, seriously. But god, must sleep. If I can after having my kinks (literal and figurative) indulged like that.
So much love, anon. Seriously. <3
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It's different from the usual Estonia fics I've seen.
I'll be looking forward to the continuation.
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You have a great way with Estonia, your characterisation is fantastic. You're giving him a full character, rather than what we usually get which is just 'nice computer geek'. Also liked the way you compared them as teenagers.
Loved this bit:
"It's now that the teenager begins to ramble off in Russian, words that his companion doesn't even know but still gets off on. Unknowingly to him, Eduard's telling him how stupid he is, how ashamed he should be that he'd get off on something like this, how much of a slut he has to be to have a dedicated relationship while doing this and how low he must think of Eduard to have had the gall to suggest paying him..." Oh, Estonia. Oh, America.
Thank you so much for filling. Looking forward to more! :D
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