Drabble of no name and account
anonymous
September 10 2010, 22:02:32 UTC
France smiled pleasantly when King Frederick turned his attentions fully to him. He submitted to the cool, calm assessment and even preened a little in it. Despite the king’s controlled air, he had just the smallest, slightest hint of- trepidation? Admiration? Perhaps a strange mixture of both. It made France preen all the more and wish that he had worn his peacock feather trimmed hat for the day, if only to make the image better.
Frederick II tilted his head slightly and said in exquisite French that made France almost writhe on the spot, “A pleasure to meet you, Monsieur.” Glorious
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anonymous
September 10 2010, 22:28:57 UTC
You fail nothing, this is excellent and made me burst out laughing more than three times. And such a short fill! could we perhaps, kind anonymous author, get some of the aftermath of this? especially of the France/Fritz variety
Your France is fantastic, but I have to congratulate you on your Fritz. Bosses are hard to write, and Fritz is usually only used as a comedic old man who's bff with Prussia. This...this short fill did him much more justice ^^
Frederick II tilted his head slightly and said in exquisite French that made France almost writhe on the spot, “A pleasure to meet you, Monsieur.” Glorious.
This was funny, but oddly enough, very sexy too. I can totally imagine that as France's reaction when he hears someone speaking his language perfectly like thatXD
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anonymous
September 11 2010, 00:06:51 UTC
*dies*. Fabulous. France's peacock feather trimmed hat... His nearly autosexual fetish for his own language... Hilarious, and spot-on.
The slightest blush crossed his face, rosiest on his pronounced ears. It made him all the more attractive, really.
The human touch here-- blushing on the ears-- is wonderful! I'm so glad you didn't try to make him pretty... and that France finds that alluring after Versailles (even he could get burned out on glamor after all that).
“Hands off, fucking pervert!”
Oh yeah, Fritz, Prussia wants you. You better watch your ass, with those two xD.
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anonymous
September 11 2010, 00:09:29 UTC
Also, this shines a whole new light on Napoleon telling his troops to take off their hats at Frederick the Great's tomb. (Oh man, Napoleon/France. You know they were bangin' it.)
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anonymous
September 11 2010, 13:42:23 UTC
OH AUTHORNON. YOU CAN'T SEE MY FACE BUT I ASSURE YOU, I'M GRINNING. SO WIDE IT'S HURTING MY CHEEKS.
Glorious indeed! So... many... lines... to quote.... Well others already said a few. I'll settle for this: "A good regimen of equestrian arts really did wonders-" *splits her face with all the grinning*
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anonymous
September 12 2010, 09:31:43 UTC
fail at humor? Fffft, this is brilliant! The historical details, the feel of it, and the dry, intelligent humor all work very well. Amazing microfilll, anon!
Old Fritz said that France groped his ass too. I want to see it. Make it cracky and lolzy, with lots of facepalming and shocked faces. :D
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Frederick II tilted his head slightly and said in exquisite French that made France almost writhe on the spot, “A pleasure to meet you, Monsieur.” Glorious ( ... )
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How can the writing of something so short sound so strangely familiar? XD
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Your France is fantastic, but I have to congratulate you on your Fritz. Bosses are hard to write, and Fritz is usually only used as a comedic old man who's bff with Prussia. This...this short fill did him much more justice ^^
Frederick II tilted his head slightly and said in exquisite French that made France almost writhe on the spot, “A pleasure to meet you, Monsieur.” Glorious.
This was funny, but oddly enough, very sexy too. I can totally imagine that as France's reaction when he hears someone speaking his language perfectly like thatXD
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The slightest blush crossed his face, rosiest on his pronounced ears. It made him all the more attractive, really.
The human touch here-- blushing on the ears-- is wonderful! I'm so glad you didn't try to make him pretty... and that France finds that alluring after Versailles (even he could get burned out on glamor after all that).
“Hands off, fucking pervert!”
Oh yeah, Fritz, Prussia wants you. You better watch your ass, with those two xD.
So saving this. <3!
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Glorious indeed! So... many... lines... to quote.... Well others already said a few. I'll settle for this: "A good regimen of equestrian arts really did wonders-" *splits her face with all the grinning*
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PrussiaxFritz = so canon.
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That is all.
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