Step bros AU - USUK
anonymous
August 15 2010, 16:06:11 UTC
Alright, I once read this manga, but I forgot what it was called....
Arthur, sophomore, is getting some new siblings! Step siblings, and he's pretty excited (Hidden of course) seeing as he won't be alone anymore. So then comes in 12 year old Alfred, and Arthur simply adores him, that is, until he's cornered by the 12 year old, and kissed thoroughly. Thus beginning the molestation of Arthur by sweet little Alfred who steadly grows biigger and taller as the years go by. Also, maybe Alfred has seen Arthur before they were step brothers? Happy end please?
So yes, it's basically HiddenPervertedKid!Alfred x ConfusedTeenager!Arthur
Bonus: - One look of Alfreds puppy dog look, Arthur always forgives him.Always.
- Wakes up with hickeys on his thighs, and chest every few days.
- Arthur gets a boyfriend, and Alfie is PISSED. Arthur also confides in, Kiku and France.
Pretty Please [Prologue]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 08:41:10 UTC
So busy, orz orz. Here’s the prologue, and me letting the OP know that I’m still working on this. I promise a longer update later after I’ve had some sleep and done some of my massive pile of homework :D[Prologue
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Pretty Please [Prologue II]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 08:47:31 UTC
“He’s bringing the boys over this weekend,” she chirped happily, excitement lining her voice. “I thought maybe you could leave school early this Friday to help me cook dinner. I want your first meeting to be perfect
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Re: Pretty Please [Prologue II]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 15:21:55 UTC
Oh god, this starts off so deceptively sweet; I mean, I'm sure it's not going to end tragically or something, but his mother is so sweet and his weakness for cute children is so adorable ... And then he gets Alfred and Mattie. XD I dunno how you're gonna characterize Mattie, but Alfred's got to be an awesome, devious little shit. :D P-poor Arthur. XD
And I love his mental reaction of "An American? D: ... Well, at least they're not French. *sneer*" <3
Re: Pretty Please [Prologue II]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 17:22:38 UTC
Oh wow, this has a great start. It really sets a nice mood, so it'll be interesting to see how Arthur reacts when Alfred starts... Doing stuff with him.
Did you post this on the fills list, by any chance?
Pretty Please [1/?]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 23:13:22 UTC
Alfred turned out to be more yandere than I originally planned this fill could possibly get dangerous so, um, yeah. He’s a devious little shit.Friday arrived all too soon for Arthur
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Pretty Please [2/?]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 23:14:42 UTC
Bloody bastard acted as if Arthur had willingly kissed him. As if! And to top it off, the stupid sod had the actual gall to cop a feel! If that didn’t warrant immediate death then there truly was no justice in the world
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Pretty Please [3/?]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 23:16:59 UTC
“There’s nothing wrong with the English!” Arthur huffed, quite affronted. The little monster’s personality didn’t match his cute face, he thought sourly. “We’re perfect gentlemen I’ll have you know
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Re: Pretty Please [3/?]
anonymous
September 6 2010, 23:25:35 UTC
Ah, I was right! He really was a devious little shit. And a "criminally cute" one, too? ... Arthur is so fucking doomed. XD And he already has to deal with Francis (and their UST) and the Bad Friends Trio. OTL
God, and he's his normal pushy self, too. Bonus points for being able to work in the "I won't accept any complaints" thing, anon. <3
Pfft, and that last line? I'm willing to bet that that's the world's biggest understatement. Although Mattie will at least be a little better ... maybe?
But little monsters are so adorable when they're somebody else's siblings!
Oh wait, burning question! How old are Alfred, Mattie, and Arthur again?
Re: Author!Anon
anonymous
September 7 2010, 00:26:27 UTC
Oh, dude, I thought Alfred was younger. Whew, good to know! 'Cause I was afraid he was going to be two or three years younger than that (to start with), just because he was such a demanding little brat. XDDD Although now that I think about it, twelve year olds actually are that bratty in real life; I've just gotten bad at judging kids' ages in real life. Ah, I think Arthur sounds just right for that age, doesn't he? I mean, you have to take his "stuffy old fart" thing into account sometimes, but his age seems quite apparent when he's around France, for instance. I adore that scene. :)
That's why I've sworn off children of my own but still hope my siblings have kids someday; that way, I can be the cool not-parent who plays with them and gives them advice and gifts, but I can still send them home to be hyper elsewhere once I've given them loud toys and tons of sugary candy. ... My siblings will probably kill me some day, yeah? OTL
Arthur, sophomore, is getting some new siblings! Step siblings, and he's pretty excited (Hidden of course) seeing as he won't be alone anymore. So then comes in 12 year old Alfred, and Arthur simply adores him, that is, until he's cornered by the 12 year old, and kissed thoroughly. Thus beginning the molestation of Arthur by sweet little Alfred who steadly grows biigger and taller as the years go by. Also, maybe Alfred has seen Arthur before they were step brothers? Happy end please?
So yes, it's basically HiddenPervertedKid!Alfred x ConfusedTeenager!Arthur
Bonus:
- One look of Alfreds puppy dog look, Arthur always forgives him.Always.
- Wakes up with hickeys on his thighs, and chest every few days.
- Arthur gets a boyfriend, and Alfie is PISSED. Arthur also confides in, Kiku and France.
God I'm goin' to hell...
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And I love his mental reaction of "An American? D: ... Well, at least they're not French. *sneer*" <3
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Did you post this on the fills list, by any chance?
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God, and he's his normal pushy self, too. Bonus points for being able to work in the "I won't accept any complaints" thing, anon. <3
Pfft, and that last line? I'm willing to bet that that's the world's biggest understatement. Although Mattie will at least be a little better ... maybe?
But little monsters are so adorable when they're somebody else's siblings!
Oh wait, burning question! How old are Alfred, Mattie, and Arthur again?
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Haha Matty is, well, yeah. And ffff too true! I like them when they're somebody else's problem too /shot
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That's why I've sworn off children of my own but still hope my siblings have kids someday; that way, I can be the cool not-parent who plays with them and gives them advice and gifts, but I can still send them home to be hyper elsewhere once I've given them loud toys and tons of sugary candy. ... My siblings will probably kill me some day, yeah? OTL
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