England realizing he is in love with Colony!America.
anonymous
August 15 2010, 23:24:06 UTC
I want when America was still a British colony and a little kid for England to realize his love for him isn’t like a fathers is and that he is starting to lust for his little colony. I want England to be totally disgusted with himself. I want angst. I want him to be struggling with what he wants and he knows is right. I do not want shota, by all means if you do part of the story in the future where America is an adult and they do something but not when he is a kid or a teen.
Cemel Dosce [1a/?]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 19:01:28 UTC
AN: I apologize to OP if this is not what you wanted! I just started writing and couldn't bring myself to stop. Also, sorry for my poor English. Simply the intro, Alfred and Arthur will interact more later~ Throughout life, many desire things that seem unobtainable and when this dream seems too distant for fingertips to graze, the desire dwindles to a low simmer. It is such as a homeless man desires riches, yet simply loses hope for they were never meant to be more than the street filth of a city
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Re: Cemel Dosce [1b/?]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 19:07:23 UTC
It was years upon years, a cycle that Arthur had grown used to though was slowly growing to despise more and more. Alfred had grown, now appearing to be more than an infant and so close to starting puberty yet he was still so young, so innocent, still his. The boy was growing rowdy, more adventurous, desiring to explore more of himself, more of his land…his people
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Re: Cemel Dosce [1b/?]
anonymous
August 31 2010, 01:16:08 UTC
Lovely, simply lovely! I hope you will write more, author anon. Don't worry about your English, either-you write better than most people in my English 100 class. That's a college class, and I live in California. So, bottom line, don't worry about it.
Re: Cemel Dosce [1a/?]
anonymous
August 20 2010, 19:08:42 UTC
Don't worry about your English, anon; it's actually quite good, and the story looks excellent so far! I can already tell it's going to break my heart, too. And your title is very clever. :D
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This was...amazing and it's only the beginning. Wow.
Your english is great and everything else. Wow.
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I'm glad that you like it so far and thanks, I'm always uncertain about it.
I'll update as soon as I get over this horrid fever.
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