Rosa Prologue/?
anonymous
September 7 2010, 20:34:54 UTC
It was no secret among the nations that North American was just odd. Not only were the three nations of North America so closely tied together, that to hit one, was to make the other two bleed in sympathy, but they had ideas
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The United Nations had many secrets. One of the best kept from the general public was the personification of every nation on the planet. However, one of the worst kept secrets in the United Nations was the United States of America's unrequited lust (or love) for one United Kingdom
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Alfred eyed the cup of tea with a sense of foreboding. This had to work - he'd gotten the tea fresh that morning, it was Earl Grey, the scones were fresh, and he'd made sure to get to the meeting early enough to beat Arthur
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But most of all, Alfred wanted to see the blond Englishman beneath him, gasping and begging as Alfred licked and kissed and sucked and bit every piece of skin he could reach. He wanted to see the endless green eyes go dark with want and liquid with desire for him
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Alfred was glaring at him again. Nervously Arthur checked his notes, straightened his shirt, lifted his chin and glared right back. He had been the British Empire, thank you very much, and he would not be intimidated by an upstart nation. Except when he was in his dreams, but who could know about that
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Dude, this looks so fantastic; this world feels so rich and well thought-out, and it's incredibly believable. And even knowing England's pessimism, obliviousness, and ability to accidentally crush America's overtures and affections, I seriously didn't expect his theory about America's actions to be so epically wrong. OTL I mean, maybe I should have, but DAMN! (Oblivious, mutually "unrequited" love has never been done better than by this pairing. OTL)
Ah, and all the teasing hints of amazing hotness; I'd complain that you were being a tease, but you're building tension too expertly for me to believe I'm going to be let down! <3 Also, characterization, hell yeah. :D
Oh dear, I forgot to ask: What wildflowers did America make the mistake of sending England? I'm terribly curious, now, but I don't know what wildflowers grow in America. *is ignorant*
The world you just introduced us to is so... beautiful? so rich! I'm really looking forward to knowing more about it.
And Mexican!anon here who normally doesn't like her country as a woman LOVES your characterization of her. And Cara? mm interesting name choice, specially because it's spelled with a "C" which is right don't get me wrong, but is far less common than with "K" *_*
Hmmm if Arthur doesnt want to beg...and America wants him no matter what perhaps they can switch positions? wouldnt that be a surprised XDD and dont we all love pirate england?
Re: Rosa Prologue 2b/4
anonymous
September 10 2010, 05:06:55 UTC
"Do you need to use the safe word little one," he murmured into the sweat soaked hair. His hand traveled down Arthur's neck to the clamped nipple. "Or do you want more?"
A low laugh from the tanned blond nation. "I think he wants more."
Their eyes, pale violet and sky blue met, and without words they came to an understanding. His hand plucked and twisted the clamp free just as the other nation dripped a bit of wax on Arthur's most sensitive bits. The resulting shriek as they watched, greedy, as Arthur nearly bent in two despite the his restraints and a hard groan ripped itself from two throats as they watched the desperate Englishman.
"More, more, I need.."
The choked words did much to warm him up. It was always good to be appreciated. "Perhaps we should give our little one what he wants, da?" Ivan's smiled at his counterpart super power. "It isn't polite to tease so."
Re: Rosa Prologue 2c/4
anonymous
September 10 2010, 05:09:01 UTC
Arthur twitched as his formerly ordered, neat, and functioning as planned meeting went to hell around him. Next to Francis and Matthew (for all that he sometimes forgot Matthew, but how could he forget his most loyal colony now?) sat Gilbert,. who was out right laughing and egging Alfred and Yao on
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Have some eternal love? :D
anonymous
September 10 2010, 13:06:37 UTC
God, I love this world so much; it's amazing that you guys are spending this much time on world-building, back-story, and characterization, seriously. <3 I'm also loving all the tiny details, like the reinforced desk; I'd wonder why Himaruya doesn't have America break them in canon, but I guess that would take too much time for four-panel comics and five-minute episodes. Alas.
D-dammit, Ivan's fantasies are such a tease. *wipes away a tear of lust* Not that sharing Arthur with Ivan is anywhere near the top of Alfred's list, but damn would they be a formidable pair! Even with no apparent experience on Alfred's part. OTL
Around him, as he sat thinking, the room descended into the normal chaos of a UN meeting, as Alfred and Yao turned a meeting on fixing the global greenhouse effect into a pitched battle over global debts. This is only slightly less civilized than real UN meeting, you know, and possibly more useful. :'D
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Re: Rosa Prologue 2d/4
anonymous
September 10 2010, 17:16:42 UTC
Excitement. I kind of really want America to be a switch now. And RussiaUSUK is my total OT3. So this is really awesome so far. Altho it seems a little odd that it was England with a gun as opposed to some of the more gun happy nations
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Ah, and all the teasing hints of amazing hotness; I'd complain that you were being a tease, but you're building tension too expertly for me to believe I'm going to be let down! <3 Also, characterization, hell yeah. :D
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The world you just introduced us to is so... beautiful? so rich! I'm really looking forward to knowing more about it.
And Mexican!anon here who normally doesn't like her country as a woman LOVES your characterization of her. And Cara? mm interesting name choice, specially because it's spelled with a "C" which is right don't get me wrong, but is far less common than with "K" *_*
Will wait patiently till you update <3
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A low laugh from the tanned blond nation. "I think he wants more."
Their eyes, pale violet and sky blue met, and without words they came to an understanding. His hand plucked and twisted the clamp free just as the other nation dripped a bit of wax on Arthur's most sensitive bits. The resulting shriek as they watched, greedy, as Arthur nearly bent in two despite the his restraints and a hard groan ripped itself from two throats as they watched the desperate Englishman.
"More, more, I need.."
The choked words did much to warm him up. It was always good to be appreciated. "Perhaps we should give our little one what he wants, da?" Ivan's smiled at his counterpart super power. "It isn't polite to tease so."
Alfred's blinding grin showed as -
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D-dammit, Ivan's fantasies are such a tease. *wipes away a tear of lust* Not that sharing Arthur with Ivan is anywhere near the top of Alfred's list, but damn would they be a formidable pair! Even with no apparent experience on Alfred's part. OTL
Around him, as he sat thinking, the room descended into the normal chaos of a UN meeting, as Alfred and Yao turned a meeting on fixing the global greenhouse effect into a pitched battle over global debts. This is only slightly less civilized than real UN meeting, you know, and possibly more useful. :'D ( ... )
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So this is really awesome so far. Altho it seems a little odd that it was England with a gun as opposed to some of the more gun happy nations
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