USUK - America is boring in bed
anonymous
September 16 2010, 13:06:48 UTC
America is dating England. He’s very VERY nervous about his sexual inexperience. The first night they get down to it, England realises just how inexperienced America is and decides to be very vanilla. America is glad, he’s clumsy, but his passion makes the night seem to him a complete success. And he discovers vanilla sex is just how he rolls, he loves it.
But as time goes by, England is bored beyond his mind every time he has sex with him. And devastated by that realisation. He loves his lad, he truly does, but his preferences lie on the...kinky pervertedadventurous side. He becomes cranky and evasive, and finally, France gets him to admit what’s wrong with him. America overhears, accidentally.
Happy ending or not, anons.
Bonus for hints at past FrUK, England/Spain, England/Russia…many of England’s numerous affairs that consisted of much more thrilling sex for him…even if his heart didn’t love those partners so much.
off-track (side a)
anonymous
September 23 2010, 16:44:07 UTC
He leans against the wall and stares at nothing. Behind the door next to him, he can still hear Arthur and Francis, Francis’s voice light and teasing, Arthur’s irritated and scowling - yes, Alfred can hear a scowl in England’s voice. Arthur scowls that well.
France is insinuating sly things, about him and Arthur and Kiku and Arthur and Russia and Arthur and goddamn, was the whole world on Arthur’s booty-call list. IS the whole world on Arthur’s booty-call list.
But Alfred knew about this though, kind of sort of in the back of his head, duh it’s in all the history books and all the treaties and this, this is why Alfred tries not to look too closely at the text-books, tries to let all the implications and all the statements and all the innuendo slide over his head and if that means everyone thinks he’s a moron with a skull so empty that there’s a whistling sound when the wind blows in one ear and out the other, well, so be it
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Re: off-track (side a)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 06:29:48 UTC
Awww, don't cry. And please don't feel inadequate! This isn't even really what the OP wants and there's never too many fills, so please give your own take on it! I'd love to read that too.
Re: off-track (side a)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 18:06:33 UTC
I'm almost afraid to ask, but this is OP, and while this fill is intriguing, no OP ever has rejected multiple fills! So feel free to tackle it too, and please, don't be alarmed by me!
Re: off-track (side a)
anonymous
September 23 2010, 19:53:57 UTC
Wow, this is genuinely heart-breaking, and poor America is going to develop a serious complex now. T_T I'm looking forward to seeing more and getting a look at what's going on in England's head, too.
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anonymous
September 24 2010, 01:03:10 UTC
Hey OP! Glad you liked it. Well, we haven't seen England's side. Deliberately kept what America actually heard unspecified because he hasn't heard everything. England DIDN'T say what America imagines - not most of it, most of it's in his dreams (hence "and more" and "in his dreams" guess that wasn't clear) and America didn't hear the conversation before and after the bit he did hear. (of course he overheard the worst possible bit)
America is very much the unreliable narrator in this. What America thinks England is asking is not quite what England is asking. But
Well, I guess it was to be expected - this was a quick piece, snapped off in a sleepy burst. So it ain't exactly high literature. Didn't go into detail. Hah, I think your comment is about as long as the piece. Sorry!
That is true, we haven't read England's side yet. Please, don't take my review the bad way! I am very much interested in reading the rest and see what England's on about. I also didn't notice that you left what he heard (or thinks he heard) deliberately vague...seriously, please continue! For me and for all the people that left a review, this is actually very well-written, and what I criticised (probably too soon since we haven't seen the other side) was more the plot/content than the writing, which I actually liked very much
A wild anon appears!
anonymous
September 24 2010, 07:31:36 UTC
I think the OP has rather missed the point of the kink meme here. These are prompts, after all, not instructions for someone to write what you've ordered. The nature of a prompt is to inspire people, and to allow someone to put their own spin on things. If you want your story written exactly as you specify, then write it yourself.
I think you've shown an appalling rudeness, dressed up in flimsy attempts at concrit. You don't get England's characterisation? All we have seen is him through Alfred's eyes, which is going to distort it. At the moment, Alfred is hurting, projecting insecurities onto his lover. Of course he is going to suspect the worst.
because it’s better to have it over and done with than have Arthur resort telling the truth, have to hear: “Because you are clumsy and inept in bed because you don’t know how to please me, because you were too stupid selfish to even notice how little I was enjoying myself, because now we don’ even have sex, because now you don’t even want to try.This is not the thoughts of someone in
( ... )
But as time goes by, England is bored beyond his mind every time he has sex with him. And devastated by that realisation. He loves his lad, he truly does, but his preferences lie on the...kinky pervertedadventurous side.
He becomes cranky and evasive, and finally, France gets him to admit what’s wrong with him. America overhears, accidentally.
Happy ending or not, anons.
Bonus for hints at past FrUK, England/Spain, England/Russia…many of England’s numerous affairs that consisted of much more thrilling sex for him…even if his heart didn’t love those partners so much.
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France is insinuating sly things, about him and Arthur and Kiku and Arthur and Russia and Arthur and goddamn, was the whole world on Arthur’s booty-call list. IS the whole world on Arthur’s booty-call list.
But Alfred knew about this though, kind of sort of in the back of his head, duh it’s in all the history books and all the treaties and this, this is why Alfred tries not to look too closely at the text-books, tries to let all the implications and all the statements and all the innuendo slide over his head and if that means everyone thinks he’s a moron with a skull so empty that there’s a whistling sound when the wind blows in one ear and out the other, well, so be it ( ... )
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*wibbles incoherently*
*grabs Alfred and snuggles him*
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This possible second filler feels all inadequate now D:
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I'll try my best, OP, give me some time: college is being a bitch.
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America is very much the unreliable narrator in this. What America thinks England is asking is not quite what England is asking. But
Well, I guess it was to be expected - this was a quick piece, snapped off in a sleepy burst. So it ain't exactly high literature. Didn't go into detail. Hah, I think your comment is about as long as the piece. Sorry!
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I think you've shown an appalling rudeness, dressed up in flimsy attempts at concrit. You don't get England's characterisation? All we have seen is him through Alfred's eyes, which is going to distort it. At the moment, Alfred is hurting, projecting insecurities onto his lover. Of course he is going to suspect the worst.
because it’s better to have it over and done with than have Arthur resort telling the truth, have to hear: “Because you are clumsy and inept in bed because you don’t know how to please me, because you were too stupid selfish to even notice how little I was enjoying myself, because now we don’ even have sex, because now you don’t even want to try.This is not the thoughts of someone in ( ... )
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