Russia- His heart falls out
anonymous
September 21 2010, 22:33:32 UTC
Russia's heart falls out during a very awkward/inappropriate/dangerous time.
Bonus one~ Its during sex. with America ***
Two~Someone finds it/picks it up before him and you explain how he feels when that person touches/pokes/whatever to it. (Because some fics show it hurting him and others show it sexually arousing him so I'm curious what others think).
Three~ Vulnerable Russia or it happens because of a very tender moment. Like if someone tells him he is loved, gets a friend, is extremely nervous/anxious/sad, or a great thing happens in Russia.
Child of the Universe [1a/?]
anonymous
September 27 2010, 01:25:23 UTC
Be gentle with yourself. You are a child of the universe no less than the trees and the stars; you have a right to be here.The silence that rang between Russia and Canada was uncomfortable, to say the least. Between them, on the plain blue floor of the hall outside their appointed conference room, Russia's heart pulsed accusingly, as if blaming the two nations for it's sojourn outside Russia's body. Canada, who was actually quite difficult to phase after a lifetime of France, England and America, stared down in mute horror, violet eyes wide behind his glasses
( ... )
Child of the Universe [1b/?]
anonymous
September 27 2010, 01:26:30 UTC
Canada, his papers forgotten stood, his hands cradling the organ with so much care Russia's breath refused to come, his lungs locked into position. “Are you sure?” the younger, so much younger, nation asked, fine brows locked together. “How, how do you get it back in?” Russia gestured to his chest, shrugging a little
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Child of the Universe [2/?]
anonymous
October 25 2010, 13:10:22 UTC
If you compare yourself with others, you may become vain and bitter, for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.Canada didn't even make it to the bathroom to wash his hands off before England, of all people, stumbled across him. The two stared at one another silently, Canada's slightly bloody fingers resting on the handle, England's incredibly green eyes locked onto the slim digits
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Re: Child of the Universe [2/?]
anonymous
October 25 2010, 14:16:07 UTC
Oh god, I can't believe I almost passed up this gem because of the subject matter! I thought a story with Russia's heart would either be grotesque or silly, but a;sdklfj at this is love. <3 I really like the way these guys interact, and it's freaking amazing to see a sane-but-still-rather-odd Russia, much less a Russia with a sense of humor! :DDD
I like your England, too; he's obviously a decent guy and cares about Canada, but he's clueless and manages to hurt and irritate Canada WITHOUT being either stupid, cruel, or villainized! Well done, author!anon, seriously! <3
Re: Child of the Universe [2/?]
anonymous
October 26 2010, 22:45:07 UTC
great England, anon! I think you captured the essence of their relationship without sugarcoating it, and without villanizing or simplifying either of them! I also love Russia's last line after contemplating the other, like he's reached a conclusion and can now appreciate Matt as himself, for something he has done.
“and people are always so polite, moving out of the way for me.”
Re: Child of the Universe [2/?]
anonymous
October 27 2010, 03:02:34 UTC
Different anon agrees with everything the commenters above said (especially Russia's polite line, haha) and would like to add that she adores the quotes and the title. Where are they from, Authornon?
Child of the Universe [3/?]
anonymous
October 27 2010, 20:08:59 UTC
Exercise caution in your business affairs, for the world is full of trickery. But let this not blind you to what virtue there is;
Canada stayed in the bathroom in complete shock until the point he was almost late getting back to the meeting. Inside most everyone was back, and already America and England were at each others throat. |Or rather, England was at America's throat. America may or may not have been antagonizing him on purpose, it was hard to tell. Either way, immediately, Canada knew he didn't want to be there. He didn't want to be yelled at for when America did something stupid, he didn't want the man who raised him to grope him, he didn't want Greece to use his shirt to wipe off drool after his nap and he didn't want to be-
“Eat,” came a voice from his right as a small nondescript paper bag was placed on the table, “you are too skinny.” Canada, once again thrown for a loop, stared at Russia as is he'd grown an extra head. People didn't usually notice him, much less try to feed him, and more than once he'd been told to
( ... )
Re: Child of the Universe [3/?]
anonymous
October 27 2010, 22:55:20 UTC
Heh, offering a juice box seems like a kid's no-fail way of making friends at school, which is kind of how I see the emerging connection between Russia and Canada. There's an innocence, a stripped down "I would like a friend" vibe that both seem to have.
I'm not sure I'm making any sense, so I'll just go ahead and say I'm really liking this fic, and I love the way everything you write is so gentle and sensitive.
Bonus one~ Its during sex. with America ***
Two~Someone finds it/picks it up before him and you explain how he feels when that person touches/pokes/whatever to it. (Because some fics show it hurting him and others show it sexually arousing him so I'm curious what others think).
Three~ Vulnerable Russia or it happens because of a very tender moment. Like if someone tells him he is loved, gets a friend, is extremely nervous/anxious/sad, or a great thing happens in Russia.
Ya...I'm okay with any kink. Any.
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You are a child of the universe no less than the trees and the stars;
you have a right to be here.The silence that rang between Russia and Canada was uncomfortable, to say the least. Between them, on the plain blue floor of the hall outside their appointed conference room, Russia's heart pulsed accusingly, as if blaming the two nations for it's sojourn outside Russia's body. Canada, who was actually quite difficult to phase after a lifetime of France, England and America, stared down in mute horror, violet eyes wide behind his glasses ( ... )
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meanwhile, I've been too busy being ill to write my France/Russia one I vaguely promise the OP. But it will happen!
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for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.Canada didn't even make it to the bathroom to wash his hands off before England, of all people, stumbled across him. The two stared at one another silently, Canada's slightly bloody fingers resting on the handle, England's incredibly green eyes locked onto the slim digits ( ... )
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I like your England, too; he's obviously a decent guy and cares about Canada, but he's clueless and manages to hurt and irritate Canada WITHOUT being either stupid, cruel, or villainized! Well done, author!anon, seriously! <3
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I will be eagerly looking forward to more!
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“and people are always so polite, moving out of the way for me.”
Pfff, Russia, you'r badass 8)
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/camps for next update
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for the world is full of trickery.
But let this not blind you to what virtue there is;
Canada stayed in the bathroom in complete shock until the point he was almost late getting back to the meeting. Inside most everyone was back, and already America and England were at each others throat. |Or rather, England was at America's throat. America may or may not have been antagonizing him on purpose, it was hard to tell. Either way, immediately, Canada knew he didn't want to be there. He didn't want to be yelled at for when America did something stupid, he didn't want the man who raised him to grope him, he didn't want Greece to use his shirt to wipe off drool after his nap and he didn't want to be-
“Eat,” came a voice from his right as a small nondescript paper bag was placed on the table, “you are too skinny.” Canada, once again thrown for a loop, stared at Russia as is he'd grown an extra head. People didn't usually notice him, much less try to feed him, and more than once he'd been told to ( ... )
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I'm not sure I'm making any sense, so I'll just go ahead and say I'm really liking this fic, and I love the way everything you write is so gentle and sensitive.
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