My Blue-Eyed Boy (2/?)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 23:49:08 UTC
The days passed and soon it was time for England to leave again. America watched him go sadly, face pressed against the glass of his window. He waved every time he thought he saw the older nation glance in the direction of the house, but not once did he wave back
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Author!Anon, this is delicious. I like it how you write England: caring but stern. And America's need for attention, his almost greedy need to be the centre of England's (of everyone's later in his life) world is one of his basic traits. I think the part when he's wondering about being a super-power was great.
I appreciate that America is not clueless regarding rent-boys and France's intervention, how carefree he's when sharing information about England. And him calling Arthur "Angleterre" is a favourite of mine.
All in all, great fill, Author!Anon!!!! I can't wait to see where it goes.
My Blue-Eyed Boy (4a/?)
anonymous
September 25 2010, 12:23:33 UTC
When England sat down with America for breakfast, handing him something heavily burned and taking no real shape or form of any kind of edible food, he noticed how distraught his charge looked
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My Blue-Eyed Boy (5a/?)
anonymous
September 25 2010, 12:56:21 UTC
The hours flew by as the fell asleep on the sofa, England’s stories of dragons and knights filling America’s dreams. When the older nation finally did stir, he struggled to scoop his charge into his arms and carry him up the stairs - proof of just how big he was getting to be
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My Blue-Eyed Boy (6/?)
anonymous
September 25 2010, 13:54:56 UTC
The weeks flew by and America’s longing for England grew stronger every day. When the older nation did turn up again, it was a bit of a surprise to his charge, who was taken aback when he answered the knock at the door and saw him there
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Re: My Blue-Eyed Boy (7/?)
anonymous
September 26 2010, 11:45:17 UTC
America woke up before England the following morning, and smiled as he cuddled into him, listening to the other nation’s soft exhales as he slept
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I appreciate that America is not clueless regarding rent-boys and France's intervention, how carefree he's when sharing information about England. And him calling Arthur "Angleterre" is a favourite of mine.
All in all, great fill, Author!Anon!!!! I can't wait to see where it goes.
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Thank you!
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Loved it!
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thank you both for your words of appreciation and encourgement! it means a lot to this first-time filler :)
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