Needles (Prologue)
anonymous
October 12 2010, 16:31:21 UTC
It's so big. Arthur could never tell his lover his dirty, perverse secret, but he loves it. He loves it when it's unsuspecting, innocent in the shower or in those denims, hidden from his view, but more often does he love it when it commands his presence and attention, lavishing it with its well-deserved love. Pounding from its father's heartbeat, pulsating so close to his lips - please, please... - and it's slippery, brushing across his cheeks and giving him kisses before he's allowed to touch it. Arthur loves to kneel before it and stare at how it blushes, flustered but needy and it's just a little too big and that's what makes it so wonderful, how he can't quite hold it all.
(Anon is a UK roleplayer with an actually unhealthy love of US' dick, so this will be lengthy.)
Re: Needles (1)
anonymous
October 12 2010, 20:54:48 UTC
YOUR SO NICE!!!11!
Well since you asked ... since England said he wanted more then one Alfred... how about him using his magic or tunring into B!Angel to make that wish come true?? Then they could DP him in more then one way!:)
hehe oh how about him using Alfred's arousal to his advantage? and or visa versa(america using his oral fix. to his advantage)
hmm Orgasm denial?
And of course licking off something like choclate or syrup etc ...like a popsicle
Suggestions!
anonymous
October 13 2010, 14:00:43 UTC
Oh my god, that was incredibly hot. England's actions and thoughts, and just picturing America coming in a crowded room...unf. I can' wait to read more
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AuthorAnon
anonymous
October 13 2010, 20:26:51 UTC
THESE SUGGESTIONS. THEY ARE SO HOT. I will try and fulfill all of them (starting with the ones that I like the most). And group-sex is a huge kink of mine, but only when it's with one person (does that make sense?). Like how Arthur imagined it, so I may do the next excerpt as a longer one involving the magic. The parts are going to be relatively disconnected but still chronological so we can focus on the important things - what's in America's pants. I'll try and fill one of these a day, so keep giving me new ideas!
Re: AuthorAnon
anonymous
October 15 2010, 17:23:12 UTC
Hahaha, glad to know my dirtiness was well-receivedXD
I'm off to ead the new part now...did you post it in the Fill List? Because I found it rechecking this on my own, not through there. Sorry if you did and I just missed it!
Needles (2a)
anonymous
October 13 2010, 21:07:36 UTC
Fridays were Fondue Nights, when Arthur was allowed to enforce his rigorously healthy dietary plan on his lover in exchange for a night of drippy strawberries. Alfred practically pranced into the room, carrying a large vat of molten chocolate in his hands before setting it down on the small table in front of the Englishman, who was carving pear bits with meticulous parallelism. He sent viscous glares at the television set with every roar of the American football crowd. Ludicrous, barbarous game (rugby, however, was exempt from this accusation
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Needles (2b)
anonymous
October 13 2010, 21:08:09 UTC
“S-Suck it!” The other demanded, overwhelmed, one hand vainly trying to hold onto the sofa's chocolate-stained side and the other clutching the table leg with incredible force. His hips jerked slightly as Arthur breathed over the cooling chocolate, not planning to let it solidify. That wouldn't be fun. He nipped playfully at the other's balls before complying, pulling the chocolate off with aggressive suction before licking it like a greedy child. His eyelids fluttered, oblivious to the howling encouragements Alfred gave him, focusing solely on the large, hot head in his mouth, sweet and bitter and strong, pulsing against his tongue, holding back all of that lovely come
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Re: Needles (2b)
anonymous
October 14 2010, 04:24:10 UTC
Author!Anon, I really enjoy your fill but maybe you can space the paragraphs? It's hard to read when it looks like a block of text. I'm suggesting this as someone who enjoys your writing and would like to enjoy it even more.
AuthorAnon on the run!
anonymous
October 14 2010, 10:35:58 UTC
Sure thing; I'm not used to styling with these screen-wide paragraphs in mind. On Word, it looks a lot easier to read. I'll be sure to double-space between paragraphs next time. Thank you!
Re: Needles (2b)
anonymous
October 15 2010, 09:15:16 UTC
I suggest putting spaces between them:
The larger blonde groaned
"Dont worry.."
etc
Besides that this was hot and it seems that although Arthur is the one servicing he is still in control! heheh at this rate Arthur will be the one to Dp Alfred (Perhaps with dildos though so he can still suck him off?) and then ride him.
suggestions!anon
anonymous
October 15 2010, 18:31:22 UTC
Wow! I'll...have to try that at some point *hides away*
That was really really hot, author anon. I like how lighthearted it started, and you made the transition really smooth into sexy and a little desperate. Like another reviewer said, I like how deviously you convey that Arthur's still in charge, lol (and I also like when little traits of the characters show through little things, like Arthur's anal retentive personality cutting the pearsXD). But I have to confess that Alfred being unable to control his bucking when he came made me damned hot, this anon has a strong forceful blowjob kink
I'm glad you liked my suggestions, and in case you don't look above to my reply to your replyXD...post this to the Fills Page!
Arthur could never tell his lover his dirty, perverse secret, but he loves it. He loves it when it's unsuspecting, innocent in the shower or in those denims, hidden from his view, but more often does he love it when it commands his presence and attention, lavishing it with its well-deserved love. Pounding from its father's heartbeat, pulsating so close to his lips - please, please... - and it's slippery, brushing across his cheeks and giving him kisses before he's allowed to touch it. Arthur loves to kneel before it and stare at how it blushes, flustered but needy and it's just a little too big and that's what makes it so wonderful, how he can't quite hold it all.
(Anon is a UK roleplayer with an actually unhealthy love of US' dick, so this will be lengthy.)
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I, uh, wow, that was rediculously good. Especially for being so short too. I eagerly await further installments
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Well since you asked ... since England said he wanted more then one Alfred... how about him using his magic or tunring into B!Angel to make that wish come true?? Then they could DP him in more then one way!:)
hehe oh how about him using Alfred's arousal to his advantage? and or visa versa(america using his oral fix. to his advantage)
hmm Orgasm denial?
And of course licking off something like choclate or syrup etc ...like a popsicle
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THEY ARE SO HOT.
I will try and fulfill all of them (starting with the ones that I like the most). And group-sex is a huge kink of mine, but only when it's with one person (does that make sense?). Like how Arthur imagined it, so I may do the next excerpt as a longer one involving the magic. The parts are going to be relatively disconnected but still chronological so we can focus on the important things - what's in America's pants.
I'll try and fill one of these a day, so keep giving me new ideas!
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I'm off to ead the new part now...did you post it in the Fill List? Because I found it rechecking this on my own, not through there. Sorry if you did and I just missed it!
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Thanks!
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Thank you!
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The larger blonde groaned
"Dont worry.."
etc
Besides that this was hot and it seems that although Arthur is the one servicing he is still in control! heheh at this rate Arthur will be the one to Dp Alfred (Perhaps with dildos though so he can still suck him off?) and then ride him.
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That was really really hot, author anon. I like how lighthearted it started, and you made the transition really smooth into sexy and a little desperate. Like another reviewer said, I like how deviously you convey that Arthur's still in charge, lol (and I also like when little traits of the characters show through little things, like Arthur's anal retentive personality cutting the pearsXD). But I have to confess that Alfred being unable to control his bucking when he came made me damned hot, this anon has a strong forceful blowjob kink
I'm glad you liked my suggestions, and in case you don't look above to my reply to your replyXD...post this to the Fills Page!
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