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A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red anonymous September 5 2010, 13:46:11 UTC
Original Request here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=48149597#t48149597; OP requested for a USUK Color Police AU

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A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1a/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 13:54:47 UTC
accidental de-anoning wtf. nobody saw that /shifty eyesPolice detective Arthur Kirkland of the Pink District Police Force had always prided himself in being precise, exact, accurate ( ... )

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A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1b/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 13:56:05 UTC
Lovino was a demon rider and Arthur had to speed up (trying his best not to break the speed limit) to trail him properly. Luckily, the night traffic had clogged up the road conveniently for Arthur and Lovino was forced to slow down, like the rest of the motorists. Arthur of course, was right behind him, inconspicuous but there ( ... )

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A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1c/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 13:58:05 UTC
After chasing Lovino through several roadways and back alleys (and putting up with Alfred shouting “Stop in the name of justice” every turn of the way), Arthur finally skidded to halt in front of an abandoned warehouse ( ... )

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A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1d/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 13:59:27 UTC
The warehouse wasn’t as big as it seemed, Arthur realized as soon as he and Alfred were inside ( ... )

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A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1e/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 14:01:04 UTC
“Lovino Vargas and his henchman, Antonio Fernandez Carriedo will be transported to the capital where they will be tried and forced to reveal the name of their accomplices. All thanks to Inspector Kirkland’s great work.” Sergeant Francis Bonnefoy grinned. “Though Inspector Kirkland here would have to admit that he couldn’t have done it without Officer Jones’ help ( ... )

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Re: A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1e/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 15:01:04 UTC
Pfft, I'm such a sucker for even bad cop AUs, but good ones? *_* Bring it on, Author!anon. <3

P-poor Arthur; his life really is pain having to deal with those two. And his UST and "unrequited" feelings for Alfred. Pfft. Some things never change.

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Re: A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1e/?) anonymous September 6 2010, 00:11:35 UTC
ohhh loooove thiiis!

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author!anon here~! anonymous September 6 2010, 10:31:33 UTC
ahahahaha Ikr? Poor darling Arthur~ XDDDD

thank you so much anon! <3

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OP anonymous September 5 2010, 15:55:55 UTC
YESSSS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH :D

I love the introduction and... i totally didn't see Lovino and Antonio being bad guys coming and and.... yes! The characterization is so spot on!

A little note though, Antonio's last name isn't Carriedo. It's Fernandez. Carriedo is the last name of his mother.

AND I love your Francis already! his dialogue is sooo ♥ :D :D :D :D /incoherent

asdfghjkllkjhgfdsaasdfghjk;; :D and IVAN ;A;

but uhm yeah. ♥ :D This is the perfect thing to wake up to! ♥ thanks so much c: /patiently waits for update

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author!anon here~! anonymous September 6 2010, 10:29:18 UTC
fjkkjkjgk I'm so glad you're liking this OP! I loved your prompt so much that I knew I had to write it :DDD♥.

And ffff I never knew that about Antonio. I always thought his last name was Carriedo because it's the last part of his name pffft. Anyways, thank you! I'll keep that in mind from now on :DDD.

Will try to update as soon as I can~! /school please be nice to me

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Re: A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1e/?) anonymous September 5 2010, 17:41:42 UTC
I'm really enjoying this so far but I'm pretty sure that if Arthur's an Inspector and Francis is a seargent then Arthur outranks him. Perhaps you meant Francis to be a superintendent?

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author!anon here~! anonymous September 6 2010, 10:25:00 UTC
ahahahaha whoops~

Seriously though, thank you! I honestly know nothing about police ranks and relied on wikipedia too much orz. I'll keep that in mind in the next chapters! :DDD

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Re: A Little Pink, A Little Blue and A Lot of Red (1e/?) anonymous September 12 2010, 04:51:45 UTC
I love this so much! I can't wait to see where you take this, loving all the forlorn for poor arthur. x'D

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