Past-Part Fills Part 4--closed

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Kyklos 1/2

[anonymous]

part 12: Nation A interacting with nation B's ruins/history/etc: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=40619484#t40619484... )

Kyklos 2/2

[anonymous]

Japan stepped into what is left of what was once great. Crumbling dust and hewn stone. There were no swan feathers strewn about any longer. He took soft steps towards him, careful as to not disturb the cat. He looked up, peering at the sky through the gaping hole where the roof had once stood. He blinked his eyes from the glare of the sunlight

Re: Kyklos 2/2

[anonymous]

I like the way you portrayed Greece's relationship with his mother. It was obviously a loving one, and Greece's reflections on it show that he misses her but has still moved on with his life.

The mention about the wok incident made me lol, while the line about last love vs. first love made me aww. I also liked the subtle callback to the "like a cat" memory.

One small nitpick, though: shouldn't it be "Hypnos" instead of "Hyponos"?

Re: Kyklos 2/2

[anonymous]

Aww. That was so cute and sweet, and it did remind me a lot about some of your earlier fills too for this pairing. Not a bad thing, though. :P

Re: Kyklos 2/2

[anonymous]

That was very nice, and I liked the mention of the eromenos, etc. But I think my favorite part was the "meeting the parents" line - and the wok. Of course. ^^ That is just so "East Asia Family" to do.