Lawyer!EnglandxIntern!America - Placeholder
anonymous
September 12 2010, 09:39:52 UTC
This is a placeholder for future updates of "Two Weeks Notice." OP requested overworked businessman UK in a relationship that ends in a messy break-up, with UK seducing intern America in the aftermath. (Fill contains some FrUK in the beginning.)
Two Weeks Notice [Part 3a/???]
anonymous
September 12 2010, 09:41:04 UTC
Oh, my God! Author anon cannot apologize enough for how very, very long this took to update! I really am sorry. My life is positively brutal right now. But rest assured, I haven't forgotten about this fill! Well, hopefully, this update makes up for it a bit, even if it’s a relatively small update.Arthur slips out of bed the next morning. Taking the same amount of care not to wake his sleeping partner as he had the night before, he gathers his clothes in the dark before slipping into the bathroom to shower and get ready for the day. He is not, he rationalises, sneaking around in his own home; he’s simply being considerate. He continues this consideration until he’s gathered his things and slipped like a ghost out of the front door
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Two Weeks Notice [Part 3b/???]
anonymous
September 12 2010, 09:42:44 UTC
He can't see the harm in drinking it, and sweeping a thump over the mouth-hole (after all, who knows what that boy keeps in his bag), he takes a swallow - and gags.
He coughs helplessly, eyes wide. The tea is so damn... sweet! It feels like his tongue is shrivelling! He raises his eyes to stare at Alfred incredulously. The other man is watching him with a look of disappointment.
"It's not coffee this time, right?" he asks, sounding confused.
Exactly how stupid ARE you?! Arthur thinks.
"How much sugar did you put in this?" he rasps, instead.
"Um, one tablespoon of milk, two tablespoons of sugar, right?"
Two Weeks Notice [Part 3c/???]
anonymous
September 12 2010, 09:44:51 UTC
"I just wanted to see what it was like," Alfred continues. "'Cause that's a lot of school to go through if it ends up sucking."
You don't have to tell me that, Arthur thinks resentfully.
"And I don't want to have to do any more school than I have to. I mean, I used to play football in high school, which helped, you know? But college?" He crumples up his food trash into a ball and misses the bin entirely. "It stunk."
Arthur scoops up the trash and deposits it in its rightful place. He's starting to feel like the boy is over-sharing and it's making him uncomfortable, so he takes this chance to change the subject
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Two Weeks Notice [Part 3d/???]
anonymous
September 12 2010, 09:46:51 UTC
He's still in that position when Alfred comes in a minute or so later, carrying the re-filled travel mug in one hand. He sits it down on the desk next to the phone and gives Arthur a curious look
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Re: Two Weeks Notice [Part 3d/???]
anonymous
September 12 2010, 14:34:49 UTC
Georgia Tech!anon here. I can't say I didn't get really excited when that came up, followed by a sudden blanket hatred for Al that I've never felt before.
to hell with georgia anyone?
Besides that I'm glad you're continuing. It's sad to watch the FrUK fall apart, but I really like what you're doing with the characters :)
Re: Two Weeks Notice [Part 3d/???]
anonymous
September 12 2010, 15:33:52 UTC
Yes! An update!! I'm loving this fill anon :D I can only see things getting worse for the England and France :( But I'm looking forward to see how things progress with America and England, haha :)
Re: Two Weeks Notice [Part 3d/???]
anonymous
September 14 2010, 19:23:22 UTC
Oh, man. As adorable as Alfred is being in this fic, I think you're making me hurt too much with the FrUK break-up; it's not only too well-written, but also very heartbreaking, the way they hurt each other. Man, I hope they manage to end (if they do end...is this fic supposed to be just desk sex, or are America and England supposed to end together?) somewhat on good terms, because even if their love dies it seems they truly care about each other.
This being said, boy, why is your America so adorkable? Awww~~
And also, you blow my mind away with how realistic Arhtur is and sounds. No matter how cute Alfred is, he's slightly less believable due to his special circumstances (aka, rich influential daddy), but your Arthur is excellent.
We get a mention of Matt...is this gonna head the USUK and Franada way? Cause maybe Matthew would be a good partner to cure Francis' heartbreak...please, don't leave him alone ;_;
Author!anon has come to tl;dr you!
anonymous
September 16 2010, 00:13:43 UTC
Thank you for your thoughtful review! I'm sorry the FrUK stuff is breaking your heart! (Well, to be honest, I'm glad it is, because that means I'm doing it right, but still.) I really want to end their relationship respectfully, although in a situation like this no one ends up smelling like roses.
(if they do end...is this fic supposed to be just desk sex, or are America and England supposed to end together?)OP wanted a break-up and desk sex (with a few other details) and left everything else up to me. I hope I'm not going to spoil anyone's fun by saying that, ultimately, the fic's pairing IS going to USxUK
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Author!Anon
anonymous
October 15 2010, 01:48:33 UTC
It's not dropped! It's just being updated very, very slowly. I'm really sorry! Unfortunately, the real world calls. But I just needs to survive the rest of October, and I'll be able to pick up writing it again. I have every intention of finishing it!
Re: Author!Anon
anonymous
October 15 2010, 23:29:38 UTC
Oh okay! I was just curious- take all the time you need for things to get sorted out, and us readers will defiantly be looking forward to when you continue! : )
Original request & Parts 1+2: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=43175900#t43175900
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He coughs helplessly, eyes wide. The tea is so damn... sweet! It feels like his tongue is shrivelling! He raises his eyes to stare at Alfred incredulously. The other man is watching him with a look of disappointment.
"It's not coffee this time, right?" he asks, sounding confused.
Exactly how stupid ARE you?! Arthur thinks.
"How much sugar did you put in this?" he rasps, instead.
"Um, one tablespoon of milk, two tablespoons of sugar, right?"
"Teaspoons! Two teaspoons of sugar ( ... )
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You don't have to tell me that, Arthur thinks resentfully.
"And I don't want to have to do any more school than I have to. I mean, I used to play football in high school, which helped, you know? But college?" He crumples up his food trash into a ball and misses the bin entirely. "It stunk."
Arthur scoops up the trash and deposits it in its rightful place. He's starting to feel like the boy is over-sharing and it's making him uncomfortable, so he takes this chance to change the subject ( ... )
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to hell with georgia anyone?
Besides that I'm glad you're continuing. It's sad to watch the FrUK fall apart, but I really like what you're doing with the characters :)
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You're making me feel sad for FrUK breaking up, which is new. Keep up the good work.
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This being said, boy, why is your America so adorkable? Awww~~
And also, you blow my mind away with how realistic Arhtur is and sounds. No matter how cute Alfred is, he's slightly less believable due to his special circumstances (aka, rich influential daddy), but your Arthur is excellent.
We get a mention of Matt...is this gonna head the USUK and Franada way? Cause maybe Matthew would be a good partner to cure Francis' heartbreak...please, don't leave him alone ;_;
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(if they do end...is this fic supposed to be just desk sex, or are America and England supposed to end together?)OP wanted a break-up and desk sex (with a few other details) and left everything else up to me. I hope I'm not going to spoil anyone's fun by saying that, ultimately, the fic's pairing IS going to USxUK ( ... )
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anywho from what has been written, it's completely amazing.
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