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[part 5] fem!Sweden/fem!Finland, Sealand walks in on them anonymous October 28 2010, 20:38:08 UTC
original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12622090#t12622090
Sealand walks in on Sweden and Finland having sex, but with a twist - they're both women. Just looking for some femmeslash.

Note: I like knitting. I do it myself. (this will make sense, I promise.)
Also based on this originally-from-pixiv, highly-hotlinked image of fem!Sweden and fem!Finland:
http://pics.livejournal.com/irrationalsense/pic/00033yce

Reprieve Finland is already in the shower when Sweden comes into their bedroom from putting Sealand to sleep and reading him his bedtime story. So Sweden undresses and brushes her teeth at the sink next to the shower, the steam leaving her skin warm and damp, and she looks at herself in the mirror as she waits for her mouthwash time to be up ( ... )

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Reprieve 2/3 anonymous October 28 2010, 20:40:51 UTC
Sweden puts her glasses on the edge of the sink and steps over the edge of the tub, and Finland hands her the soap before beginning to rinse herself off ( ... )

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Reprieve 3/3 anonymous October 28 2010, 20:44:13 UTC
The sheets are cold, but the heat of the shower lingers between them and where Finland has been lying. They are warm together, and Sweden presses close to her, rests her arms over Finland’s sides and traces the lines of her back, the heat of the side of her breast soft and sweet against Sweden’s palm, the curve of her hips smooth and rich.

Finland rolls to lie above her; weight and heat, and Sweden whispers You’re beautiful against her lips.

Finland sits up a little, smiles down at her. “You’re just saying that because we’re about to have sex.”

“Not just because,” Sweden protests, which makes Finland laugh, and Sweden takes the opportunity to pull Finland close and taste the softness of her breasts, pink tense areoles and the blue of her veins under her skin, and she smells like juniper and pine ( ... )

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous October 28 2010, 21:42:09 UTC
So beautiful!

Love this very much, thank you 8)))

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous October 29 2010, 01:22:35 UTC
Ahk! I fell in love with Fem!Sweden/Fem!Finland after seeing it on pixiv too. So cute and you gave it a good backstory too. I'm just sad that Sealand interrupted when they were just getting into it.

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous October 29 2010, 04:50:18 UTC
*NOSEBLEEDS*

Damn, this was incredibly sensual, even with the festivities interrupted. Sweden's love for Finland is portrayed so beautifully here, so romantic and physical at the same time. I think probably everyone who read this went a little gayer for Fem!Finland just by virtue of exposure.

Denmark, btw, is just jealous because fem!Nor always has a chest you could bounce a quarter off of-*killed*

Might I suggest a sequel where they buy a lock for the door, then...make up for missed time? *hopeful look*

VC: dracheim enjoyed

Yes, this Dracheim person likes hot sapphic Nordic love as all people of taste do!

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authornon is embarrassed anonymous October 29 2010, 05:39:36 UTC
USer authornon realized just now that Sweden probably wouldn't be using feet to measure distance. OTL OTL OTL. Forgive me.

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Re: authornon is embarrassed anonymous October 29 2010, 08:12:04 UTC
Sequel as penance! Then we'll talk forgiveness, muhahahaha. >:)

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Re: authornon is embarrassed anonymous October 30 2010, 01:13:32 UTC
Seconded like nobody's business! It was super sexy and pretty much awesome... I mean... I don't think i can say much better than that.

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous October 31 2010, 15:12:49 UTC
Wow. I'm not a great fan of nyotalia but this? This I loved.

Being female actually affected the characters (more than just "suddenly: boobs!"), it felt very real and... very, very hot.

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Requester!anon's day is made! anonymous November 1 2010, 12:09:18 UTC
Thank you so, so so much for filling this! I never thought it would be filled, and yet I come back and find not only has it been, it's an awesome fill <3

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous November 5 2010, 05:17:13 UTC
Oh! I loved this to pieces -- so erotic and sweet :D

and this:
"the crease beneath her breast, where the band of her bra lies and where her scent always lingers, even after she showers"
SO TRUE! I love this line :'DD There's something very universal and touching about this...to me, anyway. X3

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous November 14 2010, 03:57:59 UTC
YOU KNOW WHO THIS IS.

...The evil grin on my face shows I have no regrets. Especially when girl-porn is made.

If only Sealand didn't interrupt. Damn brats. Your mommies are having some adult fun, you know!

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Re: Reprieve 3/3 anonymous January 30 2011, 22:16:25 UTC
Oh, hell yes. XD I love FemSu/FemFin like you won't believe. I've written three; about to be four, and I'm currently writing a series.

Domestic smut is my favorite, to be honest. And people who can do it right are my heros! I loved this:

...Sweden whispers You’re beautiful against her lips.

Finland sits up a little, smiles down at her. “You’re just saying that because we’re about to have sex.”

“Not just because,” Sweden protests..

That was my favorite and I love your style. And there's no expressing how much I love Sealand. XD I've tried, and failed, many times!

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