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Past-Part Fills Part 4--closed

Feb 27, 2011 12:28

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[Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 2 anonymous November 19 2010, 07:36:29 UTC

Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=20922320#t20922320... )

Re: [Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 2 anonymous November 19 2010, 07:38:42 UTC

Slowly he sat up and opened his eyes to see Russia still sitting there, watching him, his intense eyes burning into him worse than ever before ( ... )

Re: [Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 2 anonymous November 19 2010, 07:55:38 UTC

I almost feel bad for finding that hot, considering the kind of power Russia has over Estonia, but Russia's fascination with Estonia just is hot. :D

I don't think you failed at all, author!anon. I'm enjoyed reading this, and I'd like to see more if you want to write it! (Damn, why is this pairing so rare?)

Re: [Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 2 anonymous November 19 2010, 08:47:52 UTC

It's not fail, anon :D I'm actually liking this a lot. Please do continue!

I'd drop the -san from Russia's name, though, unrealistic for Estonia to be spouting Japanese suffixes

A!A anonymous November 19 2010, 10:32:31 UTC

Thank you !

and thanks for pointing that out, I won't make that mistake again.

[Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 3 anonymous November 19 2010, 20:57:07 UTC

Estonia gasped in surprise as he felt his once again erected penis rub against an equally exposed hardness of the other nation ( ... )

Re: [Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 3 anonymous November 19 2010, 20:57:46 UTC

His brain said that he should hate the guy even more than he did for calling Toris bitter and sour ( ... )

Author!Anon's note anonymous November 19 2010, 21:03:38 UTC

Ok since the OP of this request that I'm trying to fill said that she doesn't want a rape in this story ... I had to think of a way how it can be consensual between these two. I admit I didn't perhaps come up with the best solution and I'm sorry if my characterization is unbearably off ...again...

Re: [Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 4 anonymous November 20 2010, 20:16:24 UTC

For Russias relief his gentle kisses all over Estonia’s face caused the other nation calm down a little and his sobs slowly stopped as did the uncontrollable flow of tears running down of his cheeks ( ... )

Re: [Part 7] Not So Bad to Become One Part 4 anonymous November 21 2010, 01:42:00 UTC

Awwww...continue, anon! And don't worry overmuch about them being OOC, they're fine from where I'm sitting.

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