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[Part 14] Flawless - angels and devils (US/UK) anonymous November 29 2010, 07:47:19 UTC

Place holder for Flawless -sigh.-

Parts 1-8: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=51794105#t51794105

Flawless 9a/?? anonymous November 29 2010, 08:48:20 UTC

Angels that are after Arthur:
Iceland = Munkir
Finland = Amitiel
Sweden = Baglis
Denmark = Ezekiel
Norway = Douma

I'm well aware that Finland and Sweden have humans name, but their human names just wouldn't go with the rest of the Nordics, so it was better to just change their names. Names were not picked for what these angels have done but for the meaning of the name. Wind was gently hitting against his face, forcing both of his eyes shut to prevent his eyes from drying out. The smell of dry blood was hanging around air around them, preventing him from pretending that what was around him was not happening ( ... )

Re: Flawless 9b/?? anonymous November 29 2010, 08:50:51 UTC

Things were just more confusing now or more so than before. It wasn’t because of the sudden changes in his life, but mostly because Arthur began to question who he was. Was he a bad person? He probably was, he was probably a disgusting being if angels were trying to kill him while a demon was trying to save him. Maybe he was someone bad that was going to create destruction in the future. This mere thought made the teenager whimper. He remembered all of those nights when he would think about killing and crushing the people that caused him to suffer. How much he wished and hoped for one day to be strong enough to cause the same pain that was inflicted upon him. Everything suddenly felt too bad and wrong, to wish for all of that was now looking more and more like a sin and maybe his twisted and dark thoughts caught the attention of angels and demons ( ... )

Re: Flawless 9c/?? anonymous November 29 2010, 08:52:59 UTC

It never occurred to him how much time he had left, because in his mind this fall was never going to end. The demon was going to fly towards him and get him. He was never going to hit the ground and he was going to be saved by a vile creature that was meant to be the villain in fairy tales. How perfect. It fit his dysfunctional reality perfectly ( ... )

Re: Flawless 9c/?? anonymous November 29 2010, 16:47:14 UTC

It's midnight at my place and I have to scream in silence when I saw the update. Then again, your evil cliffhanger made me ran into the bathroom and bang my head against the wall. My parent won't approve a fangirl's scream in the middle of the night...

OMG OMG OMG Ivan! What's he doing here?!!!

Re: Flawless 9c/?? anonymous November 30 2010, 01:08:29 UTC

IVAN?! IVAN?!?!
JORETJRFOJHNEIOFRGFBNERWKFJNLK
*faints*

What the hell is going on? PLEASE, I MUST KNOW WHY MY BELOVED RUSSIA HAS APPEARED!! D:

Re: Flawless 10a/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:03:06 UTC

Sick, so very sick. ;~; I can't bring myself to read over it again, sorry for any mistakes. Arthur wasn’t completely sure how long he had been staring at the dark sky above him. Thousands of different stars were shinning above him, illuminating his surroundings. He was lying on top of a pure, white, marble floor which was inside a cathedral, a cathedral without a ceiling. The tall structure was magnificent, with statues of different saints and angels all around. Dark wood benches were placed near the altar, where a golden cross that was probably twice the size of Arthur was standing tall and proud. Candles were illuminating the rest of the cathedral, allowing the stained glass to be seen and making many different colors to reflect against the clean floor ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10b/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:06:04 UTC

It took Arthur a while to notice the eight wings that were spreading out proudly behind the being’s back. It took him even longer to notice that whatever was in front of him was not facing him, more like he was looking at the back of its head. Slowly the being turned around and Arthur finally closed his eyes and screamed. He covered his face with both of his hands, not wanting to see the horrifying face that was in front of him. It was too much, the endless eyes and then the long tongue that was crawling out of his mouth that looked nothing but like a black hole that was ready to suck his very soul out of his body ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10c/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:08:24 UTC

Arthur stared with wide eyes at the man in front of him. He didn’t say a word. He didn’t even move. He couldn’t even bring himself to process the words that the other said ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10d/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:12:11 UTC

“You see, God is very, very kind. The only problem is that he tends to bend and break his own rules for humans.” Ivan sighed softly, shaking his head slowly. “You committed suicide, therefore you should go to hell but instead you are here because He believes it isn’t fair for you to go to hell. Isn’t he nice? Always breaking and twisting His rules to make it so humans can reach heaven or at least a better place than hell. I think it's very ironic really, considering the way He treats us. I guess we are just not the favorite ones , da?” The angel laughed softly, his eyes closing as a new smile spread across his lips ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10e/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:14:46 UTC

Arthur gulped loudly, his eyes closing as the cold hand touched the skin on his throat. He wanted to open his mouth to give an answer but he couldn’t think of anything. He didn’t know what to say at all. This time he was at a loss of what to believe. All of his life he kept thinking that God would do nothing for him or anyone and now this angel was telling him that God was actually sacrificing his own angels in order to protect them. If that was the case then why? Why was there so much misery in the world, why was it such a horrible place ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10f/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:17:58 UTC

“Arthur, would you like to know why your life was so miserable?” Ivan smiled a kind smile this time and for some reason it was more horrifying than the ones before. “I’ll tell you. You see, there is a demon that is trying to find an angel that died a long time ago, the same angel I was talking about. This demon seems to get jealous very, very easily and didn’t like angels touching his little obsession. So, there goes the first guardian angel you had. Another one was given to you and bang, there goes the guardian angel again. Over and over again this demon killed the angels that were protecting you from misfortune and pain, and instead of an angel only a demon was near you and you see…demons bring awful luck to people. They attract negative forces and create misery." The angel sighed, shaking his head with closed eyes ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10g/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:20:08 UTC

The teenager felt the burning in his body coming back, it slowly began to crawl through his body but it wasn’t as painful as before. He didn’t let himself fall on his knees and stood on his two feet with pride. He glared at the demon, his fists shaking on either side of his body as a bright light began to consume him. The pain on his back was nerve breaking, the flesh was tearing and splitting letting out gruesome noises as a pair of white wings sprout out. The two wings tainted the cathedral with silver blood, and the wounds on his hands, feet, forehead and back quickly began to heal. The dark blond hair slowly turned a brighter shade, looking like pure liquid gold. The dull, dark green eyes turned brighter until they were almost as bright as a real emerald. The abused skin turned a shade paler, looking as milky as soft as a new born as the wounds he suffered disappeared ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10h/?? anonymous December 8 2010, 16:21:36 UTC

Alfred was more than satisfied when Arthur let a soft noise slip past his lips. It was enough to tell the demon that the angel enjoyed the kiss as much as he did, so with that in mind he pulled the angel closer, making Arthur’s back rub against his chest. The demon rest his chin on top of Arthur’s shoulder, both of his arms wrapping around the androgynous hips ( ... )

Re: Flawless 10h/?? anonymous December 10 2010, 00:35:33 UTC

OH DAMN!

I am very happy with the update. Very, very happy. Like, I want to hug you until you stop breathing happy.
Oh Ivan, even as an angel, you still manage to scare everyone shitless. ♥

Wait...so if demons are created through hate...and Ivan mentioned an angel's hate...and Arthur hates humans...and his real name is Jibrail...oh shit...
WE'RE ALL DOOMED! D:

That's freaking awesome. XD
Update soon, please. ^_^

But question: why Jibrail? Wasn't he a messenger angel? I don't remember him being associated with any death or destruction...
Portent was a fabulous choice though. XD

OP anonymous December 15 2010, 14:46:14 UTC

Oh damn, how could I have missed these massive updates. Hope you're not offended orz

I'm really intrigued as to the direction it's taking. Also glad that Arthur and Alfred are back together (even if I do feel sorry for human!Arthur, the poor dear). Keep up the awesome writing author!anon :)

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