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[Part 9] Counsellor!US/Punk!UK anonymous August 25 2010, 01:57:17 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/12046.html?thread=26872846#t26872846

I always see Arthur as the older one, or at least being in an authoritarian role, in AUs (which is kinda fitting but still!)

With a school AU setting, I'd like to see uncontrollable/violent/wild/troubled/whatever punk!Arthur finally being forced to go see a counsellor by his school as they're tired of his behaviour and running out of money to pay for all the damages he causes.
What the school doesn't know is that over the sessions, a relationship has been forming between Arthur and the counsellor. One that's not so innocent and certainly not appropriate.

The counsellor can be anyone you'd like, with whatever pairing. USUK, FrUK, Prussia/UK, Russia/UK, Spain/UK, heck whatever! Go wild anons, I'm not particular on pairings.

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Re: authornon from Not!OP anonymous August 27 2010, 14:54:30 UTC
I suppose I'll just have to wait for you to de-anon though you still seem familiar and Francis and Arthur as frenemies has always been my headcanon (and them being sickened after messing around together might very well join it).

I was already picturing Arthur as about 16 or 17, and since the age of consent is 16 in the UK, I wasn't really fussed. And while I'm not exactly advocating students sexing up their counsellors, that's probably less to do with them being a counsellor and more to do with the fact that the only counsellor I've ever met under forty was a thirty-five-year-old lesbian in a stable relationship with three children. (I mean, come on. Think of the children.) But if it's Alfred, I think I can manage XD

Yes, Alfred is definitely a sweetheart, and Arthur will eventually agree, I think ♥ Now, I have an update to read...

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Re: First Name Basis 6/? anonymous August 26 2010, 23:25:32 UTC
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i am so excite.
author anon, i think i love you.

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First Name Basis 7/? anonymous August 27 2010, 03:18:35 UTC
If there's one thing Arthur is proud of, it's that he's never stooped to drugs. Not that he can't: they're everywhere on the streets. Dealers on every dark-trimmed corner, and Arthur knows nearly them all by name ( ... )

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First Name Basis 8/? anonymous August 27 2010, 03:19:19 UTC
Arthur pulls a face. "Jesus, you'd get into anyone's trousers, wouldn't you?" he says, shaking his head. "Not everything wants a shag, Francis."

There's a sympathetic bleat.

"Do you not think so?" Francis asks, nudging Arthur with his elbow. "Or is it that you think he's out of your league?"

Arthur laughs and says, "He's not my type. And he's my counsellor. It would get messy if I tried it on with him."

Francis hums thoughtfully, stopping to sprinkle tobacco into his rolling papers. With clever fingers, he twists the end and lights a match off a wall. It's painfully showy, but then again, Arthur is the one who can catch three cigarettes with his teeth. It doesn't seem fair to pass comment.

"He does look very young, though," says Francis, passing his tongue over the end. "Early twenties, I'd say ( ... )

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First Name Basis 9/? anonymous August 27 2010, 03:20:34 UTC
Mr. Jones' eyebrows rise ( ... )

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Re: First Name Basis 9/? anonymous August 27 2010, 05:36:37 UTC
I think my favourite part is how Arthur thinks of that guy in terms of 'kid' and 'boy' even though he knows he himself was actually the younger and smaller one. It says a lot about his character here and what kind of life he has. I like it.

This whole fic is awesome so far. <3 Looking forward to more.

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OP anonymous August 27 2010, 06:33:08 UTC
Forgive me for coming so late anon!!! I was away from the meme for a while haha.

But wow, this is something great to come back to. You have no idea how happy this fill makes me; your writing is marvelous and I love following Arthur's train of thought. It's just incredibly perfect. You can tell he's had a rough life, that he's almost not even living day to day, that he's young but he doesn't feel so and it's just YES. I gave many internets away, but you most certainly deserve one as well <3 Thank you so much and I'm very much looking forward to the next part.

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authornon anonymous August 27 2010, 15:28:39 UTC
man, i should be the one who's sorry for being late, not you! i've had a plot bunny for this for ages and never actually worked on it haha.

asfjh your comment has made me very happy too. thank you for the praise, i'm unworthy! i hope you continue to like it, because it's probably gonna be a long fill.

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Re: First Name Basis 9/? anonymous August 27 2010, 07:47:22 UTC
uggghhhh yessss
anon, i love you
truly, madly, deeply

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Re: First Name Basis 9/? anonymous August 27 2010, 09:20:18 UTC
It's great that you apdate so fast author!anon. We really appreciate that, 'cuz this story is awesome.^^

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Re: First Name Basis 9/? anonymous August 27 2010, 15:17:50 UTC
Oh, Francis.

Playing matchmaker already? Now Arthur can't make a move just out of principle of the matter! (Though I'm sure he'll get past it...)

(I would have thought Arthur would go for rollies, though - aren't they much cheaper than boxes? I'm not a smoker, though, so I might be wrong. I'm pretty sure they come in more than just vanilla.)

Aww, Arthur. It's not the worst thing you could have done, now tell Alfred so he can tell you that!

I've always felt its the reader's solemn duty to keep the writer happy...if only to get more frequent updates!

But what was Alfred reading???

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authornon anonymous August 27 2010, 15:25:30 UTC
(roll-ups are cheaper--healthier, too--but arthur's just saying he wouldn't share francis', because he always picks vanilla. arthur only buys boxes out of habit, and he hasn't the patience to roll a cigarette when he gets an urge.)

that will be revealed, eventually!! thanks for the comment ♥

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Re: First Name Basis 9/? anonymous August 27 2010, 18:42:23 UTC
Arthur's voice here is really authentic - I've known a lot of kids who've been on this side of things and the way he talks and thinks reminds me of them.

Good work, suthor-anon!

Also, thank you for the quick updating!

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First Name Basis 10/? anonymous August 28 2010, 02:58:17 UTC
Arthur can't remember getting a split lip, but his aching mouth serves as a reasonable enough explanation. He does remember drinking, though, and some derogatory comments about his height, and some wanker stealing his bar stool.

(Then it dissolves into fists and kicks and the crunch of glass.)

He drags himself to the mirror, head throbbing, and checks his teeth. Front. Canines. Molars. All in one, at least.

Feeling like shit and not much else, Arthur throws himself into an icicle shower. The pain in his temples spikes, then settles. He can't remember if he has anymore painkillers, because he'll sure as hell need them.

Arthur brushes his teeth, after, and spits stale alcohol into the drain. His mouth tastes entirely less like death.

It hits a full five seconds later. Bollocks, it's Monday, isn't it, and that stupid puppy-faced yank will be waiting in that stupid, dank office, eyes blue and wide and seaside bright. What will he think when he sees Arthur's swollen jaw? Thug, probably, but that's the reputation Arthur's built ( ... )

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First Name Basis 11/? anonymous August 28 2010, 02:59:21 UTC
Next session, Arthur's jaw is feeling significantly less broken. He drops his bag, which is empty except for a room temperature cold compress. The only reason he brings it nowadays is for authenticity ( ... )

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