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[Part 13] Reverse Meltdown placeholder anonymous October 21 2010, 04:49:58 UTC
Hee hee. This is the first time I'm using this, so bear with me...

Original request and parts 1-10: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=44908381

"Anon would like to see stressed!out-of-cope!England (after all his wars, problems, the Troubles, and now the financial crisis) having some SERIOUS problems...tearfulness, impulsivity, accidents/lack of control/bedwetting, difficulty feeding himself, etc. Anon would love infantilism that's portrayed kind of realistically - supportive!America in a caretaking role, comforting England, coaxing him into pull-ups, and eventually nappies, because his inability to cope is so distressing, scary and embarrassing for him..."

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [14b/?] anonymous November 5 2010, 14:23:24 UTC
Thank you! xD

Actually I am... but it's not that bad! I'm almost through Dx! Just a few sniffles and all... this totally wasn't the reason why I made England sick ffff.

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [14b/?] anonymous November 7 2010, 13:26:53 UTC
Yay!Another update XD
Hope you get better soon :D
....so that you can continue writing this *shot*

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Reverse Meltdown [15a/?] anonymous November 10 2010, 05:49:14 UTC
Note so important it's put in the beginning: No Justin Bieber (fans) were intentionally harmed in this part. Please do not take offense even though this anon dislikes him. It's what happens when your friends sing that song a million times.It’s back to step one ( ... )

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Reverse Meltdown [15b/?] anonymous November 10 2010, 05:55:23 UTC
It’s as if nothing has happened ( ... )

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [15b/?] anonymous November 10 2010, 10:40:36 UTC
SEX IS ABSOLUTE YES. CB

*Cough* Now is the true review... This is awesome. :3 And you should work your homework first! xD

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [15b/?] anonymous November 10 2010, 15:34:51 UTC
OH THE FLUFF, THE GREAT FLUFF <3<3<3

I'm falling in love with this fill all over again every time you post an update, writernon <3

I thought Biebs is Canadian? Or did I miss the news and he's American now? LOL I don't like him either, so I don't follow news about him.

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [15b/?] anonymous November 11 2010, 04:14:58 UTC
Pfft England, you should've seen all the British boyband CDs I used to own...

I'm glad these two are finally (almost) able to confess their true feelings... I love the fluff! And what America says is so true. I love how you put it.

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Reverse Meltdown [16a/?] anonymous November 16 2010, 06:16:26 UTC
He watches America talk on the phone in a passive manner ( ... )

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Reverse Meltdown [16b/?] anonymous November 16 2010, 06:21:03 UTC
“I really don’t get you at all ( ... )

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [16b/?] anonymous November 16 2010, 06:22:36 UTC

“What day is it?” England reads America’s thoughts.

“Er. I’m not sure,”

“I see a calendar right there,”

“It’s the first of January then, if this is really midnight,”

“Bollocks.”

“No, it’s not. It’s very true right now and that means we spent our first date on New Year’s Eve I guess and with no alcohol for you,”

“Well, at least I have something better than booze with me,”

England stares at America with his amazing green eyes that can be clear even on the darkest of nights. They both smirk.

“What is that?”

“Just kiss me already,”

And he does… long and slow with the table pushed to the far ends of the Earth.

He doesn’t need to make the day special after all because it already is.

I still need to do homework. What a bad anon I am. This seems to be ending pretty soon. I hate character limit and there might be sex in the next part. :D

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [16b/?] anonymous November 16 2010, 06:24:00 UTC
^^^is supposed to be part 16c orz^^^

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [16b/?] anonymous November 16 2010, 08:26:24 UTC
YAY, SEX~ /is shot

x3 You are awesome for this chapter~ Keep up the good work~ :3

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Reverse Meltdown [17a/?] anonymous November 21 2010, 01:15:38 UTC
“Let’s have sex,” England announces ( ... )

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Reverse Meltdown [17b/?] anonymous November 21 2010, 01:18:03 UTC
He looks up and smiles grimly, stabbing an invisible arrow in America’s heart. “I forgot to tell you I’m going home tomorrow. I just checked my ticket…”

His heart races because he knows England will leave sometime, but not this soon. He needs time. If only he hadn’t rejected him…

He grabs England’s wrist and kisses him passionately. England struggles free at first, but then relaxes against his touch. He parts an inch away. “I’m sorry,” he murmurs, “shall we continue?”

England hides his reddened face against his chest. “I-if… you truly like me,” America grins and buries his face in his hair. “Thank you, but I’m sorry I don’t like you, but love you. That’s okay, right?”

He hears a muffled “I love you too.” He reassures himself it’s all right as he carries England and lays him on the bed. He entwines their fingers and deeply kisses him. It might as well be one of the best things in life.

There shall be no interruptions this time.

I'm a liar and failure. What a nice combination. There will be one or two more parts, but I'll just ( ... )

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Re: Reverse Meltdown [17b/?] anonymous November 21 2010, 05:58:22 UTC
Waaaaah... No sex? ;x; /Is shot again

AAAAAAAAAAAND~ This is a good chappie, no worries. :3 *Waits for the next update~*

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