Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 1/?
anonymous
October 23 2010, 05:26:46 UTC
I am a slow writer, so this won't be updating often; sorry. I don't write much fanfic so I appreciate concrit. Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=44800093#t44800093It takes Russia too long to answer the door. America can barely feel his fingers by the time it finally swings inward. Russia is wearing his army uniform, medals painstakingly polished and lined up. America feels his eyebrows inch up - but really, he shouldn’t be surprised
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anonymous
December 26 2010, 08:36:47 UTC
Oh my. I read this in one go and I have to say I'm breathless. Really, I'm sitting here with these little shuddering breaths with the tension you've built up here. They're not fighting, not really (Well, maybe SU and RF are, a bit), but everything everyone is feeling is all pent up in this cold little house as they try to act how they know they should, accepting the inevitable and moving forward with class, but SO MANY EMOTIONS EVERYWHERE GAH.
That one paragraph about how America wanted to take Russia and lay him down and take care of him was oddly incredibly romantic. It was romantic in the way that fit America and Russia and what's real.
Yay for including the invasion of Russia! Sorta, since it was...yeah...to do. But, uh, for acknowledging it?
Oh, my babbling, I hope you understand it. And best of luck with your studies so you can quickly get them over with to come back to this.
Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 5/?
anonymous
December 31 2010, 17:16:45 UTC
Late, but happy birthday Russia, and happy new year to all of you! Thank you for all your kind comments! In other news: America is a kinky bastard. I think there'll be actual sex in the next part.America hurriedly shrugs off his coat and gently swings it onto the arm of the couch. He doesn’t think Soviet Union will shoot him, but it’s not completely out of the question, so he tries not to make any sudden movements. He’s only gotten as far as unbuttoning his shirt when he feels the gun jab hard at the side of his head. The cool metal of the muzzle guides him slowly down, until America is kneeling. He doesn’t miss the quick, mocking look Soviet Union shoots over his head at Russia
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Re: Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 5/?
anonymous
January 3 2011, 08:12:06 UTC
Yes, America is a kinky bastard, and oh do we love him for it. Actual sex? Oh boy. I would say not to rush into things just to get to the 'good part', because everything is so good going as it is, but I have a feeling you will give everything the time and attention it deserves. Just judging by how wonderful this is so far. Just curiosity, did you have a particular 1972 historical event in mind there?
I don't think we have to worry about me rushing, anon, if my update speed is any indication... *fails*
With 1972 I was thinking generally of the Vietnam war. That was right before the Paris Peace Accords were signed, when America was trying to withdraw his troops, and I imagine he would have been high-strung from the presidential election to begin with.
Re: Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 5/?
anonymous
January 3 2011, 19:25:56 UTC
Wow, this was pretty hot. I'm mostly wondering if this has happened before, like when Russia became the Soviet Union. Is the transition like easier if they sleep with someone, and that's why they're doing this? And does the same thing happen to other countries when they undergo revolutions or lose large parts of themselves?
Well, as hot as that was, America seemed oddly docile. I know that he has a gun pointed at him, but that probably wouldn't kill a nation, right? I just feel like he should at least be backtalking or something. It seems weird that he's letting the Soviet Union have so much control wtihout any apparent protest or reason.
I'm sure it's happened with other nations before, but it doesn't always happen exactly like this. Having another nation around for reassurance or just company makes the transition easier. I don't think there is necessarily a sexual component to it though - if Russia and America hadn't already been involved sexually I don't think the tension between SU and RF would be taking the form it is here. Anon earlier said something; "Are they gonna have some epic hate sex with Alfred there in the middle because they can't stand to have hate sex with each other or something?" -- not exactly this, but pretty close. I don't want to give the whole thing away though.
My view here is that America isn't protesting because he knew what he was getting into when he agreed to this arrangement. He may not be thrilled with everything they're going to be doing, but he agreed to stay and I think he's enjoying himself a bit. Funny you should mention the gun, actually. I hope to make this more clear as the story progresses, but a lot of what they're doing/
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anonymous
January 4 2011, 17:48:40 UTC
Okay, that makes more sense to me; especially the part about their actions being directed towards each other because of the Stalin portrait. Thanks for replying!
Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 6/?
anonymous
January 27 2011, 06:24:21 UTC
America’s shaken out of the memory by the soft sound of footsteps on the carpet. He turns to see Russia crossing the room, his hand slipping into his pocket. Soviet Union’s boot taps lightly under his chin, America watches Russia casually pull out a switchblade before he turns back to his task. The muscles in his back tighten involuntarily and his mouth becomes sloppy on Soviet Union’s shoe, strings of saliva dripping from his tongue.
Russia stops behind him. There is a soft shhk - America’s fingers grip the carpet - and the cool kiss of metal on the small of his back. He shivers despite himself. Abruptly the knife lifts and catches on his shirt. America winces as the seams of his sleeves press into his shoulders. There is a terrific ripping noise as the fabric of his shirt starts to give way, and America rams forward into Soviet Union’s boots from the force of it. His own saliva is already cool; it dries quickly where it’s smeared across his forehead. He stays that way, immobile but for his hand, which slides up to cup the toe of
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Re: Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 6/?
anonymous
January 27 2011, 06:56:31 UTC
Oh my... Gun play AND knife play??? You are spoiling us now, author!anon! I love how even though the two Russians haven't spoken much, I can still feel the intimidation and the pressure building! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=44800093#t44800093It takes Russia too long to answer the door. America can barely feel his fingers by the time it finally swings inward. Russia is wearing his army uniform, medals painstakingly polished and lined up. America feels his eyebrows inch up - but really, he shouldn’t be surprised ( ... )
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That one paragraph about how America wanted to take Russia and lay him down and take care of him was oddly incredibly romantic. It was romantic in the way that fit America and Russia and what's real.
Yay for including the invasion of Russia! Sorta, since it was...yeah...to do. But, uh, for acknowledging it?
Oh, my babbling, I hope you understand it. And best of luck with your studies so you can quickly get them over with to come back to this.
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Actual sex? Oh boy. I would say not to rush into things just to get to the 'good part', because everything is so good going as it is, but I have a feeling you will give everything the time and attention it deserves. Just judging by how wonderful this is so far.
Just curiosity, did you have a particular 1972 historical event in mind there?
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With 1972 I was thinking generally of the Vietnam war. That was right before the Paris Peace Accords were signed, when America was trying to withdraw his troops, and I imagine he would have been high-strung from the presidential election to begin with.
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I'm mostly wondering if this has happened before, like when Russia became the Soviet Union. Is the transition like easier if they sleep with someone, and that's why they're doing this? And does the same thing happen to other countries when they undergo revolutions or lose large parts of themselves?
Well, as hot as that was, America seemed oddly docile. I know that he has a gun pointed at him, but that probably wouldn't kill a nation, right? I just feel like he should at least be backtalking or something. It seems weird that he's letting the Soviet Union have so much control wtihout any apparent protest or reason.
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My view here is that America isn't protesting because he knew what he was getting into when he agreed to this arrangement. He may not be thrilled with everything they're going to be doing, but he agreed to stay and I think he's enjoying himself a bit. Funny you should mention the gun, actually. I hope to make this more clear as the story progresses, but a lot of what they're doing/ ( ... )
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Russia stops behind him. There is a soft shhk - America’s fingers grip the carpet - and the cool kiss of metal on the small of his back. He shivers despite himself. Abruptly the knife lifts and catches on his shirt. America winces as the seams of his sleeves press into his shoulders. There is a terrific ripping noise as the fabric of his shirt starts to give way, and America rams forward into Soviet Union’s boots from the force of it. His own saliva is already cool; it dries quickly where it’s smeared across his forehead. He stays that way, immobile but for his hand, which slides up to cup the toe of ( ... )
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I love how even though the two Russians haven't spoken much, I can still feel the intimidation and the pressure building! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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