Re: At World's End -- Part 11g
anonymous
November 2 2010, 03:15:50 UTC
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THAT IS A CRUEL CLIFFHANGER, YOU. But I love it madly. XD
God, nothing made me happier than to see this update when I came home this weekend. Seriously, I crave this fic like nothing else and then when it does update, I'm sure it will sate my thirst... but instead I just end up craving even more of it. >.>;; Still, that's the mark of a masterpiece, huh?
Seriously, you have nothing to worry about with this fic. It's enthralling. It takes the time to fully put us into the world, to make us care about each character - even the small ones, like omg, Eduard, my love skyrockets - and to invest in their future. I am so invested. I am invested. And that, for me, is what makes the best possible story. I have a deep, terrible need to see it play out because you've taken the time to get the setting, the people, the atmosphere just right.
And oh. Oh Alfred, sweetheart. His upset and then Russia telling Berwald to let him go... EEEEEEE. X3 I ADMIT. I SQUEALED. (Nothing makes me
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Author!Anon
anonymous
November 3 2010, 00:42:11 UTC
*blinks*
I uh...have no idea how to even respond to such a lovely comment. Thank you sooo much from the very bottom of my heart.
I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much and that you're getting so much out of it and that it's something you crave when it's not being posted. You have no idea how thrilled all of that makes me. It makes me want to write, write, write more.
Hopefully I can continue to live up to your expectation.
Again, thanks so much for the lovely comment. <3 <3 <3
Re: At World's End -- Part 11g
anonymous
November 2 2010, 21:20:29 UTC
Awww I hope Alfred and Eduard indeed become friends. ♥
Author!anon, you're doing an amazing job with this. Okay, a beta might be good because you have quite a lot of spelling errors here and there, but seriously, this story is epic~
I find it a bit weird how Berwald is so protective of Ivan of all people. xD;; I mean, Sweden and Russia have been enemies for centuries... Almost as long as they even existed. But oh well, it's an AU...
WHY?!!!!! JOQW#*$&@(#*$ I pray that you update soon, because I just began to read this, and I love the plot...it's a really fun, but somehow darkish story that just captivates my mind. I checked the last dates, and it's almost a week...which isn't that bad. But I pray that you will update! I don't know how I can tell when you do, but I will be checking every day just to check. :)
Author!Anon
anonymous
November 13 2010, 01:54:37 UTC
I'm glad you found and enjoyed the fic! I generally update the fic about once a month or so...sometimes a little earlier so if you want to check back instead of just bookmarking it or something I'd check back weekly instead of daily.
At World's End -- Part 12a
anonymous
November 16 2010, 01:41:47 UTC
Alfred sat cross legged on the mattress picking nervously at the soft bed clothes that had been placed over it. It was surprisingly comfortable for something that had been folded out and attached together in pieces. He suspected that there had been a spell cast on it to make it feel so thick and soft. He had watched curiously as Ivan had put it together by hand glad to see that Ivan didn't seem to feel the need to use magic for everything. Though there was the soft blue light of a magic orb now lighting the interior of the coach that seemed somehow both smaller and bigger now that it had been turned into a bed
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At World's End -- Part 12b
anonymous
November 16 2010, 01:42:51 UTC
"Relax...just breath..." came Ivan's soft voice from lips still held mere inches away from Alfred's own. Alfred took a shuddery breath. "Good...now open your eyes, Alfred
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At World's End -- Part 12c
anonymous
November 16 2010, 01:43:46 UTC
Alfred shuddered as a hand slid underneath his tunic top and brushed against his skin. He slid his hand underneath and pushed at it slightly. He shivered nervously as Ivan joined their hands together and kissed him again. Softly this time the very whisper of lips against each other
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Re: At World's End -- Part 12c
anonymous
November 16 2010, 02:16:36 UTC
Aw, author-anon, you tease! haha, I'm so glad you updated. It's so cute to see Ivan so considerate and Alfred so flustered. :]
Also: "Our first time will be somewhere filled with comfort and luxury, our first time will be when you are ready for it, more then that you will be eager for it..." Am I shameless for wanting to see how Ivan manages to get Alfred in that state? XD
Oh by the way, just some typo I caught that I thought I'll let you know: Alfred continued to glare but she did not pick up his struggling again. Unless Alfred suddenly turned into a girl (which would be major lol here), it should be he
more then that you will be eager for it... Should be "more than that"
Re: At World's End -- Part 12c
anonymous
November 16 2010, 03:08:59 UTC
Oh gosh Ivan, you're so adorable, and romantic and considerate and... ...The way he says that he knew he would fit, and the fact that we learned at the begining that Ivan had been studying their kingdom so because he wanted to marry one of the twins, and the fact that he actively pushed to marry Alfred makes me think that he's been infatuated with him for quite awhile. Will we learn how and why that happened soon? Also, how old is Ivan? I assume he's about the same age as Alfred, but I don't recall if we've learned. Anyways, I am so stoked for the next chapter you have no idea.
Author!Anon
anonymous
November 18 2010, 02:44:55 UTC
Glad you're enjoying this fic and glad you picked up on certain things about Ivan... ;-)
As to his age it's not yet really been covered in the fic itself because I've been waffling back and forth on certain things but he is older than Alfred. Much, much older than Alfred. Magic makes people age quite a bit slower then they normally would. His age will be covered in upcoming chapters.
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LSJADLKSADKWKLS,AAKA
THAT IS A CRUEL CLIFFHANGER, YOU. But I love it madly. XD
God, nothing made me happier than to see this update when I came home this weekend. Seriously, I crave this fic like nothing else and then when it does update, I'm sure it will sate my thirst... but instead I just end up craving even more of it. >.>;; Still, that's the mark of a masterpiece, huh?
Seriously, you have nothing to worry about with this fic. It's enthralling. It takes the time to fully put us into the world, to make us care about each character - even the small ones, like omg, Eduard, my love skyrockets - and to invest in their future. I am so invested. I am invested. And that, for me, is what makes the best possible story. I have a deep, terrible need to see it play out because you've taken the time to get the setting, the people, the atmosphere just right.
And oh. Oh Alfred, sweetheart. His upset and then Russia telling Berwald to let him go... EEEEEEE. X3 I ADMIT. I SQUEALED. (Nothing makes me ( ... )
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I uh...have no idea how to even respond to such a lovely comment. Thank you sooo much from the very bottom of my heart.
I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much and that you're getting so much out of it and that it's something you crave when it's not being posted. You have no idea how thrilled all of that makes me. It makes me want to write, write, write more.
Hopefully I can continue to live up to your expectation.
Again, thanks so much for the lovely comment. <3 <3 <3
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Author!anon, you're doing an amazing job with this. Okay, a beta might be good because you have quite a lot of spelling errors here and there, but seriously, this story is epic~
I find it a bit weird how Berwald is so protective of Ivan of all people. xD;; I mean, Sweden and Russia have been enemies for centuries... Almost as long as they even existed. But oh well, it's an AU...
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JOQW#*$&@(#*$
I pray that you update soon, because I just began to read this, and I love the plot...it's a really fun, but somehow darkish story that just captivates my mind. I checked the last dates, and it's almost a week...which isn't that bad. But I pray that you will update! I don't know how I can tell when you do, but I will be checking every day just to check. :)
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Thanks again!
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Also:
"Our first time will be somewhere filled with comfort and luxury, our first time will be when you are ready for it, more then that you will be eager for it..."
Am I shameless for wanting to see how Ivan manages to get Alfred in that state? XD
Oh by the way, just some typo I caught that I thought I'll let you know:
Alfred continued to glare but she did not pick up his struggling again.
Unless Alfred suddenly turned into a girl (which would be major lol here), it should be he
more then that you will be eager for it...
Should be "more than that"
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Oh gods...what an embarrassing typo. I'm sorry Alfred...so very sorry... *hangs head and goes to change in own copy*
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"You fit..." he murmured in a sleepy voice. "I knew you would..."
Oh god. That was really cute, ngl.
Oh man. I will be definitely be looking forward to the next part!
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...The way he says that he knew he would fit, and the fact that we learned at the begining that Ivan had been studying their kingdom so because he wanted to marry one of the twins, and the fact that he actively pushed to marry Alfred makes me think that he's been infatuated with him for quite awhile. Will we learn how and why that happened soon?
Also, how old is Ivan? I assume he's about the same age as Alfred, but I don't recall if we've learned.
Anyways, I am so stoked for the next chapter you have no idea.
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As to his age it's not yet really been covered in the fic itself because I've been waffling back and forth on certain things but he is older than Alfred. Much, much older than Alfred. Magic makes people age quite a bit slower then they normally would. His age will be covered in upcoming chapters.
Thanks again!
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I'm ok with nothing happening yet. Gives me something to look forward to.
I hope you update soon.
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