Re: Two Breaths Walking [1b/?]
anonymous
October 29 2010, 16:57:22 UTC
"-alright, got it. Sure thing." Pause, and then a click of tongue. "-yeah yeah got it, Mattie. It's not as if-" Alfred exhaled, sighing. "I know. Don't be such a worrywart! Sometimes I swear you are so damned naggy somtimes, like a mother." Laughter. "K, see you tomorrow buddy!"
Whew. Alfred's shoulders sagged down. Matthew was a good friend, but sometimes he could be rather paranoid. Then again, a snide voice piped up, He knows. Alfred ignored that thought and slipped the phone back into his pocket. He should perhaps stop by the chinese takeaway shop first, and then head home
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Two Breaths Walking [2A/?]
anonymous
October 31 2010, 18:28:08 UTC
Arthur woke up to a throbbing headache. He should have expected that it was a trap-which he did-but he had underestimated how many people the other gang had brought-small frys, they were. Arthur winced. His bandaged hand coming up to touch his cheek gingerly
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Re: Two Breaths Walking [2b/?]
anonymous
October 31 2010, 18:32:11 UTC
-but yet, it explained everything about Alfred. It explained why Alfred would sometimes arrive late, sporting bruises on the least likely of all places that didn't match up with his excuses he gave ("I was playing with my friend's golden retriever! He likes to pounce on people!" "Ahaha, I know, I know! But I kinda got these while playing football with my cousins. They play rough!"), why he had gave some vague answer and changed subjects immediately or go completely tight lipped whenever the topic of his family life was brought up, that quick falter of his goddamned sunny smile whenever the teachers said that Alfred's parents must really had been proud of him for doing so well
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Re: Two Breaths Walking [2b/?]
anonymous
October 31 2010, 19:43:26 UTC
... I really like the way this is going. I just... felt very satisfied when Artie punched him in the jaw. It just seems like something he'd do. I also love your style, with all the pauses and parenthesis... Its very nice.
haha, I really like where this is going and I really want to see how Arthur and Alfred's relationship will change after this (you know, assuming it does...).
Re: Two Breaths Walking [2b/?]
anonymous
November 9 2010, 00:04:21 UTC
My heart has broken for these two. And the fact that Arthur doesn't seem to have anyone looking out for him/missing him at all besides Alfred makes me sad face like crazy.
Did you happen to name this fill after the Vocaloid song of the same name? Cuz that song is trés awesome.
--Really, what was up with Arthur ( ... )
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"-alright, got it. Sure thing." Pause, and then a click of tongue. "-yeah yeah got it, Mattie. It's not as if-" Alfred exhaled, sighing. "I know. Don't be such a worrywart! Sometimes I swear you are so damned naggy somtimes, like a mother." Laughter. "K, see you tomorrow buddy!"
Whew. Alfred's shoulders sagged down. Matthew was a good friend, but sometimes he could be rather paranoid. Then again, a snide voice piped up, He knows. Alfred ignored that thought and slipped the phone back into his pocket. He should perhaps stop by the chinese takeaway shop first, and then head home ( ... )
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I think im going to be saying this alot, but poor alfred :( poor arthur! :(
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i love how arthur wants to save alfred...it's very sweet. <3
i'm going to be stalking this~
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Please update soon!
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Did you happen to name this fill after the Vocaloid song of the same name? Cuz that song is trés awesome.
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