Beautiful World 1a/?
anonymous
November 2 2010, 06:30:47 UTC
Well, here be the first part. I want this fill to stay relatively neutral in length, but I can’t promise anything. A happy ending hasn’t been established, unless the OP wishes for one. WARNINGS:Genderbent!England, non-con, forced!pregnancy, post-apocalyptic world, slavery, forced submission, mildly creeper!Rome, and that’s pretty much the gist of it. I will do my best to update every other week, but school is kicking my ass at the moment.When she was young-too young to understand the concept of secrecy, of danger, of safety-her brothers chopped off her hair with a rusty knife and gave her a new name
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Beautiful World 2a/?
anonymous
November 2 2010, 06:33:32 UTC
She didn’t hate her brothers, but she sure as hell wouldn’t be caught dead saying so. They only had each other after all, and they knew it too. The building they lived in was far from the city. It would be too dangerous to live close to the bigger towns, rundown as they were. Just because Alice didn’t dress like a girl didn’t mean someone wouldn’t recognize her for who she was. No matter how much they bullied and teased her, Alice’s brothers weren’t willing to lose another sister
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Beautiful World 3a/?
anonymous
November 2 2010, 06:35:44 UTC
“We’re having visitors,” Darren says just as Alice is about to open her mouth. Alice feels something cold slither down her spine. They’d never had visitors before. Hell, most people avoided the weird, creepy Kirkland family that lived in isolation and never contributed anything to the small, sad little community of survivors down in the city. “No time. Change into the most atrocious pair of clothes you can find.” A pause. “Wear something of Sean’s
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Beautiful World 4a/?
anonymous
November 2 2010, 06:37:51 UTC
The man smiles graciously, boyish looks and all. Alice feels like stabbing his eye with a fork. To stop herself, she looks at the women instead. One is fair haired, her skin like olives. The other is dark skinned and black-haired. They do not meet her eyes, rather, they look down at the ground. Alice wonders if they, as women, can tell that she is one of them
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I am in love anon. Two fills appear in the space of a day and both are amazing! You guys rock, seriously :D
Now this one, oh this one I adore it. The complete build up from the start that tells of desperation and the sorry-state the world is in. Most of all, I think I came out of this adoring Alice's brothers most, I love seeing the UK!sibs written as actually caring about each other and here it was portrayed so heartbreakingly, I really hope Rome didn't kill them :x (and the mention of an older sister... Ireland? ouch! D: )
Poor fem!UK, hopfully America will be um... kind? ysefgus *waits so eagerly for next part*
Re: Beautiful World 5a/?
anonymous
November 2 2010, 17:40:19 UTC
You know what this setting reminds me of OP? The Fallout game series, with the long ago nuclear war and mutated animals and lack of safe water, which is awesome. This promises to be very interesting :]
Re: Beautiful World 5a/?
anonymous
November 4 2010, 20:28:42 UTC
OMGGG
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the fill sooo much!!!! From UK sibs sticking to each other, to creepy, creepy Rome who can tell just with a glance that arthur is actually alice, the description of the two women/slaves (bowing their heads, implying that they're not of the same level), alice's frantic, panicked escape. When you so much as wrote 'the man laughs', i kinda guessed it's alfred. then the blue eyes gave it away. And the last phrase made me inhale sharply and dread.
The descriptions and the tone are just right.
I would very much hope for a semi-happy ending. That alfred ended up deciding to keep her for himself (or only share with matt?) and not sold her to a life of being pregnant with strangers' children before losing the babies straight after she gave birth. losing her womb due to miscarriage may probably be the best ending there is...she could still be alive and not have to go through so much of such pain...
i'm being morbid. the point is...i love this fill so much!! Awaiting updates faithfully!
Well, here be the first part. I want this fill to stay relatively neutral in length, but I can’t promise anything. A happy ending hasn’t been established, unless the OP wishes for one. WARNINGS:Genderbent!England, non-con, forced!pregnancy, post-apocalyptic world, slavery, forced submission, mildly creeper!Rome, and that’s pretty much the gist of it. I will do my best to update every other week, but school is kicking my ass at the moment.When she was young-too young to understand the concept of secrecy, of danger, of safety-her brothers chopped off her hair with a rusty knife and gave her a new name ( ... )
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Now this one, oh this one I adore it. The complete build up from the start that tells of desperation and the sorry-state the world is in. Most of all, I think I came out of this adoring Alice's brothers most, I love seeing the UK!sibs written as actually caring about each other and here it was portrayed so heartbreakingly, I really hope Rome didn't kill them :x (and the mention of an older sister... Ireland? ouch! D: )
Poor fem!UK, hopfully America will be um... kind? ysefgus *waits so eagerly for next part*
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the fill sooo much!!!! From UK sibs sticking to each other, to creepy, creepy Rome who can tell just with a glance that arthur is actually alice, the description of the two women/slaves (bowing their heads, implying that they're not of the same level), alice's frantic, panicked escape. When you so much as wrote 'the man laughs', i kinda guessed it's alfred. then the blue eyes gave it away. And the last phrase made me inhale sharply and dread.
The descriptions and the tone are just right.
I would very much hope for a semi-happy ending. That alfred ended up deciding to keep her for himself (or only share with matt?) and not sold her to a life of being pregnant with strangers' children before losing the babies straight after she gave birth. losing her womb due to miscarriage may probably be the best ending there is...she could still be alive and not have to go through so much of such pain...
i'm being morbid. the point is...i love this fill so much!! Awaiting updates faithfully!
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to be honest i want to see her get through this forced pregnancy
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