I really like this beginning. Interesting, that you chose to narrate it in first person, and China's, no less. I don't think I've ever read a POV China fic! You have already set up the major points of conflict here, ideological differences and being too busy for the other; can't wait to see how they develop! And Ivan already made an appearance, yum~~
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Red and Yellow Against the Stars and Stripes (0.2/?)
anonymous
November 9 2010, 10:20:22 UTC
Every time I see Anne, my secretary, I see what my wife, Wang Yue could not give me. Anne is like sunshine, Yue is like darkness. And I didn't say that because their hair colour by the way
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OP is back! Again, I really liked the update, seeing the other side. Not much about "the secretary" yet, but I got a strong feeling about Al and his personality. Workaholic much?XD Even though, when things aren't good at home, people tend to hang around workplace more often, so that fits really well. Can't wait to see what's next!
OP prefers Happy Endings always, but if you have in mind a good Sad Ending, I will also love it! ^^ post to the Fills Page, author anon! More people have to read this, and othewise they can only find this fill by chance!
All right then! But Op, I'm really sorry but I have major exams ATM for a month, so I won't be back till Christmas ><. I'll try to update within this week, if I didn't I'm really really sorry.
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I really like this beginning. Interesting, that you chose to narrate it in first person, and China's, no less. I don't think I've ever read a POV China fic! You have already set up the major points of conflict here, ideological differences and being too busy for the other; can't wait to see how they develop! And Ivan already made an appearance, yum~~
Post in Fills Page, author anon! Everybody deserves to read it^^
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OP prefers Happy Endings always, but if you have in mind a good Sad Ending, I will also love it! ^^
post to the Fills Page, author anon! More people have to read this, and othewise they can only find this fill by chance!
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