Lithuania/Poland - Flipping out during sex
anonymous
November 9 2010, 22:17:51 UTC
Lithuania and Poland get back together/get together for the first time after being separated for a long time - partitions, war, Russia kept them apart, whatever you chose. There's been so much build up, they've been waiting for this for so long...
... and one of them freaks out during sex. Either freezing up, or getting really mixed up, not knowing what to do anymore, feeling ill, crying... Just getting totally overwhelmed by everything. Cue embarrassment/comfort, and stuff. I'd prefer if there was no rapetruck!Russia related drama, if you can avoid it, but Russia-induced general mindfuck is totally fine!
as a bonus? They can't finish, and end up cuddling instead. 'Better luck next time' and all that, you know. There'll be other times.
Between These Sheets of Paper: Prelude [part 1/3]
anonymous
November 16 2010, 23:50:53 UTC
Lithuania’s hands are gentle, that at least is one thing that hasn’t changed. They had always been gentle as Lithuania cared for the animals, cooked in the kitchen, did the washing up, mended Poland’s tunics. They had been gentle when Lithuania touched Poland, whether it was a quick touch on the shoulder as they worked together in the fields or as he held Poland close at night. The only time Poland can remember Lithuania not being gentle towards him was when he tried to take Vilnius. Even then Poland could see in Lithuania’s eyes that he hadn’t wanted to hurt Poland, that it had broken his heart to do so
( ... )
Re: Between These Sheets of Paper: Prelude [part 2/3]
anonymous
November 16 2010, 23:53:14 UTC
When Poland comes out of the bathroom Lithuania is already in bed, reading, dressing in a t-shirt and soft pajama pants. The room feels warm and Lithuania’s hair looks soft against his neck, his lips full. Poland crawls onto the bed and across to kneel beside Lithuania
( ... )
Re: Between These Sheets of Paper: Prelude [part 3/3]
anonymous
November 16 2010, 23:54:59 UTC
Poland’s sees that his hands are shaking as he brings them up on front of his face and curses himself silently. He can’t believe this is happening, after all this time, after he’d wanted this so much. He closes his eyes and takes a long steady breath. When he opens his eyes again and looks to the side Lithuania is watching him, unhappiness and concern etched into his face
( ... )
Re: Between These Sheets of Paper: Prelude [Notes]
anonymous
November 17 2010, 00:07:52 UTC
Notes:
-please forgive my poor editing, I hope anons read and like this anyway.
-Poland refers to Hans Michael Frank who was Governor-General of part of Poland during Nazi occupation. He was executed for crimes against humanity after the end of the war.
Re: Between These Sheets of Paper: Prelude [Notes]
anonymous
November 17 2010, 01:46:51 UTC
What a heartbreaking but beautiful fill. It's really rare to find a good, serious fanfiction about those two. I love how you described their relationship.
Re: Between These Sheets of Paper: Prelude [Notes]
anonymous
November 17 2010, 04:29:50 UTC
Really beautiful. You made it so realistic, the trauma that Poland must have suffered, and the affection between the two of them still as clear. Wonderfully written!
Ohhh! I love this! It's gorgeous, and very realistic, too. The way you described the freak out - it's like yo uwent into my head to see what I wanted! I love the characterization you put in this, too, and and and the way you show the relationship, oh my god. ♥
I'm really glad someone filled this, and filled it well the way you did.
... and one of them freaks out during sex. Either freezing up, or getting really mixed up, not knowing what to do anymore, feeling ill, crying... Just getting totally overwhelmed by everything. Cue embarrassment/comfort, and stuff. I'd prefer if there was no rapetruck!Russia related drama, if you can avoid it, but Russia-induced general mindfuck is totally fine!
as a bonus? They can't finish, and end up cuddling instead. 'Better luck next time' and all that, you know. There'll be other times.
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-please forgive my poor editing, I hope anons read and like this anyway.
-Poland refers to Hans Michael Frank who was Governor-General of part of Poland during Nazi occupation. He was executed for crimes against humanity after the end of the war.
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It's really rare to find a good, serious fanfiction about those two. I love how you described their relationship.
Is there any chance for more of this story?
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I'm really glad someone filled this, and filled it well the way you did.
you made my week - that you so much. :) :) :)
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