England/America, glove fetish
anonymous
November 17 2010, 17:18:47 UTC
America finds himself fascinated by England's gloved hands: his movements, the texture of the fabric (leather), the sound his fingers make against each others, the smell of the material, etc. and gets really aroused by it.
I would like to see this arousal turn into sex and see England giving America a handjob, frotagge and/or finger fuck him with his gloves still on.
Bonus: Glove play: pulling them with his teeth, making America to lick his fingers, anything the Author!Anon can think of Bonus 2: America licks both his and England's come from the gloves.
Re: England/America, glove fetish
anonymous
November 18 2010, 03:06:53 UTC
AuthourAnon apoligizes for fail backstory. I could really only think of smut for this. Really.
America has to admit it to himself, he had a major hand fetish. Especially Arthur's hands, the way the long fingers smoothed his hair back, brushed the steering wheel on their way to a meeting, or flicked gently through paperwork. Thin but strong, like the rest of England, capable of inflicting hurt or, imagined America, the sexiest of touches. Was he going to admit that to England? Hell nooo In fact one of these days- WHAM! "Sorry I'm late everybody, my car broke down in my garage and I had to ride my motorcycle. In the rain." sighed England. Everyone stared, most of them wondering What the hell? I didn't know England rode motorcycles Everyone except Alfred. He was staring at Arthur's hand, resting on the door. To be specific, the drop of rain running down the back of the leather glove he wore. The fucking leather gloves he was wearing America shifted in his seat, his tailored jeans suddenly way too tight. Oblivious to his
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Re: England/America, glove fetish
anonymous
November 18 2010, 03:46:52 UTC
Anon you've got some real potential here, but so many errors it's hard to read. :( A beta would really help you, but I'm going to point out a few things now. (Hope you don't mind XP) For one thing, before you end a quotation (") there has to be some kind of punctuation. Also this may be LJ's fault (lord knows it's gotten me) but you need o have spaces between your paragraphs. Plus "laved" is not a word. Anyway like I said, get someone to beta for you before you post next time and then you will make a lot of people happy :)
I do think you have great potential here, but there are a few mistakes that an editor could catch. What it feels like is something that "rolled hot off the press" rather than something you went back and re-edited.
Re: England/America, glove fetish
anonymous
November 20 2010, 03:08:57 UTC
Gah! So sorry for editing mistakes, but I tend to rush a bit when I get really into a story, and gloves and leather are both kinks of mine. *ahem* I'll do better in part two!
Re: England/America, glove fetish Part 2/?
anonymous
November 20 2010, 04:48:12 UTC
America had very little time to ponder the question as he felt his zipper slide down and a hand dip into his pants, massaging his member through his underwear. "Really Alfred, I would have at least expected you to be commando at times like these. Alas, I've got to work with what I have." said England, feigning a dramatic sigh. America just rolled his hips up and moaned.
But damn the Brit, it didn't get him anywhere. England's hand remained ever-so-lightly resting on top of his groin, providing nothing more than a teasing friction.
Suck them like you want to suck me, like you want to be sucked the words rang through Alfred's head as he got the perfect, evil idea to get what he wanted. He shifted, then grabbed the back of Arthur's wrist and pushed it into his mouth until the man's hand was nearly all the way in. He took those wonderful, leather-smoothed fingers as far as he could, gagging a little at first, tongue never hesitating in its frantic attempt to clean the leather
( ... )
Re: England/America, glove fetish Part 2/?
anonymous
November 20 2010, 04:50:33 UTC
AuthorAnon here saying that's all folks! Hope everyone loved it, feel free to comment. I may be writing more leatherslut!America in the future, so keep an eye out. Hugs and love, AuthorAnon
Re: OP!Anon
anonymous
November 21 2010, 01:54:12 UTC
*authoranon does happy dance* Yay! First time writing smut to that degree and actually using some of my personal kinks, so I'm happy you liked it! I was so worried everyone would dislike it, I'm sooo relieved it was well recieved! On to the next fill! Ciao <3!
I would like to see this arousal turn into sex and see England giving America a handjob, frotagge and/or finger fuck him with his gloves still on.
Bonus: Glove play: pulling them with his teeth, making America to lick his fingers, anything the Author!Anon can think of
Bonus 2: America licks both his and England's come from the gloves.
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America has to admit it to himself, he had a major hand fetish. Especially Arthur's hands, the way the long fingers smoothed his hair back, brushed the steering wheel on their way to a meeting, or flicked gently through paperwork. Thin but strong, like the rest of England, capable of inflicting hurt or, imagined America, the sexiest of touches.
Was he going to admit that to England? Hell nooo In fact one of these days-
WHAM!
"Sorry I'm late everybody, my car broke down in my garage and I had to ride my motorcycle. In the rain." sighed England. Everyone stared, most of them wondering What the hell? I didn't know England rode motorcycles
Everyone except Alfred. He was staring at Arthur's hand, resting on the door.
To be specific, the drop of rain running down the back of the leather glove he wore.
The fucking leather gloves he was wearing America shifted in his seat, his tailored jeans suddenly way too tight. Oblivious to his ( ... )
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http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/lave
I do think you have great potential here, but there are a few mistakes that an editor could catch. What it feels like is something that "rolled hot off the press" rather than something you went back and re-edited.
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ReCaptcha says: Korbinian Thoria. Well then.
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I'd love it if you put a space between paragraphs, though. OP!Anon has a very crappy sight.
Once again, thank you!
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Dirty-talking, leather-clad England? Win fucking win.
Please continue, anon!
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But damn the Brit, it didn't get him anywhere. England's hand remained ever-so-lightly resting on top of his groin, providing nothing more than a teasing friction.
Suck them like you want to suck me, like you want to be sucked the words rang through Alfred's head as he got the perfect, evil idea to get what he wanted. He shifted, then grabbed the back of Arthur's wrist and pushed it into his mouth until the man's hand was nearly all the way in. He took those wonderful, leather-smoothed fingers as far as he could, gagging a little at first, tongue never hesitating in its frantic attempt to clean the leather ( ... )
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Hugs and love,
AuthorAnon
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*prepares stalking supplies*
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Shall I set up a campfire and bust out the stalking-this-thread-forever marshmallows? :D
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This is way too hot. The dirty talk made me weak in the knees.
You are a genius, Author!Anon
And thank you for the spacing :D
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I was so worried everyone would dislike it, I'm sooo relieved it was well recieved! On to the next fill! Ciao <3!
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I would gladly like to see more.
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