America and England - Wetdreams & Frottage.
anonymous
November 17 2010, 16:06:09 UTC
*Ahem* Oh man i'm such a perv.....
America and England are sharing a bed, for whatever reason the author wishes to give. Where the bed is, is also up to anon (eithers house, at a hotel due to a world meeting etc, i don't mind at all.) They aren't in a relationship. They do have feelings for one another, but they are choosing to ignore them/too scared to speak out/don't know how the other feels etc.
During the night they both end up having wet dreams about each other and wake up in the morning tangled in one anothers limps in a very sticky mess. I'd like to see how they both react to this in the morning and if it pushes them into confessing etc.
Details of each dream would be very much appreciated!!
Bonus 1 - They end up frotting each other in their sleep as their dreams progress.
Bonus 2 - One of them wakes up after their orgasm and witnesses the other in the midst of their dream and hears them saying their name.
OP is a very happy bunny this morning. This was the perfect ending to an amazing fill. I'm so glad Arthur didn't fly off the handle or bolt for the door!
The way Arthur defined the two of them was spot on! I melted slightly when i read that just cos it was so true.
And ohhoho, my mind is working overtime with the possibilities of how they are spending the rest of their night *cough*
I hope you de-anon soon so i can shower you with more praise. I really enjoy your writing style so would love to read more of your work.
idiot fail!anon from below
anonymous
December 2 2010, 07:34:46 UTC
SQUEEEEEE
Thank you for actually bothering with characterization! Waaaaahhhh I don't even care about the porn because the cuteness of their mutual misunderstanding is just so canonical and so THEM that it makes it so much more important when they do finally meet thoughts!
I love you and bajeezus I hope I can find your deanon soon because I want to stalk the rest of your stories.
Re: And Then, And Then [1c/3]
anonymous
December 2 2010, 07:09:57 UTC
It's already been mentioned how awesomely and actually dream-like you wrote the dream sequence, so I will instead praise the fact that you wrote a USUK story from America's perspective. That NEVER happens! Well, okay, maybe it does, but I've never seen it. Whenever first person is happening, or even limited third person, the perspective is always Englands so that the narrative can slobber all over how attractive America is and. . . I sort of prefer England. It's great that his sexiness can shine through!
Anyway going back to my primary head, I also loved how Dream!England was described as having no ligaments, because I just took a lab test about muscles yesterday and that makes me giggle because it would be so true if he could really sling his leg over America's shoulder. Oooooooh you took a vaguely mid-quality-pornish plot and made it into something AWESOME! GO YOU!
And I will be saving this story in my favourites and waiting for an update in it, yes I will.
America and England are sharing a bed, for whatever reason the author wishes to give. Where the bed is, is also up to anon (eithers house, at a hotel due to a world meeting etc, i don't mind at all.) They aren't in a relationship. They do have feelings for one another, but they are choosing to ignore them/too scared to speak out/don't know how the other feels etc.
During the night they both end up having wet dreams about each other and wake up in the morning tangled in one anothers limps in a very sticky mess. I'd like to see how they both react to this in the morning and if it pushes them into confessing etc.
Details of each dream would be very much appreciated!!
Bonus 1 - They end up frotting each other in their sleep as their dreams progress.
Bonus 2 - One of them wakes up after their orgasm and witnesses the other in the midst of their dream and hears them saying their name.
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OP is a very happy bunny this morning. This was the perfect ending to an amazing fill. I'm so glad Arthur didn't fly off the handle or bolt for the door!
The way Arthur defined the two of them was spot on! I melted slightly when i read that just cos it was so true.
And ohhoho, my mind is working overtime with the possibilities of how they are spending the rest of their night *cough*
I hope you de-anon soon so i can shower you with more praise. I really enjoy your writing style so would love to read more of your work.
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Thank you for actually bothering with characterization! Waaaaahhhh I don't even care about the porn because the cuteness of their mutual misunderstanding is just so canonical and so THEM that it makes it so much more important when they do finally meet thoughts!
I love you and bajeezus I hope I can find your deanon soon because I want to stalk the rest of your stories.
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Anyway going back to my primary head, I also loved how Dream!England was described as having no ligaments, because I just took a lab test about muscles yesterday and that makes me giggle because it would be so true if he could really sling his leg over America's shoulder. Oooooooh you took a vaguely mid-quality-pornish plot and made it into something AWESOME! GO YOU!
And I will be saving this story in my favourites and waiting for an update in it, yes I will.
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Well. . . WHOOPEE!!
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