Russia/France dancer AU
anonymous
December 10 2010, 00:28:49 UTC
so I want an AU story were Francis and Ivan are both male ballet dancers.
Dancing partners? One is a fan of the other? They are rivals? Teacher and student?
The details are really up to anon's imagination. As long as they end up together. Human names preferred obviously. As many other characters as you want to bring in are welcome, just bounce side pairings (if there are any) off me first.
Re: Pas de Deux (1/?)
anonymous
December 15 2010, 21:44:10 UTC
Anon, I like your writing style a lot and I think this has a lot of potential, but maybe you should consider bouncing the next parts off a beta? I seriously don't mean this as an offence and I'll keep reading regardless (you might not have time to check with a beta, or it might be too hard to find, I'd understand), but sometimes the lack of punctuaction and some mispellings make the writing a bit hard to follow and that's really a pity.
Like I said, I hope you continue regardless. Your characterization is really nice (I really like the dialogues) and I like your Russia a lot, he's very sweet<3.
Other potential filler
anonymous
December 15 2010, 21:46:08 UTC
Pfff I was thrilled to find out some one else was also gonna give it a try <33 It seems we both took a different approach to the request <33 that's cool! That way we can deliver to fresh stories to OP ^^ The only thing that surprised me was that you choose the title I was gonna choose >< but oh well that's easily fixed and I actually found it extremely amusing. Anyway, I can't wait to read more of this <333333333 and omg! Petrushka yess please!!! *loves that ballet*
I really love this story the way you write it is beautiful and I'm really intrigued about where it's going to go next.
A quest though, could you post this to the fills post please? I'm not sure other reader realize you've updated which is a shame because it's a great story.
Pas de Deux (3b/?)
anonymous
January 25 2012, 08:24:37 UTC
He is teasing but what he doesn’t know is just how much it embarrasses Ivan. By now others would be disgusted or annoyed when Francis link ever single conversation to sex. But Ivan feels awkward every time. Only to get ride of the feeling he talks
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Re: Pas de Deux (3b/?)
anonymous
January 27 2012, 21:25:20 UTC
Wonderful. Absolutely beautifully written, this whole thing really is and has such a strong melancholy feel to it without getting to oppressive levels which really suits a story involving two men and ballet (though honestly my relationship with ballet may be why I feel that way). I just adore this fill and the way you write so much. Plus Ivan and Francis are a pairing that I log and feel like there is never enough stuff with the two of them. Oh anon don't stop writing this fill until its complete ♥
Dancing partners?
One is a fan of the other?
They are rivals?
Teacher and student?
The details are really up to anon's imagination. As long as they end up together. Human names preferred obviously. As many other characters as you want to bring in are welcome, just bounce side pairings (if there are any) off me first.
Bonus: if it's set sometime during the Cold War.
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Please update soon! I want to know what happens!!!!
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I'd offer but I am not a native speaker. You can try to ask somebody on this thread, thought? http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15405.html
Like I said, I hope you continue regardless. Your characterization is really nice (I really like the dialogues) and I like your Russia a lot, he's very sweet<3.
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It seems we both took a different approach to the request <33 that's cool! That way we can deliver to fresh stories to OP ^^
The only thing that surprised me was that you choose the title I was gonna choose >< but oh well that's easily fixed and I actually found it extremely amusing.
Anyway, I can't wait to read more of this <333333333
and omg! Petrushka yess please!!! *loves that ballet*
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A quest though, could you post this to the fills post please? I'm not sure other reader realize you've updated which is a shame because it's a great story.
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