China/America, America’s body as appeasement for the lends
anonymous
December 30 2010, 08:51:58 UTC
America is deeply indebted to China. His leaders ask him to seduce and offer himself and his body to the oldest nation, to make him amenable to keep with the lends and not call in the debts
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This fill is full of flashbacks. I put flashbacks in {} and also separated them with -- and a new line. Hopefully it should be OK to follow.
OP, this focuses pretty heavily on the guilt which I know was just a bonus but I kind of took it and ran with it. I hope it's ok!
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{America slams the door behind his ambassador and collapses against it when his knees go out a moment later.
“What?” He gapes at the ceiling. “What the fuck, you bastardLuckily it’s only a 10-minute cab ride from the airport to his house - he stares at the dirty ceiling of the car and tries to pretend he doesn’t feel China still on his skin. China isn’t anywhere near, but he blushes at the memory of cornering him after a meeting, China’s knowing eyes roaming all over his face: stupid little America, got himself into debts he can’t pay off
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China folds his hands into his sleeves. “You’re hardly in a position to be making demands.”
America feels a blush hot under his collar. He swallows.
“You will wear whatever I give you,” China says, “without a fuss.”
America accepts the trade. “Yeah. Yeah, okay. Sure”}
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Something inside him spills over and he crumples against the shower wall, the tiles leeching cold into his skin. His shoulders quiver, but he won’t cry - he won’t cry - heroes don’t cry goddamnit! His ass still aches from the stretch of the plug; his stomach clenches into itself at the humiliation.
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{“Say, ‘meow’ like a good kitty.”
America looks up, his guts squirming: the plastic teeth on the kitty-ears headband dig into his scalp and the scratching elastics on the bikini bra and miniskirt scrape against his skin. The butt plug attached to his tail is stretching him painfully - and bottoming is always hard for him, even with someone he trusts (he had a panic attack once when Canada went too fast, and Canada is the most nonthreatening
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6/6 and a/n
anonymous
January 3 2011, 23:56:52 UTC
America startles awake when the sun is already orange and low on the horizon. He must have fallen asleep crying. His cheeks are still tight, and his feet ache - the bottoms are covered in scabs and slivers of porcelain. The smell of rubbing alcohol still lingers in his nose. He stares out the window at his neighbor’s window-boxes, her marigolds fluttering in the wind. Takes a deep breath and feels the ache squeezing his chest a little looser, loose enough for him to settle his shoulders back and take another
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Author Anon, thank you so much for this wonderful fill. I loved the structure, and also the scenes you decided to show us, they are so kinky but all the wrongness of an unbalanced sexual encounter is there, all there. America's emotions were raw and strong, and you feel really bad for him even as he goes on a rage destroying everything Made in China I thought he'd be left in a completely destroyed home, lol And the uplifting ending made me smile. Nothing can beat America and his optimism, after all ^^
the only thing I regret is the fact that, losing China's angle of why he does all that, he's left looking like an unnecesarily cruel villain...but the fill was so good, I can totally overlook that. Also, he has weird and amusing fetishes xD
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anonymous
January 4 2011, 03:53:18 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it, OP! Especially the formatting; I was worried about that but glad to hear it worked.
and I had been originally wanting to make him smash up more stuff Made in China (I have my own bucketload of issues with that and the scene was so therapeutic to write haha) but I felt it was a little too much: I see America as kind of impulsive and emotional and not having the best control of his strength at times, but he's not violent by nature.
I see how that happens but I'm just terrible with multiple POV stories sorry :/ I think in this story China really is being spiteful and cruel (although of course he isn't to blame for America's debt; that's all us /o\), but the West was cruel to him for so long that it's a very understandable reaction. His cruelty has a whole legacy of violence behind it and it's definitely not a black and white villain/victim situation. Also I totally took the Shinatty-chan thing and ran with it for his kinks haha
Lol, Made in China stuff makes me think of Big Brother: it's everywhere, watching you xD
yeah, I understood China's motivations, but the fact that we didn't see inside his head...anyway, the subtle undercurrent of dub-con is one of the stregths of the fill, the fact that America consented, in a way, to this, so China's treatment makes it better than if he had been tame. and the kinks, lol
Re: 6/6 and a/n
anonymous
January 4 2011, 02:36:56 UTC
I'm so incredible happy that you didn't make him end up having a complete guilt feast (its all my fault etc) because YES it IS America's fault (and Alfred was most likely involved too since he is the personification) but China agreed to do something so horrid (rape) and his own ambassador arranged the 'meetings' (rape sessions). So, Alfred should feel some guilt/regret but China is the one who agreed to be such a douche TT.TT
The ending is so realistic. America is often in denial about himself and he is also a very strong nation. Combine those two things and you get that ending. This...I wouldn't mind a sequel because your writing so different/cool but I know it ends here and thats okay too.
A!A (warning: tl;dr)
anonymous
January 4 2011, 04:19:43 UTC
I find it so interesting that you see this as obviously rape because I thought of it as more dub-con basically because China doesn't necessarily know about how badly America's government is coercing him into doing this. I think if anyone's guilty of rape here it's really the humans who arranged the whole thing. But with the guilt, I just don't see it in America's character to sit around being guilty: sooner or later he's going to up and try to do something about it!
I don't think I could write a sequel because I'd have to do too much economic research and I just don't have the time right now, but I do like to think that America isn't just in denial and we will be able to get through this (if we can stop the stupid infighting, accept that it's going to be tough, and focus on the damn problem instead of petty political agendas). One guy with a laptop is a little ridiculous though so if that's what you're talking about then yeah, he's going to end up needing hella help. I totally don't have tons of headcanon about America's ridiculous
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anonymous
January 5 2011, 05:59:13 UTC
I do see it as rape because of how America reacted after wards but I can see how it is also more like borderline rape and dubcon (he "technically agreed" to it and wasn't screaming no).
Yes, the humans were guilty but I can't think that such an incredibly old nation couldn't see how much America /was not enjoying/. Especially after, seeing how America could barely even get it up. The humans arranged it but by agreeing to it and continuing it instead of paying attention to how America felt China agreed to rape him. Simply placing the blame on the humans here is not correct! China is old enough decide for himself whether he was raping someone and old enough to know how 'diplomacy' in these situations works.
You could always just make it Au or say its somewhere in the future without giving a specific time period. I don't see that as lazy but as creative. ^^ Of course its perfectly fine as is!
Captcha- woah I just got Asian characters (and benzol) on this thing haha
Well, I think you can consent to something without enjoying it (I consent to being treated by my dentist and I sure don't enjoy that!). You do make a good point that China should be old enough to infer what's going on; I hadn't really thought about that angle of things. But I know that everyone has a different personal line between noncon and dubcon and at a certain point there really isn't much use arguing about it. Anyway, I'm just happy you cared enough to leave such a thoughtful comment and discuss it with me! So thanks again for reading :D
However that is helpful and completely different to being sold off by humans, taken advantage of by a fellow nation who is waaay older, and then traumatized enough by the end of it that he smashed anything made by china. America even mentioned he barely consents to Canada topping which makes it dubcon/borderline rape in my eyes.
Umm now it seems I'm arguing with you sorry ...I didnt mean to come of so aggressive. If you could see my facial expressions it be relaxed and not pissy. ^^; sorryz *scurries away*
Yeah, but my point was "not enjoying it" does not automatically equal "not consenting to it." If I don't want to do something, I can still consent to do it because I realize it's necessary: America quite obviously doesn't want to be there, but from China's POV that doesn't necessarily mean he's not consenting. But it's still all kinds of levels of creepy and wrong of course; I guess I just see it as more dubious.
And the Canada thing: it's not that he doesn't consent, but rather that he just has Issues about being penetrated, and they have to take it super slow (like literally, [one finger] [two fingers] "no wait too fast go back to one" slow) - his problem with Canada was that one time Canada went a little too fast and America freaked, not that he wasn't consenting to the sex. All of which would have been a lot clearer if I had actually explained the rest of that story (the part where Canada then slowed down until America was comfortable again instead of shoving America all up on his dick the way China did) instead of leaving all
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OP, this focuses pretty heavily on the guilt which I know was just a bonus but I kind of took it and ran with it. I hope it's ok!
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{America slams the door behind his ambassador and collapses against it when his knees go out a moment later.
“What?” He gapes at the ceiling. “What the fuck, you bastardLuckily it’s only a 10-minute cab ride from the airport to his house - he stares at the dirty ceiling of the car and tries to pretend he doesn’t feel China still on his skin. China isn’t anywhere near, but he blushes at the memory of cornering him after a meeting, China’s knowing eyes roaming all over his face: stupid little America, got himself into debts he can’t pay off ( ... )
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{“No poop.”
China folds his hands into his sleeves. “You’re hardly in a position to be making demands.”
America feels a blush hot under his collar. He swallows.
“You will wear whatever I give you,” China says, “without a fuss.”
America accepts the trade. “Yeah. Yeah, okay. Sure”}
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Something inside him spills over and he crumples against the shower wall, the tiles leeching cold into his skin. His shoulders quiver, but he won’t cry - he won’t cry - heroes don’t cry goddamnit! His ass still aches from the stretch of the plug; his stomach clenches into itself at the humiliation.
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{“Say, ‘meow’ like a good kitty.”
America looks up, his guts squirming: the plastic teeth on the kitty-ears headband dig into his scalp and the scratching elastics on the bikini bra and miniskirt scrape against his skin. The butt plug attached to his tail is stretching him painfully - and bottoming is always hard for him, even with someone he trusts (he had a panic attack once when Canada went too fast, and Canada is the most nonthreatening ( ... )
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Author Anon, thank you so much for this wonderful fill. I loved the structure, and also the scenes you decided to show us, they are so kinky but all the wrongness of an unbalanced sexual encounter is there, all there. America's emotions were raw and strong, and you feel really bad for him even as he goes on a rage destroying everything Made in China I thought he'd be left in a completely destroyed home, lol
And the uplifting ending made me smile. Nothing can beat America and his optimism, after all ^^
the only thing I regret is the fact that, losing China's angle of why he does all that, he's left looking like an unnecesarily cruel villain...but the fill was so good, I can totally overlook that. Also, he has weird and amusing fetishes xD
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and I had been originally wanting to make him smash up more stuff Made in China (I have my own bucketload of issues with that and the scene was so therapeutic to write haha) but I felt it was a little too much: I see America as kind of impulsive and emotional and not having the best control of his strength at times, but he's not violent by nature.
I see how that happens but I'm just terrible with multiple POV stories sorry :/ I think in this story China really is being spiteful and cruel (although of course he isn't to blame for America's debt; that's all us /o\), but the West was cruel to him for so long that it's a very understandable reaction. His cruelty has a whole legacy of violence behind it and it's definitely not a black and white villain/victim situation. Also I totally took the Shinatty-chan thing and ran with it for his kinks haha
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yeah, I understood China's motivations, but the fact that we didn't see inside his head...anyway, the subtle undercurrent of dub-con is one of the stregths of the fill, the fact that America consented, in a way, to this, so China's treatment makes it better than if he had been tame. and the kinks, lol
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The ending is so realistic. America is often in denial about himself and he is also a very strong nation. Combine those two things and you get that ending. This...I wouldn't mind a sequel because your writing so different/cool but I know it ends here and thats okay too.
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I don't think I could write a sequel because I'd have to do too much economic research and I just don't have the time right now, but I do like to think that America isn't just in denial and we will be able to get through this (if we can stop the stupid infighting, accept that it's going to be tough, and focus on the damn problem instead of petty political agendas). One guy with a laptop is a little ridiculous though so if that's what you're talking about then yeah, he's going to end up needing hella help. I totally don't have tons of headcanon about America's ridiculous ( ... )
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Yes, the humans were guilty but I can't think that such an incredibly old nation couldn't see how much America /was not enjoying/. Especially after, seeing how America could barely even get it up. The humans arranged it but by agreeing to it and continuing it instead of paying attention to how America felt China agreed to rape him. Simply placing the blame on the humans here is not correct! China is old enough decide for himself whether he was raping someone and old enough to know how 'diplomacy' in these situations works.
You could always just make it Au or say its somewhere in the future without giving a specific time period. I don't see that as lazy but as creative. ^^ Of course its perfectly fine as is!
Captcha- woah I just got Asian characters (and benzol) on this thing haha
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However that is helpful and completely different to being sold off by humans, taken advantage of by a fellow nation who is waaay older, and then traumatized enough by the end of it that he smashed anything made by china. America even mentioned he barely consents to Canada topping which makes it dubcon/borderline rape in my eyes.
Umm now it seems I'm arguing with you sorry ...I didnt mean to come of so aggressive. If you could see my facial expressions it be relaxed and not pissy. ^^; sorryz *scurries away*
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And the Canada thing: it's not that he doesn't consent, but rather that he just has Issues about being penetrated, and they have to take it super slow (like literally, [one finger] [two fingers] "no wait too fast go back to one" slow) - his problem with Canada was that one time Canada went a little too fast and America freaked, not that he wasn't consenting to the sex. All of which would have been a lot clearer if I had actually explained the rest of that story (the part where Canada then slowed down until America was comfortable again instead of shoving America all up on his dick the way China did) instead of leaving all ( ... )
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