Lithuania/Poland, cheating
anonymous
January 10 2011, 19:45:56 UTC
Lithuania and Poland are in a relationship, but for a while they're both cheating on each other. It's occasional and they feel guilty every time it happens, so they're careful to hide it from the other.
What they don't know is that they're both cheating with the same person...
Whoever it is and their reasons for never telling anything are up to you. I'd like more comedy than angst, though!
Re: Inland Territories [Part 2a/?]
anonymous
January 14 2011, 01:41:20 UTC
It starts like this:
Poland leans forward, closing the small gap between them, and presses his lips against Lithuania’s. Lithuania’s hand comes up to cup the side of Poland’s face and Poland can feel the other nation tremble very slightly and moves closer, moving their lips together. Lithuania’s hand slide down Poland’s neck to his shoulder, down his arm to clasp his hand briefly. Poland makes a small sound and Lithuania’s hands land feather-light against the smaller nation’s chest. They pull apart just far enough to breathe.
“Polaska.” Lithuania murmurs voice soft and low.
Suddenly it’s too cold in their room and Poland’s stomach drops out just like it always did the second before he could here the soldier’s boots coming down the hall to the room they kept him in. All he can hear in Lithuania’s soft voice is pain and fear. He screws his eyes shut and tells himself it’s ok-it’s ok. That life isn’t their life any more. It doesn’t stop the panic from rising though
( ... )
Re: Inland Territories [Part 2b/?]
anonymous
January 14 2011, 13:44:25 UTC
Oh, this was so painfully sweet. I liked how England and Poland have such an easygoing relationship, and Poland encouraging England to smile more made me go d'awww.
And then Poland and Lithuania's relationship and the centuries of baggage and all the bad memories - ouch. Excellent job with the contrast, anon.
BTW, I'm pretty sure it's 'Polska', not 'Polaska'. Or 'Lenkija' if you're going for the Lithuanian name.
::face-palm:: I totally knew Polska was the right word and I'd typed it wrong the first time, and I was totally going to change it before I posted and then completely forgot.
Inland Territories [Part 3a/?]
anonymous
January 17 2011, 16:46:19 UTC
It is: Lithuania almost slices through his fingers instead of the potato he’s chopping for dinner. He curses softly and set aside the knife.
Poland is coming home tonight.
Lithuania feels a familiar warmth settles in his stomach when he thinks of the tiny blond. Even as that warm is overtaken almost immediately by guilt. He wants to hold the other nation tight, kiss his hair, tell him how sorry Lithuania is, what an awful person he is. Tell him how much it hurts, really truly hurts that Lithuania can’t even look at Poland sometimes without seeing everything he’s lost, everything he’s suffered. Being with Poland feels too much like not moving on, like constantly being dragged down into a past Lithuania wants so desperately to forget. His physical scars have almost all healed now, but Poland’s still there, still small and beautiful with scars of his own and it hurts
( ... )
Re: Inland Territories [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
January 17 2011, 16:47:31 UTC
“Oh for God’s sake! Bloody Hell, that boy.” England slammed his cup down on the small table on the London café causing Lithuania to jump slightly. America was supposed to be meeting with England and Lithuania to discuss some finer points of international trading law. Except for the fact that Lithuania had been waiting there for fifteen minutes already and England had been there for six and America still hadn’t shown up yet
( ... )
Re: Inland Territories [Part 3c/?]
anonymous
January 17 2011, 16:49:30 UTC
In Poland’s kitchen, Lithuania bites his lip, his hands shaking so hard he almost drops the knife. He doesn’t want to be this person anymore, he needs to talk to Poland just like England’s been telling him to. He needs to tell him . . . he bites his lips again this time hard enough to draw blood. He needs to tell Poland what he’s done that him and England are romantically involved. That Lithuania’s been taking advantage of the smaller nation’s pain and confusion and passed horrors to start seeing someone else on the side. Then Poland will get that hurt look in his eyes, the one that Lithuania hates more then anything in the world, and leave him. Lithuania stares dully at the knife lying there on the kitchen table. He’s fucked up, and now he can only pray that there is someway to fix this.
Re: Inland Territories [Part 3 Notes]
anonymous
January 17 2011, 16:51:12 UTC
Not Reading over the prompt again I realized that OP wanted more comedy than angst. While don't think this story is going to be exactly a comedy I do hope it isn't too angsty for OP to enjoy. It will have a happy ending if that helps.
Re: Inland Territories [Part 3 Notes]
anonymous
January 18 2011, 01:47:34 UTC
D= Lithuania staring at a knife scares me! Don't hurt yourself!!!!!!
So, it seems like these two have similar problems with each other....it's very saddening. I can see the (relatively) comical part being when they try to confess to each other at the same time and end up laughing out of mutual relief. Something like that.
Don't worry about the angst. This pairing makes angst very easy, which is weird because they're both so cute ^__^
Re: Inland Territories [Part 3c/?]
anonymous
February 5 2011, 19:08:26 UTC
Are you the author!anon of 'Every Time My Heart Breaks Down'? There's a certain style and tone and characterisation of England, Poland and Liet that are consistent
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What they don't know is that they're both cheating with the same person...
Whoever it is and their reasons for never telling anything are up to you. I'd like more comedy than angst, though!
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Poland leans forward, closing the small gap between them, and presses his lips against Lithuania’s. Lithuania’s hand comes up to cup the side of Poland’s face and Poland can feel the other nation tremble very slightly and moves closer, moving their lips together. Lithuania’s hand slide down Poland’s neck to his shoulder, down his arm to clasp his hand briefly. Poland makes a small sound and Lithuania’s hands land feather-light against the smaller nation’s chest. They pull apart just far enough to breathe.
“Polaska.” Lithuania murmurs voice soft and low.
Suddenly it’s too cold in their room and Poland’s stomach drops out just like it always did the second before he could here the soldier’s boots coming down the hall to the room they kept him in. All he can hear in Lithuania’s soft voice is pain and fear. He screws his eyes shut and tells himself it’s ok-it’s ok. That life isn’t their life any more. It doesn’t stop the panic from rising though ( ... )
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Oh, Poland, sweetie...
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And then Poland and Lithuania's relationship and the centuries of baggage and all the bad memories - ouch. Excellent job with the contrast, anon.
BTW, I'm pretty sure it's 'Polska', not 'Polaska'. Or 'Lenkija' if you're going for the Lithuanian name.
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Lithuania almost slices through his fingers instead of the potato he’s chopping for dinner. He curses softly and set aside the knife.
Poland is coming home tonight.
Lithuania feels a familiar warmth settles in his stomach when he thinks of the tiny blond. Even as that warm is overtaken almost immediately by guilt. He wants to hold the other nation tight, kiss his hair, tell him how sorry Lithuania is, what an awful person he is. Tell him how much it hurts, really truly hurts that Lithuania can’t even look at Poland sometimes without seeing everything he’s lost, everything he’s suffered. Being with Poland feels too much like not moving on, like constantly being dragged down into a past Lithuania wants so desperately to forget. His physical scars have almost all healed now, but Poland’s still there, still small and beautiful with scars of his own and it hurts ( ... )
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Reading over the prompt again I realized that OP wanted more comedy than angst. While don't think this story is going to be exactly a comedy I do hope it isn't too angsty for OP to enjoy. It will have a happy ending if that helps.
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I said I'd like more comedy than angst, it didn't mean I don't want angst at all ;)
And I really love this fill very much, especially the new part with Lithuania <3333
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/hugs them both
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So, it seems like these two have similar problems with each other....it's very saddening. I can see the (relatively) comical part being when they try to confess to each other at the same time and end up laughing out of mutual relief. Something like that.
Don't worry about the angst. This pairing makes angst very easy, which is weird because they're both so cute ^__^
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