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Hetalia Kink meme part 16

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Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 14 2011, 07:07:55 UTC

Russia had planned carefully this time. He had cleaned every inch of his house from top to bottom (no small feat, now that the Baltics and his sisters where's living there to help out any more.) He had redecorated all the spare bedrooms, bought comfy new beds, painted the walls in cheerful colors. He had stocked his kitchen with the favorite foods of all his targets. Every vase in his house was filled with fresh sunflowers. He was ready ( ... )

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 14 2011, 08:28:09 UTC

M-my heart, it has broken in my hands. Please fix it for me again with a happy ending! Poor Russia!

I really like how you worked his childish innocence into the narrative using the same words that usually sound so intimidating coming out of his mouth. It really outlines his poor overgrown-baby mentality and makes it that much more heart-wrenching when everyone is so dead-terrified of him.

I'd be your friend, Russia!! ;A; *sob*

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 14 2011, 18:40:20 UTC

Guh, Russiaaaa ;_; I want to hug him now.

Seconding what the other commenter said about childishness. All the characterizations of everyone are perfect here.

Will be waiting for more!

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 14 2011, 19:17:42 UTC

Poor Russia! After all that work they just rejected him again. ;A;

I love the way you wrote this. I'll be eagerly waiting for more.

OP anonymous January 14 2011, 21:09:42 UTC

HOLY ROMAN EMPIRE.

This is wonderful, I love it already. You played all of their personalities perfectly, and my God, I started tearing up when Russia did. You gave Vanya such wonderfully cute child logic. Gah, OP!anon can't wait for the next chapter! *hearts everywhere*
(I couldn't help but notice France's absence. Do I detect FRussia~? C;)

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 14 2011, 22:15:31 UTC

T~T Roshia-chaaaan!! I'll become one with you! Your house sounds awesome!!

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 14 2011, 22:30:06 UTC

;-; Poor Russia and he even made his house all nice. Good job keeping him IC.

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous January 24 2011, 00:21:08 UTC

BAWAWAWW THIS IS MY FAVORITEST RUSSIA EVER. The perfect balance between canonic creepiness and adorability. (Plus everyone else was awesome too. Canada lol.) Your Russia is just so squishy and cute and huggable and I am so sad for him. Why won't they go live in your nice clean house now Russia? D:

I can only imagine the sad when he finds out everyone thinks he's a rapetruck. B'awwww I demand next chapter now.

Re: Lost in Translation [1/4] anonymous September 8 2011, 01:40:06 UTC

AWH! This is so cute, please continue or I will die D:

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