Unable to feel. Anyone/Anyone.
anonymous
December 3 2010, 07:12:38 UTC
Nation A becomes completely numb. He/She becomes unable to feel love, happiness, sorrow ... pain. That nation doesn’t react to anything, it’s like he/she has become an empty shell and some other nations try to figure out what is wrong with him/her and how they could help him/her to turn back to normal.
If possible no USUK or FrUk please. And not so fond of Germany/Italy either...
Re: Phantasmagoria 2b/2
anonymous
December 26 2010, 12:37:17 UTC
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Yong Soo stares blankly out the window, into the grey, damp sky and does nothing but blink. He knows that something is wrong, he knows that he is wasting away but he doesn’t care. He doesn’t care about anything anymore. What was the point?
Logically he knows why he is like this, he understands what has caused him to sink into this catatonia. He knows that half of his heart is gone; that his lands have been split and his people divided. He feels as if his soul has been stretched beyond recognition but he is unable to care.
He knows that Yao has come every day to feed him, to change his clothing, to care for him. He knows that his beloved elder brother sits by his side everyday, sometimes in a chair, sometimes with his head laying in his lap, some times crying and talking of ancient nations.
Korea knows that he should feel exalted by this, his brother and his love tending to him and caring for his well being, but he it not.
Re: Phantasmagoria [Notes]
anonymous
December 26 2010, 12:43:03 UTC
Notes; i. Gonzhu; An old Chinese title for someone who is considered a prince but is lower than the emperor.
ii, The three kingdoms; the three kingdoms of Korea were three tiny countries that had their own distinct culture and people, yet all were considered ‘Korean’ by foreign powers. Gogoryeo was the eldest and the largest, followed by Baekje and then Silla. The former two fought bitterly for many years only for tiny Silla to take them both over with the help of Tang ruled China.
iii. 1953; when this story takes place almost a year after the end of the Korean war. Yong Soo’s despondency stems from the split between North and South.
Thank you very much for reading, even though I kinda just realized that this entire story has no plot. <3
OMG ! Anon ! What are you talking about ? You said there was no plot in this ? I'd say this was a story with one of the best plots ever ! I mean Korea and how that split in two affected him. It made so much sense that he would feel empty like this. It was really painful to read but I really love it. I really do. Thank you !
And yay! I have two fills! It makes me so happy, I hope the first author!anon will go on with the story Cornflowers too. I love you so much anons ! Both of you !
Re: Phantasmagoria 2c/2
anonymous
December 27 2010, 02:33:07 UTC
My gosh, anon. You made me cry. ;_;
I really loved this fill. The way it's done through China's POV and how Korea began to fall under the same affliction as his mother. Man, even in the beginning, it was so sad. The way Silla wouldn't take care of her own son broke my heart. And yet, it makes sense, because she was hurting so much from the loss of the two other kingdoms. It's been a while since I got emotional from a fic. Thanks, OP.
Nation A becomes completely numb. He/She becomes unable to feel love, happiness, sorrow ... pain. That nation doesn’t react to anything, it’s like he/she has become an empty shell and some other nations try to figure out what is wrong with him/her and how they could help him/her to turn back to normal.
If possible no USUK or FrUk please. And not so fond of Germany/Italy either...
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---The child is a boy and he is tragically beautiful, like his mother ( ... )
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Yong Soo stares blankly out the window, into the grey, damp sky and does nothing but blink. He knows that something is wrong, he knows that he is wasting away but he doesn’t care. He doesn’t care about anything anymore. What was the point?
Logically he knows why he is like this, he understands what has caused him to sink into this catatonia. He knows that half of his heart is gone; that his lands have been split and his people divided. He feels as if his soul has been stretched beyond recognition but he is unable to care.
He knows that Yao has come every day to feed him, to change his clothing, to care for him. He knows that his beloved elder brother sits by his side everyday, sometimes in a chair, sometimes with his head laying in his lap, some times crying and talking of ancient nations.
Korea knows that he should feel exalted by this, his brother and his love tending to him and caring for his well being, but he it not.
He can not.
All Yong Soo wants is his other side back.
It is the only thing that matters.
---It has ( ... )
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i. Gonzhu; An old Chinese title for someone who is considered a prince but is lower than the emperor.
ii, The three kingdoms; the three kingdoms of Korea were three tiny countries that had their own distinct culture and people, yet all were considered ‘Korean’ by foreign powers. Gogoryeo was the eldest and the largest, followed by Baekje and then Silla. The former two fought bitterly for many years only for tiny Silla to take them both over with the help of Tang ruled China.
iii. 1953; when this story takes place almost a year after the end of the Korean war. Yong Soo’s despondency stems from the split between North and South.
Thank you very much for reading, even though I kinda just realized that this entire story has no plot. <3
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And yay! I have two fills! It makes me so happy, I hope the first author!anon will go on with the story Cornflowers too. I love you so much anons ! Both of you !
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I really loved this fill. The way it's done through China's POV and how Korea began to fall under the same affliction as his mother. Man, even in the beginning, it was so sad. The way Silla wouldn't take care of her own son broke my heart. And yet, it makes sense, because she was hurting so much from the loss of the two other kingdoms. It's been a while since I got emotional from a fic. Thanks, OP.
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