Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
February 17 2011, 19:52:54 UTC
Now that was just perfect! Too often BDSM fics don't insist enough on the fact that the two partners must trust each other a whole lot to engage in that sort of activity, but you did, and skillfully so. We can definitely feel how much the two nations love and trust each other, particularly at the end when they act so tender. You gotta love the fluff after the hot stuff. XD I especially loved how focused America was on England and his reactions, making sure that he was okay and that he was enjoying it, which in turn was what made it pleasurable for America. Moreover, your fill was extremely refreshing to read: the use of safekeys and the play with England's fear of drowning were very original. Thank you very much Author!Anon for having written this! It's simply lovely!
Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
February 28 2011, 13:00:13 UTC
That was gorgeous anon! I've never really read BSDM fics and was wondering what a safeword is, actually, but this read certainly opens eyes and I really love that you've conveyed that being a sub doesn't necessarily means that one is inherently weaker! And the fluff at the end was very fitting, too, I love how much trust and understanding exists between these two. Guilty!America realising that he should not focus on his guilt is also a very nice touch! I almost hope that you would deanon.. or give us a list of fills that you have done~~ Thank you for this fill!
So my request: England and America have a healthy BDSM relationship, they like to roleplay, England likes America to utilize his super strength, etc.
One day one of them goes too far and the other has to use the safe word.
What happens next is up to you, but no shaming or goading the other into continuing with the same act anyway.
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Too often BDSM fics don't insist enough on the fact that the two partners must trust each other a whole lot to engage in that sort of activity, but you did, and skillfully so. We can definitely feel how much the two nations love and trust each other, particularly at the end when they act so tender. You gotta love the fluff after the hot stuff. XD I especially loved how focused America was on England and his reactions, making sure that he was okay and that he was enjoying it, which in turn was what made it pleasurable for America. Moreover, your fill was extremely refreshing to read: the use of safekeys and the play with England's fear of drowning were very original.
Thank you very much Author!Anon for having written this! It's simply lovely!
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