Anon would like to see Prussia and Spain meeting France--or is it Gaul?--for the first time. But here's the thing anons. First they think he's a girl and tries to kiddy!court him, then they find out he's a guy and yet still tries to court him!
Bonus if the two end up really liking France or taking it seriously because he's SO PRETTY!
[I've been meaning to write this prompt for a while, my apologies for the delay. Please enjoy!]
It's a Trap [pt 1/??]
anonymous
December 26 2010, 04:11:20 UTC
“Is that France?” Prussia muttered in disbelief, staring down at the procession from his perch on the balcony. At his side, Spain nodded enthusiastically.
“Yes, that’s Francia! Isn’t she beautiful?” Spain gushed. “I had no idea someone so cute was my neighbor all this time
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It's a Trap [pt 2/??]
anonymous
December 26 2010, 04:14:30 UTC
It was a very brief moment, lasting no longer than an hour. Spain cast the gauntlet first, by offering France the sweets on his plate after the main courses at dinner, and getting another kiss in return, much to Prussia’s outrage. But what Prussia lacked in manners, he made up for in determination and no concept of the words “fair play.” He claimed the next kiss after stealing a bottle of the finest vintage for France’s consumption, to the consternation of the noblemen left wondering where their wine went
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Re: It's a Trap [pt 2/??]
anonymous
December 26 2010, 16:18:34 UTC
notOP thanks you for giving shape to her headcanon. I've always thought this is exactly the way their first meeting went. (well, sometimes I think Spain knew France from before, in Roman times, and knew he was a boy, and had a great time giving flame to Prussia's crush on "her", but then again, Spain is so oblivious this is perfectly believable as wellXD...). The way you write childish competitive nature is awesome! I chuckled all the way through, it's so adorableXD. I wonder if France knows they think he's a girl? He seems bubblier than he is now, but he's a master manipulator and actor too. Lol, he was so cute! I also agree that he was the most beautiful of the teen nations ^^
Actually, Prussia was not exactly sure what “fecund” meant, and perhaps he didn’t want tololololol I think it's perfect you didn't give an exact time and age for all this, man. Better that way. I especially love the clues you leave around that point to France's gender (being taller than the others, the sword, the cursing/snorting, etc). I hope we see what
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Re: It's a Trap [pt 2/??]
anonymous
December 26 2010, 23:35:24 UTC
Author anon thanks you! I think my headcanon for how they first met is pretty fluid, for example, Spain surely must have known France was a boy from being part of the Roman Empire, but I've read a few cute stories about the bad friends trio first meeting, and I quite like writing this version.
Well, at this point France is being touchy-feely like his usual self, and not purposely keeping his gender a secret. But I guess we'll see what happens, a lot of silliness no doubt, knowing these three. Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Re: It's a Trap [pt 2/??]
anonymous
December 26 2010, 16:44:07 UTC
lol, I love this scenario! XD It's how I imagine they met as well, the realities of history notwithstanding. :P
When I read this request I was instantly reminded of that pixiv fanart some brilliant person on youtube put to the tune of 'Dude looks like a lady'. XD I'm really happy it's being filled. :D And I also think Prussia would be very slow to notice, he always strikes me as being very dense in those situations. *cough* Hungary *cough* IDK, I feel Spain wouldn't really care either way about France's gender. XD;;;
It's a Trap [pt 3/??]
anonymous
December 30 2010, 06:16:17 UTC
Spain wore his best doublet and red boots, Prussia garbed in a white tabard with the black cross of the order, his sword strapped to his side. They even bothered to scrub their faces clean and comb their hair into some semblance of order, and eagerly, they questioned the maidservants as to the whereabouts of their new friend. After suffering through much giggling and the occasional language barrier, the two of them finally arrived at France’s chamber, which turned out to be a tiny room adjoining the dauphin’s suite. Smirking in triumph, Prussia elbowed Spain out of the way in order to knock on the door first
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anonymous
December 30 2010, 15:25:43 UTC
Pfff, this fic, it's so adorable, author anon <3
The squabbling over France's attention is really cute, and France's coquettish reactions make me snort all the time; thank god he acquired hair in his legs, because his atittude hasn't changed much since then (and probably left stubble for that reason, so that he could appear manly at allXD)
I loled when he received the other two just literally out of bedXD. France is so not a morning person. And then undressing like it's normal, in front of them! I think it's even cuter that France doesn't realise why they treat "her" like that, though I wonder what he'll do once he does. I loved how ready to sin they both were, taking their fill in the view offeredXD
All in all, I love that this story balances so well the awakening sexuality of teenagehood with childish joy and friendship, like there at the end. I can't wait for the next update! ^^
It's a Trap [pt 4/??]
anonymous
January 9 2011, 20:24:29 UTC
Spain, who normally would not give up a chance to nap for any other reason, could not risk Prussia trying something with France while he was sleeping, and so the suggestion of siesta was immediately dropped in favor of play. They snuck back to the keep and into the stables, where Prussia and Spain nearly fell over in their attempt to help France into her saddle. The other two would have noticed that she rode astride instead of sidesaddle like a proper lady, but then France announced that they should have a race, and Prussia and Spain scrambled to get on their horses, and gave it no further thought.
The winner of the race was Spain, his long-legged bay gelding reaching the pond first, though Prussia had nearly overtaken him once or twice on his fierce destrier. For second place, Prussia received a consolation kiss on the cheek, while Spain received an embroidered lace handkerchief that France had pulled out from her sleeve.
“I will treasure this forever, Francia,” he said solemnly, holding the fabric up to his nose and breathing
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It's a Trap [pt 5/??]
anonymous
January 9 2011, 20:28:48 UTC
Today they were playing hide and seek, with Prussia the seeker. He counted to twenty, skipping eighteen and nineteen and then promptly started his search. Spain was easiest to find, he could never think of a hiding place no one else would suspect, and Prussia found him under the stairwell of the north tower in four minutes. That actually was not Prussia’s intention, as he wanted to find France first and maybe sneak a grope or two where Spain would never discover. Unfortunately for him, France was really very good at hiding, so the two of them set out to find her, but together, so that neither would have an unfair advantage. Every now and then Spain would wonder aloud what their children would look like, would they have blue or green eyes, and Prussia would snort and say that their children were going to be super incredibly amazing awesome, and so on and so forth, both still believing they could have babies like their human counterparts even though they were a bit shaky as to the details of baby-making
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It's a Trap [pt 6/??]
anonymous
January 10 2011, 04:04:31 UTC
They ran after him, but France had already locked himself into his room and would not open the door no matter how much they pleaded. Finally, he shouted out something in French, translated loosely as “Go fuck yourselves” by a helpful servant passing by, and Prussia and Spain shuffled off ashamed
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It's a Trap [pt 6b/??]
anonymous
January 10 2011, 04:05:42 UTC
Using the techniques of the famed Hashashin of Araby, which Spain had encountered during Moslem rule and which Prussia had seen during his crusades to the Holy Land, they noiselessly lowered themselves on a rope from the window above to France’s balcony. Silent as shadows, their weapons muffled with silk, their shoes padded with fur, they slipped into his room. On either side of the sleeping beauty, they paused, their eyes darkly glittering in the moonlight. Spain nodded to Prussia once, and then they attacked
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Re: It's a Trap [pt 6b/??]
anonymous
January 10 2011, 13:51:06 UTC
*cuteness overload* That was so ridiculously cute and amusing, man. You write kids well! I'd love to see how this reflects on their adult selves and their interaction, or if they've told anyone thisXD
Anon would like to see Prussia and Spain meeting France--or is it Gaul?--for the first time. But here's the thing anons. First they think he's a girl and tries to kiddy!court him, then they find out he's a guy and yet still tries to court him!
Bonus if the two end up really liking France or taking it seriously because he's SO PRETTY!
[I've been meaning to write this prompt for a while, my apologies for the delay. Please enjoy!]
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“Yes, that’s Francia! Isn’t she beautiful?” Spain gushed. “I had no idea someone so cute was my neighbor all this time ( ... )
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I'm watching this!
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The way you write childish competitive nature is awesome! I chuckled all the way through, it's so adorableXD. I wonder if France knows they think he's a girl? He seems bubblier than he is now, but he's a master manipulator and actor too. Lol, he was so cute! I also agree that he was the most beautiful of the teen nations ^^
Actually, Prussia was not exactly sure what “fecund” meant, and perhaps he didn’t want tololololol I think it's perfect you didn't give an exact time and age for all this, man. Better that way. I especially love the clues you leave around that point to France's gender (being taller than the others, the sword, the cursing/snorting, etc). I hope we see what ( ... )
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Well, at this point France is being touchy-feely like his usual self, and not purposely keeping his gender a secret. But I guess we'll see what happens, a lot of silliness no doubt, knowing these three. Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
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When I read this request I was instantly reminded of that pixiv fanart some brilliant person on youtube put to the tune of 'Dude looks like a lady'. XD I'm really happy it's being filled. :D And I also think Prussia would be very slow to notice, he always strikes me as being very dense in those situations. *cough* Hungary *cough* IDK, I feel Spain wouldn't really care either way about France's gender. XD;;;
TL;DR: I'm looking forward to me! :D
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*keeps laughing*
*falls to floor gasping*
*pushes self up back to chair*
*looks at chapter*
*falls over laughing again*
Yeah, I thought this was rather funny. :]
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The squabbling over France's attention is really cute, and France's coquettish reactions make me snort all the time; thank god he acquired hair in his legs, because his atittude hasn't changed much since then (and probably left stubble for that reason, so that he could appear manly at allXD)
I loled when he received the other two just literally out of bedXD. France is so not a morning person. And then undressing like it's normal, in front of them! I think it's even cuter that France doesn't realise why they treat "her" like that, though I wonder what he'll do once he does.
I loved how ready to sin they both were, taking their fill in the view offeredXD
All in all, I love that this story balances so well the awakening sexuality of teenagehood with childish joy and friendship, like there at the end. I can't wait for the next update! ^^
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The winner of the race was Spain, his long-legged bay gelding reaching the pond first, though Prussia had nearly overtaken him once or twice on his fierce destrier. For second place, Prussia received a consolation kiss on the cheek, while Spain received an embroidered lace handkerchief that France had pulled out from her sleeve.
“I will treasure this forever, Francia,” he said solemnly, holding the fabric up to his nose and breathing ( ... )
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Your writing is very optimistic although serious when needed and every update makes me smile!
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That was so ridiculously cute and amusing, man. You write kids well! I'd love to see how this reflects on their adult selves and their interaction, or if they've told anyone thisXD
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