America has a sensitive stomach. Repeated touches, kisses or licks and he starts to get turned on after a while. It was the Dark Knight. The Dark Knight; how can anyone get turned on while watching the Joker
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Tickle 2/3
anonymous
December 30 2010, 23:11:51 UTC
"No touching Alfred, until I say so. This is for you okay?" Arthur said, his voice growing softer at the end and Alfred nodded, helpless against the loving shine to Arthur's eyes. Arthur grinned and kissed the other man's lips for the first time that night. Before Alfred could register the kiss or even respond Arthur had pulled away. "All for you." Arthur whispered but Alfred wasn't entirely sure whether he was meant to have heard it or not. The moment was swept away when Arthur's manner turned business-like again. He tugged at Alfred's T-shirt. "Right, this has to come off." Alfred tried to sit up to help Arthur get the T-shirt off but all he managed to do was get the T-shirt stuck around his arm. With some more wriggling and Alfred nearly bucking Arthur off, they managed to get the top off Alfred even if it did knock his glasses askew while he did so. Then Arthur drew Alfred's hands up above his head again and reached for his stomach. Alfred evaded him or rather, he shifted to get Arthur's attention
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Tickle 3/3
anonymous
December 30 2010, 23:15:57 UTC
When Arthur pulled back, Alfred discovered that Arthur had somehow managed to get his jeans undone and had slipped a hand inside his boxers. Arthur's cold fingers were a contrast to the burning heat and Alfred made a strange gargling sound as they connected, luckily Arthur seemed to have gotten used to his weird sounds and just ignored it. However his hand wrapped around Alfred and started to move up and down, teasingly slowly especially considering how close Alfred was to orgasm
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Re: Tickle 3/3
anonymous
December 31 2010, 00:47:34 UTC
Wow, this was pretty awesome. "...luckily Arthur seemed to have gotten used to his weird sounds and just ignored it" lmfao. Pretty much the best line in here.
Re: Tickle 3/3
anonymous
December 31 2010, 02:42:33 UTC
*happy sigh*
I havent read good, non penetration USUK smut in too long, author anon. Thank you for remedying this. The kink was handled wonderfully, and I loved both of them here.
"Well well well, what do we have here?" I LOVE this line. Great job using it. Its so Arthur :D
Re: Tickle 3/3
anonymous
December 31 2010, 06:23:19 UTC
Okay, sob, this is me. My stomach is incredibly sensitive to any touch, I make the most horrifyingly embarassing little hitches whenever someone touches it. I feel your pain Alfred D:
Re: Tickle 3/3
anonymous
January 6 2011, 06:53:08 UTC
OH MY GOSH, ME TOO. *wibble*
It's like, it won't even be someone that I'm remotely attracted too--if someone tries to tug at my shirt or something and brushes my tummy I immediately jerk and get goosebumps =__=
Fail!author anon just realised that she had never replied to any of the comments. Which is weird because they made me smile so much. Even now, months later.
Anon1: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Anon2: Well, Arthur would have to get used to the weird sounds that Alfred made otherwise he would forever be staring at Alfred after being weirded-out. Thanks! Anon3: *grin* Loved the comment. I'm so glad you think it's good, this was actually my first time writing anything close to smut-like and so was really nervous and spent hours agonising over it. You're welcome and thank you! I could imagine Arthur saying that line so I had to put it in. Anon4 (and 5): You poor thing, that must be so annoying, it's not like most people try to avoid it like other sensitive areas. I don't have that problem, I'm just extremely ticklish.
Thank you anons!
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America has a sensitive stomach. Repeated touches, kisses or licks and he starts to get turned on after a while. It was the Dark Knight. The Dark Knight; how can anyone get turned on while watching the Joker ( ... )
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"...luckily Arthur seemed to have gotten used to his weird sounds and just ignored it" lmfao. Pretty much the best line in here.
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I havent read good, non penetration USUK smut in too long, author anon. Thank you for remedying this. The kink was handled wonderfully, and I loved both of them here.
"Well well well, what do we have here?"
I LOVE this line. Great job using it. Its so Arthur :D
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It's like, it won't even be someone that I'm remotely attracted too--if someone tries to tug at my shirt or something and brushes my tummy I immediately jerk and get goosebumps =__=
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Anon1: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Anon2: Well, Arthur would have to get used to the weird sounds that Alfred made otherwise he would forever be staring at Alfred after being weirded-out. Thanks!
Anon3: *grin* Loved the comment. I'm so glad you think it's good, this was actually my first time writing anything close to smut-like and so was really nervous and spent hours agonising over it. You're welcome and thank you! I could imagine Arthur saying that line so I had to put it in.
Anon4 (and 5): You poor thing, that must be so annoying, it's not like most people try to avoid it like other sensitive areas. I don't have that problem, I'm just extremely ticklish.
Thank you anons!
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