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Only for the weak 1/3 anonymous January 19 2011, 21:53:43 UTC
One sided Croatia/Austria. Croatia was a part of Austria's empire at this point. He hasn't shown up in Hetalia, but he was probably living somewhere in that house as a minion with Hungary.
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17942.html?thread=59247382#t59247382 Austria had been playing the piano for a long time. Ever since Hungary left a few hours ago. Croatia had watched them fight, succeeding to make himself invisible against the wall. Hungary would have been furious to see him spy but it wasn't spying if you yelled high enough to wake the dead, was it? It was important to know what was going on in your house, especially when risking to be drawn into storms you had no control over ( ... )

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Only for the weak 2/3 anonymous January 19 2011, 22:00:05 UTC
Austria made a pained noise, warning Croatia he was getting too harsh. Whose game was it at this point? Was Austria still directing while Croatia imagined being in control? Croatia didn't let go, if he refused to be directed this wouldn't end up Austria's symphony, he wasn't that strong without Hungary ( ... )

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Only for the weak 3/3 anonymous January 19 2011, 22:07:40 UTC
The wedding was a dramatic, overblown affair. Austria and Hungary all dressed up, smiled at everyone when they didn't looked deeply into each others eyes, like it was a marriage of love and not of compromises ( ... )

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OP is... anonymous January 19 2011, 23:58:53 UTC
Shocked, completely. In a very good way! I mean, seriously, anon, I think you must be psychic, because Croatia has always been one of my favourite countries and one that I really wanted in Hetalia. safdgtcgvcggdfy, to say the least! I really liked how you portrayed him here as well!
And that last line, XD.

Thank you so much! >

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Author anonymous January 20 2011, 19:57:32 UTC
Wow, that was lucky :D Thanks!

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Re: Only for the weak 3/3 anonymous January 20 2011, 01:22:12 UTC
This was so perfect. The beginning, the character interaction, the way it's clear Austria is the most powerful one even while Croatia tries to delude himself he's in control...

And that final part, with Prussia and Croatia crying about their lost loves how fucking stupid the whole thing is and nothing else! was hilarious and sad at the same time.

Aaaaand now I have a crush on your Croatia. Well, I liked the country a lot even before, and since what I've seen of Croatia was very pretty I picture him as very pretty too, and, well. Yeah.

What happens if I ship him with Serbia? Or with Italy?

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Re: Only for the weak 3/3 anonymous January 20 2011, 20:08:11 UTC
Thanks :)
I imagine later Austria felt like Croatia took advantage of him being depressed and Croatia feels used and dismissed too.. Not a pairing meant to be...
I think Croatia is very good looking too. Hungary's hot resentful minion.

if you ship Croatia with Serbia Yugoslavia happens...

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