The German Blossom 1b/?
anonymous
January 25 2011, 02:07:13 UTC
"I'll do it." It was quiet, it was unassuming. It was not what he expected from his sister. He looked over at her in shock, trying to ignore the leering stares of the others. "W-what? Anja, you don't have to-"
"Yes I do. They won't stop hurting us, you... until I do." Germany was grim, but he could feel a slight shaking reverberating through her. His heart clenched with confusion and pain. "But, but Anja, you've never-"
"Just let me do it, please! Don't make this harder for me," Germany pleaded, turning those big blue eyes Prussia had never been able to resist back on him. He felt his heart break, but he let go of her elbow. She slipped forward, towards France, and that was when the nightmare began.
Re: The German Blossom 1b/?
anonymous
January 25 2011, 11:57:57 UTC
Anon who is NOT a German siblings fan is completely in love with how you're writing their bond. It's beautiful. I never knew I could get behind this relationship with Germany genderbent till now, so thank you so much, author anon! I also never understood the appeal of fem!Germany, but I think I'm starting to understand. So hot and brave <3 so is Prussia gonna be present during it? poor guy
I also rather liked China's and America's reactions, and the way you described their body language. I think it's safe to assume that America could be a virgin (though he said female and doesn't rule out male, it also doesn't rule out the possibility that he has only been taken till now, and never taken another), and China's veiled and subtler answer, mor experienced and misguiding neutral. It's also amusing because Prussia doesn't even ask for Russia's, England's or France's mercy, like he expected them to be this twisted from the start.
The German Blossom 2b/?
anonymous
January 26 2011, 03:50:35 UTC
She looked back at him in confusion, looking not only confused, but hurt, like he was betraying her to the rabble. "But Gilbert, I-I... I don't want him to!" Prussia could have agreed wholeheartedly, and he would have preferred to drag her back with him and cover her with his coat. But no, he had to respect her decision. However horrible it tasted in the back of his throat
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The German Blossom 2c/?
anonymous
January 26 2011, 03:52:00 UTC
"FUCKING PUSSY!! YOU CAN'T STOP ME LIKE THIS!! I'LL BITE YOUR FUCKING FINGERS OFF!! MMPF!!" And Prussia was gagged, with help from Russia. France turned back to Germany, saying huffily, "On your knees
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Re: The German Blossom 2c/?
anonymous
January 27 2011, 17:13:31 UTC
It's excellent, what are you talking about! I still love the siblings' bond, and America's reactions and comments disturb me because they're creepy but also cute...don't stop, please!
Re: Sorry...
anonymous
January 30 2011, 09:38:26 UTC
You shouldn't stop. I feel the characters' reactions are dumbed down, but this is a Hetalia kinkmeme fill and not a literature assignment, so it isn't a crime. I just feel that the fill could've been more interesting if the characters weren't restricted to either being poor martyred victims or smarmy or moronic villains.
The German Blossom 3b/?
anonymous
January 31 2011, 03:40:52 UTC
Prussia was watching all this with the heartbreaking information that America, America of all people, would be Germany's first time. There had been offers, of course, from both Japan and Italy, but Prussia had convinced her to wait. He'd been through just about every nation he knew, and he'd regretted not making it special. She should wait until the right person came along, and only after a long relationship give it up. Now, that advice weighed very heavily on his heart. It was because of him, that her first time would be with someone who was practically a stranger, who was taking something that didn't belong to him
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"Yes I do. They won't stop hurting us, you... until I do." Germany was grim, but he could feel a slight shaking reverberating through her. His heart clenched with confusion and pain. "But, but Anja, you've never-"
"Just let me do it, please! Don't make this harder for me," Germany pleaded, turning those big blue eyes Prussia had never been able to resist back on him. He felt his heart break, but he let go of her elbow. She slipped forward, towards France, and that was when the nightmare began.
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Keep up the great work, anon! ;)
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so is Prussia gonna be present during it? poor guy
I also rather liked China's and America's reactions, and the way you described their body language. I think it's safe to assume that America could be a virgin (though he said female and doesn't rule out male, it also doesn't rule out the possibility that he has only been taken till now, and never taken another), and China's veiled and subtler answer, mor experienced and misguiding neutral. It's also amusing because Prussia doesn't even ask for Russia's, England's or France's mercy, like he expected them to be this twisted from the start.
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This doesn't suck at all, Author!anon!
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