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[part 4] Something There (cont) - France/Russia, young Russia taught to love himself anonymous January 30 2011, 06:00:00 UTC
request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=8473026#t8473026

Before Russia was the big scary rape truck that hetalia says was the USSR, he was a teenager. A creepy, lonely, gawky, big-boned teenager. France comes along and teaches him to love his body.

parts 1 - 4 here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/11813.html?thread=34306853#t34306853
parts 5 - 11 here: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=41173913#t41173913

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Something There [part 12/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 06:01:42 UTC
Dinner took place in a balcony box seat above the theater, and they enjoyed a fine nearly French meal together, consisting of braised meat and baked fish, loaves of dense bread, perhaps too much cabbage, and a dish of sweetened cranberries to nibble with the delicate cakes. They talked of various matters, or at least France did, while Russia smiled at him and tried to inconspicuously push France’s wandering foot away from between his legs with one hand below the table ( ... )

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Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 06:08:12 UTC
Finally realizing his situation, Russia froze like a rabbit hearing the screech of a hawk. He turned slowly, forcing his lips into a rictus of a smile, which would have frightened the wits out of anyone less focused on sex than France. But France being France returned his smile with a playful wink, slipping his stockinged feet out of his shoes. Russia edged towards him uncertainly, feeling light-headed from the rush of adrenaline, and was nearly yanked off balance when France sought to pull him into bed. Kneeling on top of the covers, he watched, dry mouthed, as the other nation take off his coat and unbutton his vest ( ... )

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 06:14:32 UTC
I-- I don't even know if you're planning on posting anymore tonight, but you've already made my night with France's wandering foot and the Imminent Danger of Belarus. LOL

Seriously, this brightened my day so much. <3 I feel like a Belarus-style stalker for finding this so fast, though.

Scratch that bit about still posting; I checked before making a fail comment in the wrong place for once!

And d'aw, that fairytale. *_* And even more d'aw for France actually making Russia feel comfortable for once. So awesome, author!anon.

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 07:06:42 UTC
Yay, you're back! <3

Pfft, hiding from Belarus xD And the second half of this chapter is really sweet~ The part about the fairytale was adorable, as well.

Every bit of this story makes me smile, hope to see more soon!

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 08:08:59 UTC
I'm so glad to see you return!

Because I love this fill, even more so for it being a rare pair, and am excited to see it update, even if it was rather short.

So Ukraine and Belarus are dancers in ballet?

The two of them together under the covers is alarmingly cute.

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 14:32:53 UTC
I really was wondering at one point if this fill was dead... and that made me sad so... YEAH! ^^

Alo,lol at Belarus. Poor Russia :D

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 30 2011, 18:30:07 UTC
This is so lovely. And how sweet, that he reads a fairytale to Russia instead of going directly to trying to have sex with him...

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous January 31 2011, 14:55:18 UTC
Don't worry, I'll never desert you bb<3

but really, this is adorable and sexy and shy teen Russia is my favorite Russia

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous February 2 2011, 05:29:41 UTC
ANON OF COURSE PEOPLE ARE STILL READING THIS

IT IS FANTASTIC

I WISH I COULD EXPRESS MY LOVE IN GIF FORMAT BUT ALAS I AM A LOWLY ANON

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Re: Something There [part 13/??] anonymous February 3 2011, 04:10:23 UTC
AHHHHHHH

I REMEMBER I FOUND THIS STORY LONG AGO AND LOVED IT, BUT DIDN'T FOUND THE REST...

I'm so glad I can read more! It's a wonderful story...

Please update it! <3 Thank you so much!

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Something There [part 14/??] anonymous March 11 2011, 06:50:35 UTC
[Sorry for the delay, I write terribly mushy love scenes, so I’ve been putting it off for as long as I can out of embarrassment. Again, many thanks for the comments, everyone is too kind, I feel as if I don’t deserve it. orz]Chuckling, France kissed him again, sliding his tongue in between his lips effortlessly, and Russia made a hum of helpless pleasure as France pressed their bodies even closer, their legs tangling together. His hands glided down the silk of his shirt, fingers working at the buttons once more. Russia whimpered shyly in protest, not wanting to reveal how bulky and clumsy he would look next to France’s waif-like form, and France glanced at him questioningly ( ... )

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Something There [part 15/??] anonymous March 11 2011, 06:51:27 UTC
It was pleasure for both, for France did not waste a moment trying to find all of the places that would make Russia moan and gasp and sigh, each discovery inflaming his own desire as it did his partner’s. Between kisses and nips, he kept up a quiet stream of compliments, outrageously florid and exceedingly dramatic even for his tastes, but Russia easily blushed at them all, having never been the object of such praise before ( ... )

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Re: Something There [part 15/??] anonymous March 11 2011, 12:18:18 UTC
I loved this scene. It was every bit sweet and still dirty enough to be hot (just like sex with France should be ;)). It also makes sense that France would start with less "complicated" sex with a virgin. And your Russia is such a cutie, I'd eat him right up too<3

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Re: Something There [part 15/??] anonymous March 11 2011, 20:26:01 UTC
This is enchanting. I agree with aboveanon, you've done an excellent job of striking a balance between sweet and sexy... it's like fairytale sex. Utterly charming.

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Something There [part 16a/??] anonymous March 12 2011, 04:28:10 UTC
That was exactly what France wanted to hear, and he almost preened in triumph ( ... )

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