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Part 9 What he is anonymous February 8 2011, 04:21:58 UTC
Original Request - http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/12046.html?thread=27085838#t27085838

Oh s--- no one saw that de-anon. Okay I'm not sure exactly how well this sticks to the request but I had fun writing it. And it suits my head canon of America to a T

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The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 04:34:03 UTC
"He did that to Yong Soo?" America squatted down to look at the toddler holding onto China's leg in an oddly possessive way. He was wearing the right clothes, smaller though, and looked enough like the guy, still, England's magic actually working ( ... )

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 05:16:02 UTC
AAAWW So cute >.< Unique way to take it! I LOVE how it was subtle and how it wasn't all just on America and that Korea was also complemented. It didnt come off as too strong or overly "Omg America is perfect" which is what I feared...but really I should trust anons more <3

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 06:06:54 UTC
Thank you! I didn't want the fic to come off as America seeming perfect, because he really isn't. It's why I love him as a character, he jumps into things head first just kind of going on sheer blind hope and guts to get him through and of course he makes mistakes. And I love Korea both he and America always seem to get shot down by other characters for their enthusiasm, which is why I get the feeling America would in a moment of deciding to tune in on the atmosphere catch that is Korea's way of showing his pride for his people. That and I've never used Korea in a fic before and I wanted to (the mental image of America with bitty!Korea talking about giant robots was too cute to ignore)

um wow look at all that rambling, in short. Thank you!

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 05:51:08 UTC
I freaking love your characterization for America here. <3

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 06:15:44 UTC
America is one of my big favourites to write so thank you.

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 06:21:08 UTC
The combination of these three are just awesome!! And bitty Korea makes me wanna squeal!

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 19:44:33 UTC
They were fun to write. And bitty!Korea during that Britannia angel strip was so adorable I just had to use him.

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Re: The Thoughts Behind the Ideas anonymous February 8 2011, 23:06:09 UTC
Yaaaay! Smarty-pants sci-fi loving America~! That was awesome, and how calm he was explaining it while playing with baby Korea~! Awwwww~

Plus, I like how America stood up for Yong Soo. And how- JUST I LOVED IT. Korea needs more love from China... Really... thank you, Al. Being a hero for Yong Soo yet again~

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op anonymous March 4 2011, 17:08:34 UTC
He is he just really needs to break down his ideas into easier to work with portions and tune enough to realise after everything is coming into place he can reveal his master plan (and that sounds evil but when it's a giant robot made to reflect the suns rays away he has to wait at least until they can fuel it ...). It makes me sad how little I've read so far that plays with that.... even less with the whole Archaeology is his hobby, but op digresses. (and apologizes for how late my response was to this) I am a huge sucker for America interacting with kids.

And yes Korea does need more love from China,.

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