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Russia Ensues 1a anonymous February 21 2011, 22:18:15 UTC
Request, from part 6: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=16161058#t16161058

For lulz, America and Canada decide to switch places and clothes for a day and try being each other. Russia sees right through 'Canada', and seeing a perfect opportunity, approaches 'Canada' as though they're secret lovers. Russia's acting is so convincing that 'Canada' plays along, not wanting to blow the real Canada's cover or ruin 'his' relationship with Russia.

Didn't include any bonuses. Sorry, OP! (if you're still around XD). And they're aiming for longer than a day. :)

I couldn't think of a good title, so I went with the part of the request that made me giggle the most.“Okay. Tell me what you think.” America reached behind his head and grasped the elastic band, tugging it free with a wince as it pulled strands out with it. The ponytail was released, wavy hair cascading down. “Nice, huh ( ... )

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Russia Ensues 1b anonymous February 21 2011, 22:19:14 UTC
America tilted his head. “What hard part? We look like each other, now we just need to change clothes.”

Canada closed his eyes with a sigh. “We need to, I don't know, be able to act like each other. They aren't going to buy Canada running around yelling about how awesome he is.”

“Hey...”

“We know how to be each other. I mean, who knows us better than us? We just need to figure out how to pull it off.” It was an awful lot of trouble when the prank was only going to be for a week or so. But if they were going to do something, it should be done right ( ... )

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Russia Ensues 1c anonymous February 21 2011, 22:20:11 UTC
“Ohh.” His voice sounded as though he had just been thoroughly strangled (Russia had no idea how that comparison had popped into his head.) “Right. Yes. I remember. Of course ( ... )

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Russia Ensues 1d anonymous February 21 2011, 22:20:53 UTC
Russia was not going to back down first. It was America, or nothing. “Right.” He reached down to unfasten his pants, a thrill of glee coursing through him as America swallowed. I wonder if you'll be doing more of that soon, he thought giddily ( ... )

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Russia Ensues 1e anonymous February 21 2011, 22:21:36 UTC
America remained on his knees, expression unreadable as he stared at the floor. Russia tucked himself back into his pants and cleared his throat. “That was excellent, love ( ... )

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Dumb comment is dumb anonymous February 21 2011, 22:35:30 UTC
God, I thought this couldn't get any more amusing, then this:

“Shut up. It's not like I got off or anything. Not like I care how big his dick is, or...”

Why my dear America, is that the denial you inherited from mommy!England speaking by any chance?

And this?

“I suppose we can't let him get away with doing that.”

That is proof that Canada can manipulate his brother for good! <3

I love that ending, too. Very cool, author!anon. :D

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SEQUEL. NEED IT anonymous February 21 2011, 22:40:55 UTC
I need it so badly. Seriously. I kept giggling all the time, even when it turned hot as hell. damn my blowjob kink <3. I really liked this Russia, his competitive and silly strike is not often explored by authors! I also liked how subtle their emotions were, especially America, whose feelings we don't know till the end (and Russia, just for the focus on their enmity as a turn on). His characterization was perfect, idiotic but still sweet, with his brother and all, same with Russia and his feelings of guilt and confusion at the end. The fact that he gives fantastic blowjobs and swallos and probably has done that before a lot, I wonder with whom is UNF. I also liked that Canada was just as immature and giddy about the charade as his brother!

So, sequel? Please :D

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Re: SEQUEL. NEED IT anonymous February 21 2011, 22:46:30 UTC
... I didn't want to seem demanding since I was the first commenter up there, but I actually feel the same about a sequel if author!anon does feel inspired to write more. Even if you don't, I'm still bookmarking this for the awesome lulz and ambiguity. <3

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Re: SEQUEL. NEED IT anonymous February 22 2011, 03:39:50 UTC
+1 more anon begging for sequel.
Of course I understand if author!anon does not want to.
B-but I would LOVE it!! SO SO MUCH.

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Re: SEQUEL. NEED IT anonymous February 22 2011, 07:16:55 UTC
PLEASE, A SEQUEL

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Re: SEQUEL. NEED IT anonymous February 22 2011, 08:01:22 UTC
ARGH author!anon, tat's sooo fapable *___*
Please, make a sequel! We will love you forever!

Threesome would be nice, you know?

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Re: Russia Ensues 1e anonymous February 22 2011, 06:38:01 UTC
>>He wasn't entirely sure anymore just what contest he had won, but he had definitely won something.

I know what the author!anon won though: the internet and my eternal love!

I especially love America here! He IS the best brother in the world lol And I like how Russia feels a little bad about the deception :) Canada's revenge talk surprised me, in a good way!

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Re: Russia Ensues 1e anonymous February 28 2011, 04:40:18 UTC
This is awesome!

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Re: Russia Ensues 1e anonymous April 24 2011, 00:26:12 UTC
Ok. This was me and my basic reaction.

“Let's see if we still think that after a day or two... Now give me your jacket!”

America's cheerful smile fell. “Do what now?”

Me: *facepalm*

It tasted like idiocy and capitalism.

THIS MADE MY DAY. THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT HE TASTES LIKE. EXACTLY.

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