They Said To Stop [Placeholder for Part 11 Fill]
anonymous
February 24 2011, 17:09:31 UTC
Request: Matthew and Alfred Williams-Jones are twin brothers attending Gakuen Academy. Al is the school`s golden boy, while quieter Matt tends to be ignored when not on the ice with the hockey team. Neither has ever managed to have a serious relationship, until one night in their room, Matthew figures something out... Cue start of Incestuous Relationship!
Obviously incest is taboo, so they have to keep this a secret from everyone. Maybe they even try to quit but can't? But somehow, someone finds out and spills the beans. Rumours spread like wildfire and their lives start to unravel rapidly from there. Resolution is up to anon, but OP does like her angst with a happy ending.
They Said To Stop [4a/?]
anonymous
February 25 2011, 02:13:53 UTC
Alfred loves hockey season - loves how Matthew lets all the barriers fall on the ice rink, confident and aggressive, completely sure of his moves. Alfred feels like a part of him lives on through Matthew’s time on the rink. All those long hours spent as children, plastic sticks and a rubber ball, aiming at a square they chalked onto the garage door
( ... )
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anonymous
February 25 2011, 02:20:25 UTC
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At first, even Alfred is inclined to believe he’s being ridiculous. But as Christmas draws nearer and Matthew spends an increasingly large amount of time with Francis, he starts to wonder.
And really, he can’t help but sulk as Matthew frets about what tie he’ll wear to brunch at the Bonnefoy’s. After church, of all things.
“I’m sorry, okay?” Matthew frowns as his tie pulls into a crooked knot. “Francis’ parents apparently like me and I’m not going to pass up an opportunity to practice conversational dialogue. Besides which, they’re amazing cooks.”
“French class has ruined you. Next you’ll say we can’t have Mickey D’s anymore because it’s not pâté.”
To Alfred’s despair, Matthew is so intent on taming his curl that he doesn’t even roll his eyes. It’s an annoyance Alfred carries with him the rest of the day, even when guys from the team surround him at the weekly Sunday Football meet up.
-------Tomorrow Alfred will tell his friends about the greatest blowjob he’s ever had. It won’t be a lie, not really. Matthew gives
( ... )
OP struggling to breath!
anonymous
February 25 2011, 11:44:50 UTC
Oh, the joy! I'm utterly, incredibly thrilled to see this continuing! How did you know that I was in desperate need of my 'forbidden incest with hot twins' dose this week?
Really, this is lovely as always authoranon. I don't think you need to worry about Alfred's character; he comes through as himself to me. It's fantastic imo. (I also love your Kiku by the way!) ♥ And oh, but this whole thing is fantastic and hot; I want to see them fall deeper and deeper into each other while at the same time fearing the consequences for them. The letter! On the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
Re: They Said To Stop [4b/?]
anonymous
February 26 2011, 21:05:07 UTC
*happy dances around this update like a happy thing* The plot thickens!
I really like your Alfred: canonically he reminds me of a teenager - loud, reckless, doesn't say what he thinks or think before he speaks, the lot - and you're really using that. ("Your feet stink," pfft. XD) So he works for me! :Db Also really liking that even though Matt & Al are sleeping together, they don't stop being brothers, don't stop teasing or annoying each other. Bromance + romance = my otp.
And that second-last section? You owe me some new underwear, author!anon. Just sayin'. ♥
Re: They Said To Stop [4b/?]
anonymous
February 26 2011, 22:34:04 UTC
♥ oh anon, this is gorgeous in its simplicity and the emotions that it cover, hidden underneath. i feel like alfred is still ic, judging by the plot, and i adore the interactions between the characters.
Re: They Said To Stop [4b/?]
anonymous
April 1 2011, 01:07:04 UTC
Oh wow 0.0 I love this story. Its beautifully dark and sexy. So wrapped up in each other, so lost, its just wonderful. Your writing is lovely. Thanks so much for writing this ^.^ Absolutely cannot wait for the next part!
Obviously incest is taboo, so they have to keep this a secret from everyone. Maybe they even try to quit but can't? But somehow, someone finds out and spills the beans. Rumours spread like wildfire and their lives start to unravel rapidly from there. Resolution is up to anon, but OP does like her angst with a happy ending.
Chapters 1-3: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/13943.html?thread=36589687#t36589687
Chapters 4 coming soon ...
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At first, even Alfred is inclined to believe he’s being ridiculous. But as Christmas draws nearer and Matthew spends an increasingly large amount of time with Francis, he starts to wonder.
And really, he can’t help but sulk as Matthew frets about what tie he’ll wear to brunch at the Bonnefoy’s. After church, of all things.
“I’m sorry, okay?” Matthew frowns as his tie pulls into a crooked knot. “Francis’ parents apparently like me and I’m not going to pass up an opportunity to practice conversational dialogue. Besides which, they’re amazing cooks.”
“French class has ruined you. Next you’ll say we can’t have Mickey D’s anymore because it’s not pâté.”
To Alfred’s despair, Matthew is so intent on taming his curl that he doesn’t even roll his eyes. It’s an annoyance Alfred carries with him the rest of the day, even when guys from the team surround him at the weekly Sunday Football meet up.
-------Tomorrow Alfred will tell his friends about the greatest blowjob he’s ever had. It won’t be a lie, not really. Matthew gives ( ... )
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Really, this is lovely as always authoranon. I don't think you need to worry about Alfred's character; he comes through as himself to me. It's fantastic imo. (I also love your Kiku by the way!) ♥ And oh, but this whole thing is fantastic and hot; I want to see them fall deeper and deeper into each other while at the same time fearing the consequences for them. The letter! On the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
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And don't worry Alfred is just how I imagine him <333333
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I really like your Alfred: canonically he reminds me of a teenager - loud, reckless, doesn't say what he thinks or think before he speaks, the lot - and you're really using that. ("Your feet stink," pfft. XD) So he works for me! :Db Also really liking that even though Matt & Al are sleeping together, they don't stop being brothers, don't stop teasing or annoying each other. Bromance + romance = my otp.
And that second-last section? You owe me some new underwear, author!anon. Just sayin'. ♥
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♥ keep going anon!
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You don't know me, but I'm completely in love with you. XP
Sincerely,
Another Anon
P.S: Poor Alfred~ I sense a bit of heartbreak on the horizon...
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