I want igiko and alfred (no country names plz). Anon wants this as raunchy as possible - bonus points for overly domineering America and humiliated Igiko.
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She was on her knees, her body bent forward until her face almost touched the cold, stone dungeon floor
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Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1b/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 14:51:19 UTC
The toy inside her immediately started to shudder almost violently, causing Elizabeth to scream out in a mixture of pain and pleasure-they’ve almost become synonymous at this point. For about three hours, Alfred had been putting her through this torture, even while he wasn’t in the dungeon, and he always seemed to know when she’d be so close to her release, because he would stop almost as soon as he’d begun. It was a torture that was sweet and pleasurable, but painful because there was no end, no climax
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Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 14:54:09 UTC
Ignore HTML!fail from before, please --
When England opened her eyes, she was lying in her bed-alone-with The Clash’s song continuing to play from her phone alarm. Her long Beatles t-shirt had ridden up in the night to reveal her lower body, which was currently tangled in the sheets.
As she sat up, England became very aware of the liquid heat pooling in her lower abdomen-as well as a sense of emptiness inside her that made her heart ache (as well as the rest of her body).
Her green eyes caught sight of a comic book on the floor, one that Japan had given her-a doujin, he’d called it.
One that had a picture of a smirking America grasping her at the nape of her neck, pulling her head back as her cheeks flushed and her eyes clenched closed with pleasure, that damned collar still wrapped around her neck…
…BUGGER.
With a groan she fell back on her pillow, her eyes closed and her cheeks flushed with shame.
I…am in huge trouble.
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Might continue this, but I'm not sure. Please send feedback!
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 16:12:04 UTC
I'm also feeling a little frustrated, although I love the fact that she woke up kind of ashamed as well as ridiculously turned on and frustrated. ... I sound like such a terrible person.
Unf, I love all the powerplay her subconcious threw in after reading that doujinshi; too bad her subconscious didn't remember that the best way to "torture" a female partner is to make her come until she's begging you to stop, then make her come until she thinks she can't come anymore, then make her come till she can't think at all. ;D
Also, leather gloves are always A++, author!anon. XD
I don't know where all the het and yuri D/s and BDSM is coming from, but I'm glad it's appearing on my meme. <3 (Hell, after this, that Hungary/Belgium D/s, and Canada/New Zealand, all I need is for somebody to fill that Hungary/England request and my life will be complete. Dear god, everyone writing these rocks. :D
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"too bad her subconscious didn't remember that the best way to "torture" a female partner is to make her come until she's begging you to stop, then make her come until she thinks she can't come anymore, then make her come till she can't think at all. ;D"
Um...oops?
Lol, seriously, though, I'm sorry. I was aiming for the orgasm denial angle, but I obviously failed. (T-T OTL)
Re: Author!Anon
anonymous
April 7 2011, 21:27:58 UTC
Ah, no! OTL I wasn't trying to "correct" your story or something! I was just hoping that her dreams weren't only orgasm denial. I was hoping to inspire more, actually. ;D Selfish motives are selfish, yeah?
But no, you didn't fail at all; the orgasm denial was actually really hot. <3 Although I am pretty amused that her own subconscious is denying her; that's kind of weirdly masochistic. LOL
Re: Author!Anon
anonymous
April 8 2011, 00:07:35 UTC
Lol, not at all. Actually, I do have some ideas now (shifty eyes)...
Well, I'm glad I didn't fail, then. This was actually my first time writing anything involving BDSM, so if I continue, I can't promise it to be completely accurate of the lifestyle. But from yours and everyone else's reactions, I seemed to have done a pretty good job so far. (puffs out chest proudly)
As for her masochistic subconscious, well...I'm not saying a thing. ^///^
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 16:18:35 UTC
Oh God...I've been hoping for an America/Igiko fic like this for so long... I think that you should totally continue this. I'd love to see were it goes from here~
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 22:13:33 UTC
/fans self
Wow- it's so damn good to see some bondage het in here! Fem!England's dreams are quite heated and quite good; she needs to keep a dream diary... or maybe get a vibrator for herself.
I would love to see this continued, if the muse keeps bothering you.
Chapter 2: Her Guilty Pleasure (2a/?)
anonymous
April 9 2011, 22:04:28 UTC
When England felt a little calmer about the dream, she got up and picked up the doujinshi that had inspired said dream.
Then she went to her desk and opened a certain drawer, which contained more comic books, each cover having a variation of the one in her hand-in other words, each doujin featured her in some sort of fetish-like look, while America would continue to have that smirk and dangerous look in his eyes….
England blushed brightly, then quickly put her new doujin in the drawer and pushed it closed, her hand lingering on the knob for a few moments. Then she turned around and walked back to her bed, falling back on it face first.
I…I can’t believe it happened again. This has been probably the hundredth time she’s dreamt of America and her in…that sort of situation. Each dream had been a different scenario, but with similar themes.
One: they were almost always based on whichever doujinshi England had read the night before.
Two: in each dream, England was always tied down and forced to (enjoy) suffer whatever erotic
( ... )
Re: Chapter 2: Her Guilty Pleasure (2b/?)
anonymous
April 9 2011, 22:13:05 UTC
Seriously, England had practically raised the boy. Even though they weren’t technically related by blood and their relationship post-American Revolution was still pretty brittle (Special relationship or not), she’d once been like an older sister to him, if not a mother. As such, thinking about him, feeling that way about him was immoral of the highest degree…Right?
Well, it’s not as if I would be the first one, she thought almost sardonically. After all, France raised me as well, and she’s still trying to get into my knickers.
Then of course there’s Spain and his Romano.
Prussia once said he had a thing for Germany a while back…I think even Denmark might have cried over Sweden once when we all got drunk.
Now that I think about it, isn’t Italy technically much older than Germany?
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Oh, who the bloody hell am I kidding? The whole world’s fucked up. If I try to put logic into international relationships, I’ll just go mad.
Once again: Why America?No matter how much England tried to imagine someone in his place, the dominator in her
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Author's Note
anonymous
April 9 2011, 22:26:23 UTC
Naturally, England/Elizabeth's vow is bound to backfire. LOL! XD
Wow, I can't properly put into words how surprised I was at the positive feedback I got for this. Hell, I just realized I broke a rule in the OP's prompt (no country names plz)...oh, well. The good part is that I've decided to continue it, albeit in small parts. Don't worry OP (if you're out there), once "playtime" is in session, country names go out the window!
As for how much of a role BDSM is going to play here...a lot, actually. As well as the psychology behind a D/s relationship, mostly from the sub's (England) POV, mostly relating to her tentative acceptance of her kink. coughAmerica's perspective might show up latercoughOnce again, I've never really written about the subject matter before, so there's no guarantee that this will be 100% accurate. If one of you readers have dabbled in the lifestyle and have some advice, by all means, tell me
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Re: Author's Note
anonymous
April 10 2011, 07:54:34 UTC
I adore this. I love her rambling thought process, those moments of lucidity in which she thins out the fourth wall and wryly echoes the voices of the fans before swinging right back to her so amusingly in-denial self. At this point, I have to muse on whether America can live up to the dream America that she's created out of her cravings and pent-up frustrations, flowering desires, etc., etc.
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12234506
I want igiko and alfred (no country names plz). Anon wants this as raunchy as possible - bonus points for overly domineering America and humiliated Igiko.
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She was on her knees, her body bent forward until her face almost touched the cold, stone dungeon floor ( ... )
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When England opened her eyes, she was lying in her bed-alone-with The Clash’s song continuing to play from her phone alarm. Her long Beatles t-shirt had ridden up in the night to reveal her lower body, which was currently tangled in the sheets.
As she sat up, England became very aware of the liquid heat pooling in her lower abdomen-as well as a sense of emptiness inside her that made her heart ache (as well as the rest of her body).
Her green eyes caught sight of a comic book on the floor, one that Japan had given her-a doujin, he’d called it.
One that had a picture of a smirking America grasping her at the nape of her neck, pulling her head back as her cheeks flushed and her eyes clenched closed with pleasure, that damned collar still wrapped around her neck…
…BUGGER.
With a groan she fell back on her pillow, her eyes closed and her cheeks flushed with shame.
I…am in huge trouble.
--
Might continue this, but I'm not sure. Please send feedback!
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Unf, I love all the powerplay her subconcious threw in after reading that doujinshi; too bad her subconscious didn't remember that the best way to "torture" a female partner is to make her come until she's begging you to stop, then make her come until she thinks she can't come anymore, then make her come till she can't think at all. ;D
Also, leather gloves are always A++, author!anon. XD
I don't know where all the het and yuri D/s and BDSM is coming from, but I'm glad it's appearing on my meme. <3 (Hell, after this, that Hungary/Belgium D/s, and Canada/New Zealand, all I need is for somebody to fill that Hungary/England request and my life will be complete. Dear god, everyone writing these rocks. :D ( ... )
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Um...oops?
Lol, seriously, though, I'm sorry. I was aiming for the orgasm denial angle, but I obviously failed. (T-T OTL)
I'm glad you liked it though. Thank you! ^^
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But no, you didn't fail at all; the orgasm denial was actually really hot. <3 Although I am pretty amused that her own subconscious is denying her; that's kind of weirdly masochistic. LOL
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Well, I'm glad I didn't fail, then. This was actually my first time writing anything involving BDSM, so if I continue, I can't promise it to be completely accurate of the lifestyle. But from yours and everyone else's reactions, I seemed to have done a pretty good job so far. (puffs out chest proudly)
As for her masochistic subconscious, well...I'm not saying a thing. ^///^
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I think that you should totally continue this. I'd love to see were it goes from here~
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Wow- it's so damn good to see some bondage het in here! Fem!England's dreams are quite heated and quite good; she needs to keep a dream diary... or maybe get a vibrator for herself.
I would love to see this continued, if the muse keeps bothering you.
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Then she went to her desk and opened a certain drawer, which contained more comic books, each cover having a variation of the one in her hand-in other words, each doujin featured her in some sort of fetish-like look, while America would continue to have that smirk and dangerous look in his eyes….
England blushed brightly, then quickly put her new doujin in the drawer and pushed it closed, her hand lingering on the knob for a few moments. Then she turned around and walked back to her bed, falling back on it face first.
I…I can’t believe it happened again. This has been probably the hundredth time she’s dreamt of America and her in…that sort of situation. Each dream had been a different scenario, but with similar themes.
One: they were almost always based on whichever doujinshi England had read the night before.
Two: in each dream, England was always tied down and forced to (enjoy) suffer whatever erotic ( ... )
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Well, it’s not as if I would be the first one, she thought almost sardonically. After all, France raised me as well, and she’s still trying to get into my knickers.
Then of course there’s Spain and his Romano.
Prussia once said he had a thing for Germany a while back…I think even Denmark might have cried over Sweden once when we all got drunk.
Now that I think about it, isn’t Italy technically much older than Germany?
…
Oh, who the bloody hell am I kidding? The whole world’s fucked up. If I try to put logic into international relationships, I’ll just go mad.
Once again: Why America?No matter how much England tried to imagine someone in his place, the dominator in her ( ... )
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Wow, I can't properly put into words how surprised I was at the positive feedback I got for this. Hell, I just realized I broke a rule in the OP's prompt (no country names plz)...oh, well. The good part is that I've decided to continue it, albeit in small parts. Don't worry OP (if you're out there), once "playtime" is in session, country names go out the window!
As for how much of a role BDSM is going to play here...a lot, actually. As well as the psychology behind a D/s relationship, mostly from the sub's (England) POV, mostly relating to her tentative acceptance of her kink. coughAmerica's perspective might show up latercoughOnce again, I've never really written about the subject matter before, so there's no guarantee that this will be 100% accurate. If one of you readers have dabbled in the lifestyle and have some advice, by all means, tell me ( ... )
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