Sexy Back [pt 1/??]
anonymous
April 25 2011, 05:45:48 UTC
He should have suspected something when Prussia showed up last night at their hotel room - Prussia, who wasn’t even invited to the world meetings anymore and therefore had no reason to be in Belgium, smirking and sniggering. Then Spain had to mention how long it had been since the last time they hung out, so of course France was obliged to leave his dreadfully dull paperwork behind and accompany them for a night on the town. They started with drinks at the hotel lobby bar: an X-rated flirtini for France, a sangria cocktail for Spain, and for Prussia, a glass of Bockbier. But they had not even finished their third round of shots before they were asked to leave by some burly uniformed security guards, and were forced to relocate their celebration to the local nightclubs a few blocks away
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Sexy Back [pt 2/??]
anonymous
April 25 2011, 05:47:34 UTC
To France’s horror, Spain’s shirt was just a little too tight around the stomach, a little too short in the back to reach the waistline of his tailored slacks. The only suit jacket he had to cover himself was itself covered in vomit. And today Germany was counting on him to give a very important presentation to the rest of the nations. Prussia’s timing could not have been any worse, and France felt certain he would not be able to refrain from hurting his friend in various unusual manners when they found him later. Not only that, the pain in his lower back simply would not go away. Glumly, France stared at the papers he was supposed to be reviewing, more preoccupied with sucking in his stomach than the impact of the latest economic data
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Sexy Back [pt 3/??]
anonymous
April 25 2011, 05:49:13 UTC
He found an empty bathroom, and with his back facing the mirror, pulled his shirt up to get a look at his mark of shame. At least it was a tastefully inked butterfly, if still a little red and swollen around the edges. Sighing, France pulled his shirt back down and vowed to wring some answers out of Prussia and Spain. He turned on the tap, splashed some water on his face and looked up to see Russia’s reflection in the mirror
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Sexy Back [pt 4/??]
anonymous
April 25 2011, 05:50:31 UTC
Just down the next hall, America, Canada and Australia were talking, and so he lingered, out of sight. He heard the soft murmur of Canada’s voice, followed by America’s laugh.
“Bro, this is France we’re talking about! We all know he’s loose, now he’s got the advertisement
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Sexy Back [pt 5/5]
anonymous
April 25 2011, 05:54:42 UTC
“Now wait a minute,” Spain interrupted, “You’re not in any condition to go murdering other former empires. You need to rest, you had a stressful day
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Re: Sexy Back [pt 5/5]
anonymous
May 26 2011, 12:31:42 UTC
THEY ARE SUCH GIRLS LOL
Really, the fact that this ended up sweet and somewhat romantic speaks highly of your talent, because at the beginning it was ridiculous and amusing. The Trio are like teenage girls, but that's why we love them; I kinda liked the fact that for once they were truly under the influence, and not causing all of that just from alcohol. (and yes, it'd be Prussia's idea *nods*) I really liked their interaction as friends, and their characterization. I especially liked your Spain, suitably dense but also passionate and romantic and a good natured friend, I always love when he's not the only monogamous nation, and when these three are established as "friends with benefits". For such a short scene, the sex was incredibly sexy too! And I always like details like Spain being very fit and France starting to show some weight, and England directly getting fat.
Now, I also loved the plot, because the idea of being pursued by everyone is certainly more attractive than the reality, which would be a little overwhelming. Poor
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Re: Sexy Back [pt 5/5]
anonymous
May 29 2011, 01:14:02 UTC
Well thank you so much for the comment! I appreciate hearing what you enjoyed most about the fic. I love the Bad Friends and try to refine how I see their relationship (in the context of a threesome or in the context of just platonic bros/friends) with each fill I write. And of course, France's expectations contrasting with reality.
I would certainly like to write more, I'm getting so many requests for sequels these days, haha. But generally, I just write to fill the prompt and I have no ideas after I stop the fill.
France wakes up with butterfly tramp stamp that he isn't aware of. World meeting, everyone sees it and wants a piece of that.
Bonus points if Francis is sick of all the advances at the end of the day (there's only so much raunchiness even he can take).
[Author anon is starting a streak of cracky/fluffy/smutty France fills...]
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Really, the fact that this ended up sweet and somewhat romantic speaks highly of your talent, because at the beginning it was ridiculous and amusing. The Trio are like teenage girls, but that's why we love them; I kinda liked the fact that for once they were truly under the influence, and not causing all of that just from alcohol. (and yes, it'd be Prussia's idea *nods*)
I really liked their interaction as friends, and their characterization. I especially liked your Spain, suitably dense but also passionate and romantic and a good natured friend, I always love when he's not the only monogamous nation, and when these three are established as "friends with benefits". For such a short scene, the sex was incredibly sexy too! And I always like details like Spain being very fit and France starting to show some weight, and England directly getting fat.
Now, I also loved the plot, because the idea of being pursued by everyone is certainly more attractive than the reality, which would be a little overwhelming. Poor ( ... )
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I would certainly like to write more, I'm getting so many requests for sequels these days, haha. But generally, I just write to fill the prompt and I have no ideas after I stop the fill.
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