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[Part 9] USUK - All My Loving 1/2 anonymous May 22 2011, 11:46:29 UTC
original request: here

US/UK, with the latter crying during sex, and America, being the hero, doing everything in his power to comfort his grief-stricken lover.

I was browsing through the unfilled requests when this caught my eye. I'm not sure if OP will be able to see this since this is such an old req. It's not that faithful to the prompt because I'm fail like that. So sorry for the fail orz, this is anon's first time filling. I do hope people would still enjoy this.
It was one of those nights; sleepless, fluttering with activities. Alfred was lost in the pleasurable heat that engulfed him, his eyes screwed shut as he sheathed himself completely into the warmth that Arthur offered. He stilled for a moment to catch his breath. It has really been too long since they shared such intimacy. And like every time, he felt-- knew that innocent kisses and sweet nothings would never suffice. He wanted Arthur, everything Arthur. The older nation was his drug, the vice that he will never be able to let go. Alfred idly wondered when and how ( ... )

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Re: [Part 9] USUK - All My Loving 2/2 anonymous May 22 2011, 11:47:38 UTC
“H-hey, now...” he began, lifting a hand to caress his lover’s cheek soothingly. Arthur flinched at the touch. And as if woken up from his stupor, the older country immediately covered his face with the palms of his hands in a mixture of embarrassment and shame. “Don’t look.” his voice was muffled but Alfred could hear the tremble in it. The American felt distressed at the way the Briton was acting. “Arthur,” he tried again. The other blonde just shook his head weakly and sobbed ( ... )

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Re: [Part 9] USUK - All My Loving 2/2 anonymous May 22 2011, 18:39:48 UTC
Al is such a lovely hero :3 I like the way this turned out - I'd love to know why Artie was crying, though. Still, its not really necessary, because the effect of Al being mature and loving is just nice and warm and fuzzy.

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A!A here anonymous May 23 2011, 03:57:58 UTC
Thank you! This was my first fill so I was anxious to post it. ^~^

Actually, even I don't know why Arthur was crying (neither does Al). I kind of thought that it would have that mysterious effect. orz

A mature Alfred never fails to melt my heart. :3

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Re: [Part 9] USUK - All My Loving 2/2 anonymous May 23 2011, 08:40:05 UTC
Alfred: So... Can we get back to business? It's staring to hurt.

-SHOT- Oh come on! We need to finish this smex! :

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Re: [Part 9] USUK - All My Loving 2/2 anonymous May 25 2011, 10:11:20 UTC
a!a is sorry for the unfinished smexing. I wasn't sure about something so I chose to just not continue. *fails miserably*

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Re: [Part 9] USUK - All My Loving 2/2 anonymous June 22 2011, 00:04:56 UTC
/rolls happily in her corner while Capthcha is studying Inforts

To be honest, I've always imagined Arthur to be the type of character who occationally has to hold back tears when he is with his beloved ; w ;

This was quite lovely, A!A~ don't worry about the unfinished smex; it wasn't really all that important to the story. c:

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