Re: oh, yes. (one)
anonymous
June 2 2011, 01:11:27 UTC
Um, wow. Yeah that was such a hot beginning. o//o
The bonuses that the OP listed is really awesome too and I hope you include them. I do have to admit that I don't see the 3rd bonus happening here though. Considering that what started this bet appears to be America paying too much attention to his games instead of England, I don't think England would take kindly to sharing his attention with another nation. Well that's my thought anyway.
I hope you have more planned soon, because even if I'm a horrible OP who didn't review until now, this is fucking fantastic, and I and many here (as you can see) love every single line in it. And we aren't event into the good stuff yet!
Alfred looses a bet against Arthur…and has to be his pornmaid for a week ( ... )
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(It begins as something small, something so infinitesimally tiny that it can hardly be considered a problem at all)
"America," England says, shaking the other nation's shoulder gently. "Are we-"
"Not... Now..." America's reply is distracted as his eyes remain glued to the screen, fingers fumbling with the controls.
England sighs. "Alright then."
(It grows bigger, bit by bit)
"America-" England barely gets to say another word before he is cut off.
"Not tonight," America says hurriedly, fingers moving at alarming speed, jabbing at the controls.
England's eyes narrow briefly. "Then when?"
(And it reaches the stage where it cannot be ignored any longer)
"America," England squeezes his shoulder. "We need to talk."
"Tomorrow?" America bites his lip, eyes not leaving the screen.
"I'm going to bet with you," England says, tone resolute.
"Oh?"
"Yes," England says wryly. "Oh indeed ( ... )
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Agreeing with the title right now. can't wait ;P
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The bonuses that the OP listed is really awesome too and I hope you include them. I do have to admit that I don't see the 3rd bonus happening here though. Considering that what started this bet appears to be America paying too much attention to his games instead of England, I don't think England would take kindly to sharing his attention with another nation. Well that's my thought anyway.
Definitely can't wait to see more of this.
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