Tainting the Night [18e/?]
anonymous
January 26 2011, 02:53:12 UTC
The Briton's eyes snapped open as he registered the American's protests through a fog of desire and want. He pulled his teeth out of the student's neck, being careful not to cause any more injury. “Alfred, are you alright?” he asked, panicking slightly as he started to realize how much blood he'd taken from the student
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You're back, yay! :D I've been looking forward to more. That chapter was great! The smut was hot. But eeep, you had better be careful, Arthur, that was close!
Heck yes, an update!! Life can be so difficult, yeah? -kicks it-
That sex was hotor is it cold? /shot, anon!! I was so glad to see an update when I came by to check (lol totally checks everyday) and to find porn! Oh man, triple awesome!! :'D
I hope life is treatin you better, anon, really! Not good to be stressed out ;w;
Re: Tainting the Night [18e/?]
anonymous
January 27 2011, 17:46:17 UTC
Ok, this bloodplay and bloodlust thing should be illegal, because HOT DAMN. That was...wow. So freakin hot. I love your vampire mythos here, and I hope we see a lot more vampire sex before Arthur starts his attempt to rehumanize.
Tainting the Night [19a/?]
anonymous
February 28 2011, 03:03:18 UTC
Alfred awoke very late the next morning feeling very tired. He groggily tried to sit up, but felt slightly dizzy when he did so and flopped back to lying down. He didn't try to sit up again until the door to his bedroom opened and Arthur entered holding a bowl of cereal and a large glass of milk
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Tainting the Night [19b/?]
anonymous
February 28 2011, 03:07:30 UTC
“Huh,” was all the younger man said in reply. Then he slowly extended his hand. “Um... Could I have that necklace back. It's just that it's your first gift to me and all
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Tainting the Night [19c/?]
anonymous
February 28 2011, 03:20:36 UTC
The Englishman both sighed and smiled. “Of course you can come, love. Though I doubt Braginski would do something so extreme. Also, I'd... well, I'd like it if you'd be willing to be my blood donor.” Arthur turned his face away in embarrassment
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Just a suggestion
anonymous
February 28 2011, 04:17:13 UTC
One thing you might want to watch out for and limit is the epithets. It does get a bit distracting when you keep using "The Englishman", "The American", "The Briton", "The younger man", "The elder" etc in almost every other sentence. There's no problem with just using the characters' name even if it may seem like it's repetitive.
I really am enjoying this story and have been following since day one. However, all the epithets usage just lead me to make this common post after I was through with 19A.
Tainting the Night [20a/?]
anonymous
March 11 2011, 01:53:24 UTC
The trip to Yao's store was swift, although Alfred did use the time to ask many of his burning questions.
“Do holy symbols affect you?”
“Only if the vampire believes they will. It's a placebo effect.”
“How about silver?”
“Actually, yes. It interferes with digesting blood.”
“Do you have a reflection?”
“Of course I have a reflection.”
“Why don't you just drink blood packs?”
“Do you have any idea how hard it would be to get those? Besides, it's not like feeding hurts anyone unless we're careless.”
“Oh! Can you turn into a bat?”
“...I'm a vampire, not a shape-shifter.”
“...So I guess you can't turn into a rat or a wolf or smoke either...”
“No.”
“Does drinking blood from dead things poison you like in Interview with the Vampire? “No, but it doesn't taste as good and is often harder to get than regular human blood
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Request and Parts 1 - 15: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17942.html?thread=57125654#t57125654
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That sex was hotor is it cold? /shot, anon!! I was so glad to see an update when I came by to check (lol totally checks everyday) and to find porn! Oh man, triple awesome!! :'D
I hope life is treatin you better, anon, really! Not good to be stressed out ;w;
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I really am enjoying this story and have been following since day one. However, all the epithets usage just lead me to make this common post after I was through with 19A.
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“Do holy symbols affect you?”
“Only if the vampire believes they will. It's a placebo effect.”
“How about silver?”
“Actually, yes. It interferes with digesting blood.”
“Do you have a reflection?”
“Of course I have a reflection.”
“Why don't you just drink blood packs?”
“Do you have any idea how hard it would be to get those? Besides, it's not like feeding hurts anyone unless we're careless.”
“Oh! Can you turn into a bat?”
“...I'm a vampire, not a shape-shifter.”
“...So I guess you can't turn into a rat or a wolf or smoke either...”
“No.”
“Does drinking blood from dead things poison you like in Interview with the Vampire? “No, but it doesn't taste as good and is often harder to get than regular human blood ( ... )
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