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Part 14 - AU where America is England's Sex Slave anonymous January 5 2011, 18:22:51 UTC
Original request:
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=53380537#t53380537

Inspired by Part 7 'AU where England is under America's rule, and his sex slave.' request + THIS image as seme!England ->http://pm400.sakuraweb.com/aphe/100727-1.jpg

America(from our world) somehow switches place with the America from the alternate world (one where UK won the war, perhaps, and is still ruling America as a colony-this is up to the writer anon. Change it as you see fit! ). Whether or not they eventually switch back is up to you. One shots, glimpses of the situation on either side of the switch are also very much welcomed.

Bonus: Bondage. Use of sex toys. anon is going to hell
Bonus 2: Suit!pornWriternon apologizes if this has already been filled; I found it in the unfilled index at the usxuk comm. Writernon would also like to forewarn any potential readers that this ( ... )

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writernon thinks some thoughts - this is not the fic! anonymous January 6 2011, 17:37:54 UTC
Since you asked (and thank you for asking!), I've been thinking about what things would be like for other-world Alfred in our world ( ... )

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writernon thinks more thoughts -- this is still not fic! anonymous January 6 2011, 18:06:24 UTC
So yes, Mr. Obama is the first to figure out that Alfred doesn't know what's going, although he doesn't know exactly what's happened. So other-world Alfred gets debriefed, and they find out he believes he lost the Revolutionary War and has continued to serve Great Britain. I don't know how they figure out he's from a parallel universe and hasn't had a psychotic break (which is why this is just me talking and not really fic!), but I guess somehow they figure it out ( ... )

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Re: writernon thinks more thoughts -- this is still not fic! anonymous January 7 2011, 00:45:04 UTC
I just have to say that I love this. The tone was great and my I make an idea? Perhaps its the people (America's) that figure it out first? The nations have a connection that lets them realize when their near other nations so I'm sure their own people must have one with their own nation too. So, as the president, his boss, and presumable his friend perhaps Obama has the strongest connection or one of the strongest which makes him able to tell somethings wrong instantly? Then the rest think he has amnesia and after some questioning/medical service the truth comes to light ( ... )

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Re: writernon thinks more thoughts -- this is still not fic! anonymous January 7 2011, 03:57:56 UTC
Ah, thank you, you have reminded me of something I'd come up with and then forgot again in the haste to type up my ideas. What I wanted was for Obama not only to realize something was wrong, but to somehow know, from looking into Alfred's eyes, that this is not the same Alfred F. Jones he's known for the past two years. So even when they're doing a battery of tests on Alfred, Obama is standing by him saying, "I believe you." Does that sound too corny?

so he isn't allow himself to cum and stops just short of it every time? I wonder how long he can keep that up ...pun not intended sorry XD

Ha! Well, I would guess that if Arthur wants Alfred to come, he'll be able to make that happen sooner or later; Alfred probably counts it as a victory if it's later rather than sooner, because he's making Arthur work for it...

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Re: writernon thinks more thoughts -- this is still not fic! anonymous January 7 2011, 01:21:54 UTC
(this is first anon who asked this morning... it's a bit tricky to differentiate yourself on an anonymous meme, haha)

Man, now I really hope you write that sequel, though it sounds like quite an undertaking! I particularly like that bittersweet twist: that other-world Alfred and our-world Arthur may never know to what extent they have feelings for each other - or for the other each other. And if/when after the switch they return to their normal partner, still they'll always carry that glimpse of what/who could've been ( ... )

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first, some links... anonymous January 7 2011, 03:38:45 UTC
Okay, here are the links to my other kink meme fills ( ... )

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and now more thoughts anonymous January 7 2011, 03:50:27 UTC
And if/when after the switch they return to their normal partner, still they'll always carry that glimpse of what/who could've been.I do think that in some ways, the switched-world versions are better suited to each other that the same-world pairings--but maybe only because they have experience with the same-world counterparts before meeting the other-world ones. Does that even make sense? I'm trying to say that, for example, other-world Alfred can give our-world Arthur something that maybe our-world Alfred can't--license to do whatever he wants in bed, to allow some of his darker desires to surface--because other-world Alfred has experience with other-world Arthur, and can guide our-world Arthur in a way he needs ( ... )

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Re: and now more thoughts anonymous January 8 2011, 02:07:43 UTC
*__* Thanks for the long link list~! And it has been a pleasure to read your thoughts and ideas. I wish you the best of luck with this, and do hope to see some more writing from this world (er... these two worlds, I should say) in whatever form!

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Re: and now more thoughts anonymous January 8 2011, 03:07:59 UTC
Thank you for encouraging me to think about it more. ♥ And I hope you find something to enjoy from that list, if that's all right to say.

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Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5) anonymous January 6 2011, 05:42:07 UTC
Anon loves this story :') Thank you for writing it. But why oh why did it have to end? CRY.

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Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5) anonymous January 6 2011, 16:56:05 UTC
Writernon thanks you for reading and is very happy you enjoyed it! And apologizes if it seems like too much of a tease... orz

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Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5) anonymous January 6 2011, 07:39:51 UTC
Oh, this is lovely. Fight Alfred, fight! I love that - that even when his body is giving in, he's still clinging to himself inside. I love that England hasn't been able to break him that way.

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Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5) anonymous January 6 2011, 17:07:29 UTC
Writernon is very happy you liked it! Yes, Alfred is learning strength and survival through surrender, which is not something he has much experience with in our world. I think he hasn't decided how much to enjoy it yet, but he has an inkling that he can take pleasure without giving up his core self. (And I hope I wasn't too cruel to Arthur here! I don't think he's a bad guy, really--he's used to having his way without question. The last one to question him was...well, it was Alfred, 235 years or so ago. I think he's not quite sure what to make of Alfred's behavior now.)

Thank you for reading, and sorry for my ramble!

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OP ANON anonymous January 15 2011, 19:40:01 UTC
OH MY GOD YOU FILLED THIS.

I just-hngh /incoherant

let me first say a HUGE thank you for filling this (I would write it myself but I have the inability to write...out a story like that /embarassed), and that this story was good. I really enjoyed how you potrayed alternate Arthur and the reactions of Alfred from canon. ALSO. The whole interaction between the both of them I just-yeah.

TL;DR: SEQUEL PLEASE and shgdaksjdhajh /showers you with lots of love+cookies

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