Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 25 2011, 20:08:46 UTC
OH MY LORD! an update! I am so happy anon I can't even express my joy. This is one of my favorite stories on the meme and I had feared you had abandoned it. Thank you so much for continuing! Have my first born
Aww, thank you anon ♥ I'm happy for your review, and glad this made you happy ♥
Nope! I'm never dropping this. I've already written over 177 pages, so I'm in it until the end. I have it all plotted out until the end, actually (and have a lot of the end written, but I need to rewrite it a bit)
But sometimes life gets the best of me and I'm not able to update it for a while. I'm always thinking of coming back, though! I've been better about doing WIPS as of late, and I definitely should have an update next month ♥
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 00:48:39 UTC
OH MY GOD oh my god you updated. My day is made. And I was having a pretty good day too but this just makes it awesome. I have been waiting for an update on this for SO LONG.
Authoranon, you are everything I want to be in a fanfic writer. Your characterization is //gorgeous// your descriptions are so memorable. (And if the action might be a bit slow, I for one have no complaints. X3)
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 05:38:05 UTC
I'm sorry for the wait, anon! Life got crazy there for a minute. I kept wanting to write it, but stuff came up and I wasn't able to update. D: In the end it was someone's birthday that made me sit down and finish it.
Awww, thank you! ♥ I'll for sure get one out next month. After that, I hope to keep up at at least once per month updates ♥
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 03:48:41 UTC
I AM THE AMAZING ANON-NOT-SO-ANON WHO LOVES YOU AND GIVES YOU REVIEWS FILLED WITH LOVE AND LOVE AND A BIT OF LOVE.
I'm so so so happy with this update!! Thank you so much ;//v//; kaljsklasj this is the best earliest birthday gift ever. I had a terrible day, I'm sick and I didn't do well on my exam, so I wanted to kill everything and kick a puppy, but this made me so happy, sweetheart <3! Thank you again
( ... )
They were technically slated to dance, but I figured that'd be too much given the fact that they danced earlier. they have a slow dance later on, though. I promise XD
Aww, thank you for your nice review! I always loved you guy's reviews so much. You two are so sweet. ♥
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 14:55:41 UTC
YOU'RE BACK. *fangasm*
I love this fic so much. Seriously, with every chapter it just gets better and better...I think it's the characterization, and the tiny little details that do it for me; like Matthew carrying a lighter round, and giving Francis his cigarettes.
I also like how, although they're clearly happy together, you occasionally drop the tiniest hints of dissatisfaction. Like:
"-Didn't exactly work? Didn't exactly work? That song was like taking the Mona Lisa and shitting upon it and trying to call it art!"
Matthew patted Francis on the shoulder. "Hey, I'm on your side here."
I know it's just a little thing, and Francis acknowledges that he is "on his side" afterwards, but it makes their whole relationship more realistic and believable.
Anyway, it's just wonderful, and I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for more!
Wit Of The Staircase 81/?
anonymous
June 3 2011, 08:43:52 UTC
It was a lazy weekend, and they were lounging about the apartment. Their exams were done and the summer promised to be boring and full of whatever trouble the trio could get into. For Matthew, it would be a lot more boring.
"I can't believe all the things I can get automatically failed for," Matthew sighed.
"Hmm?" Francis said.
"I'm taking Driver's Ed. Well, Arthur's making me. I think he wants to uh- keep me busy over the summer," Matthew said. He smiled wryly at Francis.
"So I won't 'keep you busy', I take it?"
"Exactly," Matthew said. "Well, I suppose I should be glad that at least he didn't make me get some horrible summer job. Like babysitting, mowing lawns-or heaven help me working in a fast food place"I don't know...the last sounds appealing. You could 'have it my way'. I'd of course order the 'extra-size' - what is it called here
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 82/?
anonymous
June 3 2011, 08:47:03 UTC
They passed around the toke until it was mostly burned down. Antonio mentioned something about some seeds and smoking a bowl later, but Matthew didn't ask for more
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 83/?
anonymous
June 3 2011, 09:31:20 UTC
His instructor was an old stodgy guy with thick glasses whose every other word was a homophobic comment. It would've been awkward if he wasn't such an obvious closet case-or his comments about the 'dirty faggots' didn't remind him of the last time Francis had put Matthew's cock in his mouth. That just made it hard not to break out laughing.
Everything would've gone all normally and it would've been one of those weird anecdotes you collect along the course of a life and repeat in coffeehouses had he not mentioned it to Francis.
That was the problem, really. It should've struck him that he should relate this anecdote to anyone but Francis because of the kinds of things Francis could do with this. But Matthew hadn't thought of that. So he just went to driver's training and went on with his day. He was doing pretty okay, and he was going to try and not fail parallel parking while his instructor was instructing him between rants about how gay men wore such short shorts that showed every contours of their ass in the most obscene way
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 84/?
anonymous
June 3 2011, 10:02:56 UTC
He undid Francis' pants opened it just enough. Francis' was easier, given his habit of not wearing underwear. Matthew still on a pair of boxers, but Francis had his cock out soon enough. They ground together, Francis kissing him and holding his face while Matthew tried to keep them from falling into the front seats
( ... )
Wit Of The Staircase 85/?
anonymous
June 3 2011, 10:16:36 UTC
And so Matthew did. Pretty soon Francis returned with two of those special fruit juice mix drinks. Francis had a Piña colada sans alcohol, while Matthew got a Strawberry Banana.
Matthew took a grateful swig of the sweet juice drink. In a moment, Francis leaned over, took the bottle and took a taste.
"Not bad," Francis said.
Matthew tried Francis's drink, and had to admit it had a nice flavor as well. Not quite as good as an actual Piña colada, but pretty good nonetheless.
"So," Matthew began. "Did we just recreate the scene from Titanic?"
Francis snorted. "Recent films pale in comparison to the past. If you want a film to emulate, then it should be Casablanca."
"Y-Yeah, but there's no carsex in Casablanca. And it had an unhappy ending."
"Then again, there are certain merits to that overblown film," Francis said.
"I thought you hated it entirely?"
"I can withstand my distaste for a sight of Kate Winslet's lovely breasts."
Al's opinion had been about the same, though Matthew's interest had been almost clinical. So that is
( ... )
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 85/?
anonymous
June 3 2011, 16:19:59 UTC
YOUR LATIN LOVER IS HEEERE
I had to skip the delicious part because I found the update at uni OTL, so I just read the other parts and back at home I'll read the rest. BUT IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL ;___; akshaksj I loved the part that mentioned Netherlands! And bawwww, I really love how Francis is concerned about that and the fact he loves Mattie being taller <3
Also, fffffff the instructor reminded me of my uncle, he's exactly like that. It's terrible, once I was talking about sandwichs and somehow he managed to talk about gay men. All the family was :| and he does have a girlfriend since I have memory, but we all think maybe she's a lesbian and both are bff who are hiding each other's sexuality.
ANYWAY. Thank you for your update ;v; I'll make another comment once I read the other part, but skjdhlsd thank you so so so much <333 iluuu
Part 13-14 (edited), 15-65: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=41192345#t41192345
66-76: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17465.html?thread=52116793#t52116793
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Have my first born
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Nope! I'm never dropping this. I've already written over 177 pages, so I'm in it until the end. I have it all plotted out until the end, actually (and have a lot of the end written, but I need to rewrite it a bit)
But sometimes life gets the best of me and I'm not able to update it for a while. I'm always thinking of coming back, though! I've been better about doing WIPS as of late, and I definitely should have an update next month ♥
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Authoranon, you are everything I want to be in a fanfic writer. Your characterization is //gorgeous// your descriptions are so memorable. (And if the action might be a bit slow, I for one have no complaints. X3)
Write more, write more! :) *encouragement encouragement*
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Awww, thank you! ♥ I'll for sure get one out next month. After that, I hope to keep up at at least once per month updates ♥
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I'm so so so happy with this update!! Thank you so much ;//v//; kaljsklasj this is the best earliest birthday gift ever. I had a terrible day, I'm sick and I didn't do well on my exam, so I wanted to kill everything and kick a puppy, but this made me so happy, sweetheart <3! Thank you again ( ... )
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Aww, thank you for your nice review! I always loved you guy's reviews so much. You two are so sweet. ♥
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I love this fic so much. Seriously, with every chapter it just gets better and better...I think it's the characterization, and the tiny little details that do it for me; like Matthew carrying a lighter round, and giving Francis his cigarettes.
I also like how, although they're clearly happy together, you occasionally drop the tiniest hints of dissatisfaction. Like:
"-Didn't exactly work? Didn't exactly work? That song was like taking the Mona Lisa and shitting upon it and trying to call it art!"
Matthew patted Francis on the shoulder. "Hey, I'm on your side here."
I know it's just a little thing, and Francis acknowledges that he is "on his side" afterwards, but it makes their whole relationship more realistic and believable.
Anyway, it's just wonderful, and I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for more!
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It was a lazy weekend, and they were lounging about the apartment. Their exams were done and the summer promised to be boring and full of whatever trouble the trio could get into. For Matthew, it would be a lot more boring.
"I can't believe all the things I can get automatically failed for," Matthew sighed.
"Hmm?" Francis said.
"I'm taking Driver's Ed. Well, Arthur's making me. I think he wants to uh- keep me busy over the summer," Matthew said. He smiled wryly at Francis.
"So I won't 'keep you busy', I take it?"
"Exactly," Matthew said. "Well, I suppose I should be glad that at least he didn't make me get some horrible summer job. Like babysitting, mowing lawns-or heaven help me working in a fast food place"I don't know...the last sounds appealing. You could 'have it my way'. I'd of course order the 'extra-size' - what is it called here ( ... )
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His instructor was an old stodgy guy with thick glasses whose every other word was a homophobic comment. It would've been awkward if he wasn't such an obvious closet case-or his comments about the 'dirty faggots' didn't remind him of the last time Francis had put Matthew's cock in his mouth. That just made it hard not to break out laughing.
Everything would've gone all normally and it would've been one of those weird anecdotes you collect along the course of a life and repeat in coffeehouses had he not mentioned it to Francis.
That was the problem, really. It should've struck him that he should relate this anecdote to anyone but Francis because of the kinds of things Francis could do with this. But Matthew hadn't thought of that. So he just went to driver's training and went on with his day. He was doing pretty okay, and he was going to try and not fail parallel parking while his instructor was instructing him between rants about how gay men wore such short shorts that showed every contours of their ass in the most obscene way ( ... )
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Matthew took a grateful swig of the sweet juice drink. In a moment, Francis leaned over, took the bottle and took a taste.
"Not bad," Francis said.
Matthew tried Francis's drink, and had to admit it had a nice flavor as well. Not quite as good as an actual Piña colada, but pretty good nonetheless.
"So," Matthew began. "Did we just recreate the scene from Titanic?"
Francis snorted. "Recent films pale in comparison to the past. If you want a film to emulate, then it should be Casablanca."
"Y-Yeah, but there's no carsex in Casablanca. And it had an unhappy ending."
"Then again, there are certain merits to that overblown film," Francis said.
"I thought you hated it entirely?"
"I can withstand my distaste for a sight of Kate Winslet's lovely breasts."
Al's opinion had been about the same, though Matthew's interest had been almost clinical. So that is ( ... )
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I had to skip the delicious part because I found the update at uni OTL, so I just read the other parts and back at home I'll read the rest.
BUT IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL ;___; akshaksj I loved the part that mentioned Netherlands! And bawwww, I really love how Francis is concerned about that and the fact he loves Mattie being taller <3
Also, fffffff the instructor reminded me of my uncle, he's exactly like that. It's terrible, once I was talking about sandwichs and somehow he managed to talk about gay men. All the family was :| and he does have a girlfriend since I have memory, but we all think maybe she's a lesbian and both are bff who are hiding each other's sexuality.
ANYWAY. Thank you for your update ;v; I'll make another comment once I read the other part, but skjdhlsd thank you so so so much <333 iluuu
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