Oh my god, you're back authornon! How I've missed your lovely writing and your lovely self! I'm so glad rl hasn't eaten you up whole!! All your readers still love you muchly too <3 <3 <3 And don't worry about writing speed--just know that when you do update, you make a hell lot of people fall off their chair fapping in joy, like I just did.
(Oh god, and the dorm scene unravels. *shudders* Your writing is as cutting as always. <3)
Re: never ballpoints [80/?]
anonymous
July 15 2011, 20:32:41 UTC
I can't really decide on how I feel about this story. A happy ending between Alfred and Arthur doesn't seem to be possible, so therefore the most realistic way for the story to end is Alfred getting caught. (I would really like to see that written out.) However, I would love to see the story get even darker. (I'm not really a fan of non-con in general, but I love US -> UK. Especially since this story is written in the rapist's POV) I would love to see a bit of Arthur's view, but it certainly isn't necessary. Anyway, I hope you continue this someday! It really would be a shame to see this just fade off without being finished.
Re: never ballpoints [80/?]
anonymous
October 9 2011, 22:03:57 UTC
So. After stumbling upon it earlier I've just sat down and read this whole thing from the first update to the most current one.
I wasn't here when it first started up because I wasn't part of the fandom then, but this is without a doubt the best fic I've ever read here, and I've been speedily making my way through as many as possible.
The prose, aaaah, it's gorgeous, I envy your writing. Alfred's thoughts are so fucking twisted but they're believable, Arthur's emotions are evident and they make me feel so sorry for him, and by God you've heard this all before because you know just how great this is and how real the Universe you've created feels.
Nothing I could possibly say is enough to give this fill justice and it won't be any different from what all the other anons have said- I mean this as a compliment. There are no words to describe how excellent this whole fic is.
So, if you ever do update, I'll be the first to read again.
Re: never ballpoints [80/?]
anonymous
November 1 2011, 22:10:22 UTC
GUH!!! ALFRED NOOO ;A; I just read this fic today and it's so...so...UNFFFF! Alfred trying to be all gentle and kind and loving but he secretly knows that Aurthur DOES NOT WANT, and Arthur is so freaking adorable and he's in so much pain right now T_T
Please please please update Authornon if you are still out there D:
p.s I get kinda creeped out when Arthur calls Alfred 'Mr. Jones' because that's my maths teacher's name and oh god I won't be able to look him in the eye tomorrow >.<
Re: never ballpoints [80/?]
anonymous
October 17 2012, 18:39:03 UTC
Oh, please please update this Author Anon!!
I remember reading this last winter, and it had me completely hooked! Words can't describe the agony I felt when I realised it wasn't finished. I simply must know what'll happen next! I've checked this post every month (in the beginning every week), and I've never stopped hoping. Your writing is wonderful, and you portray the chaotic feelings in Alfred's mind perfectly. I've never seen such a deep style before. If I didn't like the plot I might've read this solely because of your writing. I recognise your style, and I'm sure you've done other fills here?
Anyway, I'm begging you to continue this! Never Ballpoints is one of those fics that just stays on your mind. It truly captures you!
parts 57 - 76: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=49564825#t49564825
original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=43003612#t43003612
Let's assume we're at a prestigious private boarding all-boys high school ( ... )
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(Oh god, and the dorm scene unravels. *shudders* Your writing is as cutting as always. <3)
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I wasn't here when it first started up because I wasn't part of the fandom then, but this is without a doubt the best fic I've ever read here, and I've been speedily making my way through as many as possible.
The prose, aaaah, it's gorgeous, I envy your writing. Alfred's thoughts are so fucking twisted but they're believable, Arthur's emotions are evident and they make me feel so sorry for him, and by God you've heard this all before because you know just how great this is and how real the Universe you've created feels.
Nothing I could possibly say is enough to give this fill justice and it won't be any different from what all the other anons have said- I mean this as a compliment. There are no words to describe how excellent this whole fic is.
So, if you ever do update, I'll be the first to read again.
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Please please please update Authornon if you are still out there D:
p.s I get kinda creeped out when Arthur calls Alfred 'Mr. Jones' because that's my maths teacher's name and oh god I won't be able to look him in the eye tomorrow >.<
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PLEASE ANON!!!!
I'M AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT, I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
What will Alfred's corrupted make him do next?? And how will Arthur react?? I NEED TO KNOW!!!!
asidjakmsd PLEASEEEE
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I remember reading this last winter, and it had me completely hooked! Words can't describe the agony I felt when I realised it wasn't finished. I simply must know what'll happen next! I've checked this post every month (in the beginning every week), and I've never stopped hoping.
Your writing is wonderful, and you portray the chaotic feelings in Alfred's mind perfectly. I've never seen such a deep style before. If I didn't like the plot I might've read this solely because of your writing. I recognise your style, and I'm sure you've done other fills here?
Anyway, I'm begging you to continue this! Never Ballpoints is one of those fics that just stays on your mind. It truly captures you!
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